The Martial Artist's Path to Heaven

I don't understand the modification of the exercises. Why? Others created it through countless experiments, and you just changed it so easily? I can't accept it, and I feel like I have too much ambition and too little power. You are just a little shrimp trying to change the way of a giant beast. No way.

I have read so many Star Swallowing Sky fanfics, and yours is the most comfortable.

The writing is very good and very appetizing. I hope the author will not give up and continue to work hard. I have invested and added more.

The reason for not participating in the genius war is too far-fetched. The virtual universe seems to only recognize souls, regardless of your appearance and whether you have sea awareness. Also, you are afraid of being discovered as not a human being and running away. If you really find a genius who is not a human being, how can you run away as a star? Also, don't keep emphasizing the crime of having a treasure (end of rant)

If you want to write your own thing, then don't overlap with Luo Feng, who is also a body-snatching golden-horned beast, and one with the protagonist. You can simply write that you took this opportunity, or you can't take it. Or maybe it could be written about the earth getting its own opportunities. It's like a fanfic can't be written without skipping over the Golden Horned Behemoth. Moreover, the Lord of Chaos City also said that the golden-horned behemoth that seizes the body is only an upper-class adventure. It is enough to seize the body of a cosmic super life that has not yet been successfully conceived.

It was okay in the early stage, but in the later stage, the Tao Universe felt inexplicable. The various levels of elite evaluation made me feel that it was very weird and inconsistent with the original work.

The standard of stellar elites is too high and inconsistent with the original work. The special elites of the small Black Dragon Mountain branch actually have to dabble in the law for the first time. The law has become a big deal. In the original work, the peak genius battle, only the top one thousand in Ganwu Universe Kingdom can participate in the finals of all mankind. There are even those who have not understood the law in the ninth level of the field ranked lower among the thousand. The entire Ganwu Universe Kingdom has 103,000 star sectors. Black Dragon Mountain Just one of them. According to your standards, even if the Black Dragon Mountain branch only has a few geniuses who understand the law, the number of star-level geniuses who have understood the law in the entire Qianwu Universe Kingdom is hundreds of thousands, which is comparable to the star-level geniuses of all mankind in the original work. In the original work, except for Nabini, who represents the Black Dragon Mountain Empire on Earth, he did not even pass the preliminaries. His performance is not as good as Hong's, and his strength is only at the sixth or seventh level in the field.

Living planets are worthless in the Devouring Starry Sky. You can get as many as you want. There are not many planets directly under the Black Dragon Mountain branch. Territory Lord Ming Li, a small middle-level leader of the branch, Luo Feng sold him weapons from the middle realm and directly transferred tens of thousands of living planets to Luo Feng. He must have more than these. The small Silver Blue Empire directly rewarded the Milky Way to Luo Feng. There are hundreds of thousands of living planets. The Virtual Universe Company branch will lack planets. The Black Dragon Mountain Empire is the strongest force.

The abusive owner is mentally retarded, oh, let's try again!

This clone made me, who has obsessive-compulsive disorder, give up reading! Bye👋