From Azkaban to Hogwarts

Love this article! The starting point of Azkaban is novel! Being a professor is also very interesting. It is very interesting to teach well and be a normal professor and watch students suffer. Instead of being a sleazy professor who only stalks female students (~_~;) As a Harry Potter fan, the protagonist maintains a normal attitude towards the people in the original novels - there is no hidden malice and impolite behavior out of disgust for the other party when the other party has not done anything, no inexplicable targeting, and no inexplicable admiration for Hermione (some books can be said to be coveted). "It's normal", this is the reason why I am willing to follow the article. Due to the protagonist's setting, the protagonist's behavior is very reasonable, and he is a serious novice professor. There is no plot that somehow fits the original work, you are just living your own life, and the professor's daily life is very interesting! The protagonist is like a little squirrel, busy hoarding various cards, stuffing skills into his mouth and making his cheeks bulging to cope with the unknown severe winter and biting wind. The author's writing is also very good, above the passing mark, and sometimes very humorous, making it enjoyable to read. With the above advantages, other areas that can be improved are no longer a problem! So I hope the author can maintain his standards and keep writing and finish it!

As an original author (?), I like this article very much. I feel it is a very orthodox HP fanfic, but it does not copy and paste the original plot. I feel that the biggest characteristic of the author and this article is that he is serious. The slow update is actually because of his seriousness, which makes him feel dissatisfied. It can be seen in many places that the author has carefully studied the original work and has read Pottermore. In fact, every time I read HP fan fiction and read about buying wands, I was terrified because I was afraid that I would see a colorful crystal wand and then, with lightning and thunder, a Chinese dragon that would turn 720 degrees and perfectly enter the water would pop out. This article takes the wand very seriously, and even put away the previous wand, which made the original author shed tears. The author's sense of humor is also very good. So far, I haven't found any very vulgar jokes. He is very British in his way of twisting and hurting people. In fact, I don't think the scene about stewed round-faced fat chicken in other articles is very advanced. I don't know if some HP fan authors and readers have read the original Harry Potter books, because when I read the original books myself, I could feel the depth of the relationship between Harry and the owl. When Hedwig died, I really felt that Harry's childhood and mine were over, and I was very sad. When I saw the owl being eaten, I felt that at least the sad me as a child was not being respected. Speaking of respect, we have to talk about the treatment of Lockhart in this article. All HP readers know that Lockhart is a clown, and when readers become authors, they will unconsciously let the protagonist bring out a little ridicule of him. This article is different. The author pays great attention to the information gap between the protagonist and the reader. The protagonist in the story even respects and admires Lockhart (who he knows), which is very eye-catching. I can see the respect and humility in the protagonist's character reflected in his behavior - this cannot be expressed by some careless fan writing the word "humility". Anyway, I really like this article. I also believe that such a serious author will write better and better.

If someone asked me "Is this novel good?" I would say yes. But if you ask me "Is the plot good or not?" I would say it needs to be improved. 200 chapters are still in the plot of Harry's second grade. According to the speed of a 200-chapter movie, it will not take more than 1,200 chapters to finish Harry's seven-part series? Of course, I know that the rest of it will go by faster and faster, but doesn't it make the ending appear hasty compared with the previous one? The college part of these 200 chapters gave me a very subtle feeling. After reading Chapter 10, there is no or very little advancement in the main plot, and the protagonist's strength has not changed significantly, but the description from the teacher's perspective is very interesting and makes people want to see more. Generally speaking, the water is very interesting. This won't last long because it takes too long. After "Harry", there are elements such as the dementors entering the school, the Whomping Willow, the Goblet of Fire, and the wizard war. There are so many more elements that could be written, but the author stopped at the step of looking for the basilisk. A work must be relaxed and relaxed. This relaxed degree does not mean that I describe a class on Monday, then briefly write in the middle, and immediately jump to going shopping on Sunday. Zhang Chi Youdu refers to the key points that play an important role in character creation or plot development, and other things are abbreviated. To put it simply, each key plot is written as a "point", and the points are connected by daily "lines". The author now draws the "point" of the basilisk into a "line" to write, and because the line drawn from this "point" is not "long" enough, he uses daily life to make up for it. But writing in this way not only tests the author's skill, but also tests the reader's patience and aesthetic fatigue. Judging from the current stage, the author's skills are indeed good, and his daily writing is interesting. But personally, I may not want to spend money to subscribe to each chapter now. I may look at the title and subscribe if I see something interesting. Why am I like this? It's because I can't see the end, I can't see the end of this plot, so I don't want to spend money on daily life that is not progressing. I would like to make some suggestions. If the plot is slow, you should update it quickly. Otherwise, readers will leave before they can wait for the climax of your writing. With the current pace, your updates should be very fast. It is too slow. Or you can set some obvious small goals for the plot to make it "interesting" for readers. For example, let the protagonist learn a magic spell in each time period, and then use various small events to show that the protagonist uses this magic spell more and more powerfully. Otherwise, it's just a matter of writing in a dotted line that returns to the normal rhythm. Anyway, there are many ways, I hope the author can think about it carefully.

