Spirit Martial: The Only Immortal

To be honest, you just can't help but give up the book every time when you give me chicken soup... The outlook on life, like the headshot wizard in the Squid novel, is very time-sensitive, and every period, every region, every class, and every person's contact is very different. This whole article is mainly about filling the air with chicken soup, or showing a sense of superiority in the outlook on life, and even showing that the outlook on life is still middle-aged and greasy... How many people are really on the airwaves? Is it really satisfying?

There are settings, people, and stories. But why does the author like to break the fourth wall? The protagonist's color is mixed with the author's color, and the plot is reflected with the author's ideas. Reminds me of what the author said when I read a magazine a long time ago A lot of God's perspective, preaching that has nothing to do with the plot And the author directly said the content that should be shown through the plot and the performance of the characters directly in narration. Can't understand

The first chapter directly breaks the reader's sense of immersion. What seems to be a beautiful pretense is actually baffling. Raising the upper limit of the power of the book actually damages the life of the book. Originally, going directly to the second page might have attracted me to continue reading. However, starting from the first page and getting to the main topic of the second page, I felt inexplicably irritated and unable to read normally.

You can use the protagonist's mouth to express your knowledge of the world in a fragmented but continuous way to promote the development of the plot. Try not to use long self-brainstorming paragraphs to explain your attitudes and ideas, which is harmful rather than helpful. I have followed all your books, and this is the only thing that has prevented your work from reaching a wider audience. You said that your works also select people. You said that your living conditions were very bad. When reality and ideals conflicted, my master's words are for you: Make money, don't be greedy. When you improve your material needs one day and pursue spiritual civilization again, maybe I can even give you a message to never forget your original intention. Come on, Lao Wu

I have always liked Lao Wu's works, the extraordinary system and worldview that are as exquisite and logically rigorous as obsessive-compulsive disorder. I don't care about others. Anyway, I like you to change the map, and I think changing the map is a very normal and wise choice. Why don't you scold the fairy novel Ascension? As for bringing in private goods, brother! The book itself embodies the author's three views. You may not like or agree with it, but it is too much to criticize an author for not writing well in this respect. Anyway, I am just bragging, so come on!

There's really no need for a beginning chapter, it's better to slowly unfold the world.

This protagonist cannot be replaced, and the sense of superiority overflows the screen.

Lao Wu has finally been able to wrap up all the timelines. He has made great progress. It is possible that it should not be so scattered. To put it bluntly, we read the book quickly to relax our brains. What you wrote is a little more complicated. In addition, the book is serialized. When you read the back, you forget the front, and the more you read, the more confusing it becomes. I wish the author will become a god soon

It was updated so violently so early, why did it become so popular? There is also the problem of private goods. It's not that you can't add them, but it's annoying to add too many. During the intense update, you don't have time to include too many private goods, so the effect is just right.

It's pretty good-looking. The closer you get to the back, the more comfortable it becomes.