The Lifespansmith Starts with a Million Years of Life

There are too many clichéd plots about human nature; it's become a chronic problem. Reading it once or twice is somewhat interesting, but dedicating every few days to a long chapter about mindset, even knowing it's meant to show the protagonist's change of heart, really breaks the immersion and becomes pointless.

I wonder if anyone has paid attention to murder mystery games. Someone on Bilibili revealed that the number of murder mystery game stores nationwide more than doubled last year. At the same time, due to the impact of the pandemic, many screenwriters and online novelists have entered this field.

Good grief, Lao Wu, your first three chapters are absolutely awful! If you can't write humor, don't write it at all. The dialogue with the cat was so cringeworthy. Honestly, if it weren't for your writing, I would have thrown it after one chapter. How are you going to attract new readers? Are you planning to shut it down again? Hurry up and revise it! 😅

I really like this author's books, and I support anything written by this author!

Well, Lao Wu really likes to talk about detailed settings. I suggest that these things be written separately as an "Appendix • Setting Collection/Announcement," like the commercials added during the intermission of anime, appended to the end of each chapter.

I just hope the author doesn't make the protagonist's life so full of ups and downs.

Honestly, I don't know why the author's writing is so strange. When it's supposed to be satisfying, it's not satisfying. And when it's supposed to be angsty, it's not angsty enough. It feels half-hearted. Then there's a ton of psychological analysis—are we here to see an ordinary person's mental transformation? We're here for a story, not a person.

The author is still the same as always, spouting a bunch of grand principles, reflections, and insights in the book, but the protagonist remains exactly the same. It's like taking the first bite of shit, realizing it stinks, feeling a pang of remorse, and then continuing to eat it with great relish.

Congratulations on signing the contract! 😎

I've also read this author's book, Infinite Wanderer, the Harry Potter one. I feel like he always has this air of wanting to educate and nurture people, as if he can't function without writing about human nature. I find it very strange. Is it that the policies of a moderately prosperous society cannot satisfy you, or that the communist glory of the working class and peasantry cannot reach you? I just want to enjoy reading a novel, why should I have to discuss human nature with you?