After reading it until now, let me talk about the people this book is suitable for. First of all, if you just can't stand it for a while, just put it away. The overall rhythm of this book is easy plus daily life. The occasional big events are relatively daily in other HP books. , This book is probably more suitable for people who are interested in easy daily life and care about details. Most of the details in this book are handled very well. Except for some things about golden fingers and the early stage that may be confusing, it is still very suitable for people who like this part. Besides, it may not be suitable for those who care about the heroine (referring to a determined single heroine or a harem party) and the exciting plot. It may be a bit generalizing, but generally speaking from experience, this book is different from ordinary HP fans. Its content is more like "about a professor at Hogwarts" It's not a "protagonist" that makes many people feel involved, well… Although there are definitely many people who disagree, I do feel this way, and the things surrounding it are not exciting or thrilling. Most of the time they are exams, students and specific plots in HP. As for the female protagonist, many HP fans regard Hermione as the female protagonist. There is a tendency, even if there is no more or less interaction written in the character column. After all, adventures around the protagonist group are also a plot that readers like very much (myself included). However, this book currently does not have many female protagonist tendencies. At present, it seems that there is not even a relatively ambiguous plot, and Hermione is in the main character. He seems to be a very good student, and the protagonist's attitude towards this (underage and adult love) can be seen from the article. Generally speaking, it is the scene between Black and Tonks, although strictly speaking, it is not the same. In short, the possibility of Hermione being the heroine in this series is even ranked behind Queen Chocolate. As for other aspects, the author's writing style is obviously improving step by step, and the description of events is becoming more and more proficient. You can definitely find this from the front. Some of the things that are not handled well are in the first half of the book. The description of the golden finger part is sometimes very confusing, but it becomes incomprehensible at the end. It has a dispensable sense of existence. If the plot is appropriately modified, it should be more comfortable to watch. Also, the plot lines in the early parts are sometimes very long, and even feel a bit dragging. This is a point of dissuasion for many people, but there has been obvious progress in the later stages, and the description of events in the later stages makes people feel quite comfortable. The supporting characters in this book include Gemini, Nancy and other students, as well as Moody and Professor Lu Ping, all of whom are well portrayed and written very well! It's a writing style that won't make people feel embarrassed when reading it. If you use a metaphor to describe this book, it is like a glass of refreshing lemonade. It does not have the taste and taste of carbonated drinks, but it is very suitable to drink a cup in your spare time. You will have a different feeling. If you feel it is sour, you can also pick off the lemon slices. White water with a light lemon fragrance is also a very suitable metaphor. This is the first time I write a long review. This is a HP fanfic that I like very much.

I think it's a good book. But there is always a sense of dissonance or something, that is, it feels like the protagonist has no short-term goals, and only knows that the long-term goal is Voldemort. (Or maybe there are too many things to do?) You can say that he is pushing the main storyline, and he is studying how to teach in class every day, and studying potions at the same time. He knows that Voldemort is about to be resurrected, but he still has no strength and no sense of urgency. He is still talking about this and that with his colleagues every day. I think the basic logic of the second-year volume of the Big Three is that you have to attend classes, and when you don't have classes, you get into trouble with your colleagues. Sometimes you practice potions and magic by the way, but they are not very good, and the golden finger is not very useful. The information related to the main plot of the original version is all known accidentally. I know that the protagonist does not know the original version very well, but I always feel that the writing seems to deliberately avoid the main plot of the original version, and then pull the protagonist in based on various small accidents. And now... This book does not have a female protagonist?

There are no shortcomings except that the update is too slow. There is no female protagonist, which is also a highlight. The author gives an expanded magical world instead of being limited to the original story line. The most amazing thing is that from the perspective of a professor, it is not just Harry, but all the students. Whenever I see the interaction between William and the students, I will sigh, how great it would be to have such a teacher when I was studying. To put it simply, the character is brought to life, not flat, but flesh and blood, three-dimensional, vivid and human. Finally, I hope the author can maintain the quality and quantity, and I am already hungry for tickets.

How should I put it? I feel that this chapter is actually quite clever, or that the author arranged it quite cleverly. Our protagonist teaches students in the fifth, sixth and seventh grade. For them, compared with those children in lower grades, they can already have their own views on things, and they also have their own resistance to rumors. I think the students will definitely try to retain William. Why? Because he can take monthly exams? No, no, no, that would be too much money. In view of the seriousness of William's students, what kind of professor is he? Powerful and intelligent (killing a basilisk with ease), responsible, humorous in teaching (67 years old), takes his students seriously (future seminar), and can give a cool performance from time to time (climbing a building with a rope or something), and finally The key thing is that he is young and almost belongs to their peers. For such a professor, the students' greatest feelings are definitely love and respect. For these young wizards who are entering the rebellious period but are knowledgeable: So what if Professor William is from Azkaban? Our professor is handsome and cool, and adding a little darkness seems even cooler! No one can refuse darkness. Jpg I really hope that students will retain our little professor out of emotion rather than fear of some messy teacher. I believe the author can write it well and not follow any cliché, just like a little professor: serious and responsible, handsome and cool.

