Being a Tycoon in Swallowed Star Is Really Hard

The book started off well, until the author suddenly indulged in a pretentious, overly sentimental spiel. Then, out of nowhere, a character named Zhang San appeared and started showing off in front of the Chaos City Lord. After that, I stopped reading.

The first ten chapters already drove me away, seriously? All they do is complain about the system. Can't they write anything else?

The reason why soul slaves cannot be resurrected is that if they are not freed from soul slavery and are ordered to commit suicide by their master before being resurrected, they will commit suicide again immediately. This is the reason why they cannot be resurrected. Ultimately, it's not that resurrection is impossible, but rather that resurrection would lead to death.

The author's self-indulgent, sarcastic humor is actually quite verbose and increasingly annoying to read.

This isn't a rant, it's a rant. Your anti-piracy measures are a real pain. Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform) has anti-piracy measures? Who are you trying to prevent them from reading? It's all automatic subscription; are we paying to see your anti-piracy chapters? While I understand your good intentions, readers can't accept it.

The author actually chose the Zerg Queen as the female lead? Does the author know that the Zerg and the Humans are mortal enemies?

This cheat code clearly has great potential, but the protagonist always feels it's useless. 😅

Your arrogance is a bit excessive... Aside from claiming you perceive things about the dark universe through a system, you treat everyone else from the primordial universe like idiots, spouting theories about faith and divine kingdoms. Wait until you can provide a coherent logical explanation later.

After looking at a few pictures, is this the narcissism of a lunatic or the monologue of a delusional teenager? This isn't poison, it's practically feeding people shit!

It's too tiring to read; there's too much rambling and internal monologue. Writing like this is likely to discourage readers from finishing the first chapter. I specifically dedicated a chapter to this post after subscribing.