The Lifespansmith Starts with a Million Years of Life

There are too many clichés about human nature. This is an old cat disease. It's interesting to watch once or twice occasionally, but every now and then a big chapter is opened to talk about the mentality. I know it's to reflect the protagonist's change of mind, but it's really boring in real life. The main character's change of mentality in Gu Long Jin Yong consists of a few storylines, click on a few sentences, and leave the rest blank for people to figure out. Reading a book is not about chewing the author into pieces. Reading a book makes it enjoyable and lasts a long time if there is a plot that can be understood. However, the author's plot writing has always been first-class. It's not that I'm blaming for perfection, but it's a pity to see some flaws.

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Good guy, Lao Wu, your golden chapter 3 is written like shit. If you don't know how to write a spoof, don't write it. The conversation with the cat was so embarrassing. To be honest, if you hadn't written the book, I would have just thrown it away after reading one chapter. How can you attract new people to read it? Do you want to kill it again? Please change it quickly 😅

I like the author's books very much, and I support them as long as they are written by the author! ! !

What should I say? Lao Wu particularly likes to talk about detailed settings. I suggest that these things be taken out separately and written as an "Appendix·Setting Collection/Announcement Book", which is attached to the end of each chapter like an advertisement in the animation interlude. Otherwise, it would be almost a chapter to talk about the cultivation process. The story itself does not advance much, resulting in no detailed description of the story. In fact, sometimes readers have no feeling about the cultivation system and the Five Elements and Bagua. Yes, just skip it and wait until you meet the need. For example, if the enemy uses some soul-targeting magical power to kill everyone, and then it has no effect on the protagonist, when the enemy shouts "Nani???", Explain that it is because the time traveler has absorbed the soul of the host, and the physical bloodline is also a mirage, which has a soul bonus. In addition, he majors in soul skills, so he is immune to soul attacks below immortals. This is more natural. Another one, I personally suggest that you read The Super Mechanic and refer to the daily descriptions of Leather Armor (how bad it is). Even if it is just nonsense and chatting, the whole job cannot be funny. The first few chapters of this book are a bit deliberately funny. In fact, it is not necessary. Your specialty has always been telling stories, and it is okay to make a joke out of the blue. It's really useful to read more book reviews and understand readers' opinions on novels. It's like doing business if you don't understand the market demand. I have already published two new books in a row, so I need to work hard on this one.

I just hope the author doesn't make the protagonist too ups and downs.

To be honest, I don't know why the author's writing is very strange. He wants to be happy but he is not happy. If you want to torture him, he is not cruel enough, it just feels like he is half-baked, and then there is a lot of psychological analysis. Are we here to see the mentality change of an ordinary person? We see stories, not people

This author is still like that. There are a lot of great principles, reflections, and insights written by himself in the book, but the protagonist still behaves as he should. It's like taking the first bite of Xiang, realizing that Xiang is smelly, regretting it, and then continuing to eat happily.

Congratulations on signing the contract 😎

I've also read this guy's book, which is Infinite Wandering, the Harry Potter book. I feel like this guy always seems to want to teach and educate people, as if he can't do it without writing about human nature. I am very surprised that the policies of a moderately prosperous society cannot satisfy you, or that the glory of communism of the working and peasant class cannot shine on you. I just hope it will be fun to write a novel, so why do I need to discuss human nature with you?