Spirit Martial: The Only Immortal

Honestly, Lao Wu, you just can't help but spout platitudes. Every time you do, I just can't help but drop the book when you're spouting those platitudes... A philosophy of life is like the head-exploding wizard in the Squid novel; it has a very high time sensitivity, and it varies greatly depending on the era, region, class, and individual.

It has a setting, character settings, and a story. But why does the author like to break the fourth wall? The protagonist's colors blend with the author's colors, and the plot reflects the author's ideas together. It reminds me of something an author said in a magazine a long time ago. Numerous God-like perspectives and didacticisms unrelated to the plot

The very first chapter shatters the reader's immersion; what seems like a clever display of power is ultimately baffling and raises the book's power ceiling while shortening its lifespan. While jumping straight into the second chapter might have drawn me in, from the first chapter onwards, once the second chapter got to the main point, I felt inexplicably annoyed and completely unable to connect with the story.

You can use the protagonist to express your fragmented but coherent understanding of the world, thus driving the plot forward. Try to avoid using long, self-contained brainstorming sessions to explain your attitudes and thoughts; it's more harmful than helpful. Having followed all your books, this is the only thing hindering your work from reaching a wider audience.

I've always loved Lao Wu's works. His obsessive-compulsive attention to detail and rigorous logic create an extraordinary system and worldview. I don't care about others, but I really like your changing the map. In fact, I think changing the map is a normal and wise choice. Why don't you criticize other fantasy novels about ascension? As for those who say it's biased, dude!

There's really no need for the first chapter; it's better to gradually unfold the world.

I can't relate to this protagonist; his sense of superiority is overflowing from the screen.

Old Wu has finally managed to bring all the timelines together; that's a huge improvement. Perhaps it's better not to break it down so much. To put it bluntly, we read books to relax our minds. If your writing is slightly complex, especially since it's a serialized book, we'll forget what we read earlier and it'll get increasingly confusing. Wishing the author a speedy path to becoming a master!

If we had updated this aggressively earlier, we wouldn't have flopped. There's also the issue of personal content. It's not that we can't add it, but adding too much is incredibly annoying. When we're updating aggressively, we don't have time to add too much personal content, and the effect is just right.

It's quite good; it gets more enjoyable to watch as it progresses.