This should be the best HP fanfic I have seen in a while. The setting of the professor is simply perfect for me. It is innovative based on Rowling's work and depicts a magical world that looks particularly real. The various battle scenes are gorgeous but not divorced from reality. A work of conscience.

Handsome young man Snape

Personally, I feel that this book is one of the best among the Harry Potter fics I have ever read. However, the update is too slow. There is only one chapter per day. Several times I was asked to add more chapters but ended up saying it again (an extra chapter will be added during the day tomorrow). (Which time zone are you in, author?)

Overall, it is a heartwarming and funny story. The plot is more daily, and there is no traditional cool plot. If you like it, you will like it very much. After reading it so many times, I feel that most of the plots are reasonable and can withstand scrutiny. The plots are actually quite full every year (there are plots and main lines, and the main lines have changed a lot). It is very thoughtful. In addition, I really like William's character - maybe because the protagonist is not omniscient about the plot, so the protagonist will not behave in a way that seems arrogant to me - in my opinion, William is a modest and prudent normal person, with normal views in the public sense, and is a qualified teacher. In fact, I have almost memorized the plot, but as a novel to kill time, even if I have basically memorized the plot, I still think it is quite interesting (the kind that makes you laugh suddenly) ✊

It was recommended that I read it in one sitting, and it was quite enjoyable to read. It has a long-lasting daily style. It did not deliberately write a large part of the original plot, but started from the perspective of the protagonist "Prisoner of Azkaban", all the way to Professor William. The story reads very smoothly, and it is not an exaggeration to have a golden finger. Moreover, William himself has indeed learned a lot of skills on his own, and has also prepared many special examination papers for the majority of students - it is really a clever combination of Chinese and Western. After all, how can there be no mock exams in the school? Especially graduation season! (Tremor) I originally thought Azkaban was just a gimmick, but William later really used the knowledge he learned in Azkaban... Ahem! A male protagonist who is not greedy and has his own beliefs. He is caring and patient with his students, and friendly to his colleagues. There are a few small complaints from memories in his interactions with the original characters, but he is not "black" or "bragging". William is living his own little life at Hogwarts. Although there was a curse on me, Duhe... Resolved it peacefully! At present, it seems that William is a very careful and cautious person. Although he occasionally battles with the air, hahahahaha, it is still interesting enough! I have been studying black magic for a long time, but I was affected a little bit and then I came back. My mood was debuffed on a rainy day. I was irritable and depressed and slumped in the dormitory. These small weaknesses became more vivid hhhh I guess in the eyes of colleagues and friends, William is a very reliable, serious and competent teacher. The professor, in the eyes of the students, is a teacher who allows them to learn a lot of knowledge and have fun (especially the sixth and seventh graders, and the fifth graders who wear masks of pain) but has a lot of homework and loves to hate. In the eyes of the savior, he is a terrible and powerful professor who saved him... In short, William, you still have to keep working hard! Point to the paper

William's daily routine before is above mine. Unfathomable! So scary! ! ! [after] That's it, that's it? I think you are looking down on me. Of course a weak wizard like me will rack his brains to find weaknesses when faced with a master like you, and after being fully prepared, he will kill you with one blow before you can react - isn't this normal? Great! Even a coward like me can catch hope as long as he works hard enough! [Onlookers] were trembling. Dare not speak.

It was the first time I read this book. I couldn't stand the first few chapters and thought it was just another cliche story, so I didn't continue reading. Recently, I was short of books and wanted to read Harry Potter fan fiction, so I read the first few chapters and the more I read, the happier I became. However, the author lives up to his name.

Really, I was immediately overwhelmed. When I first started reading, it was about 70 chapters, and I finished reading it in a short time. I thought this book was very well written, so I just left it here without reading the comments section carefully. Then I had something to do, so I didn't read the novel for a long time. Yesterday, when I had some free time, I started reading novels. I read all the novels in my hometown. The rest have almost a hundred chapters, and this one has about forty chapters. I originally thought that there would be more updates when it was released... The setting is relatively novel, including the follow-up content, and it is not worthy of its name. It is a very recommended book. In addition to the update speed I mentioned above, really, the author should hone it. This update speed is really hard to describe, and it makes me unable to describe it. Live, it smells sweet. All in all, except for the small flaws in the depiction of a small part of the emotional line, and the speed of updating, this book is generally of the highest quality among the works I have read recently, and it is not only good-looking but not popular After complaining about the author's update speed, I want to complain again. The starting point is now true. This recommendation position really makes me speechless. The King of Glory is really recommended very conspicuously, and the editor strongly recommended it,,, it really is. . .

It's very interesting, really very interesting. There's no OOC or smearing of the original characters. The villains are dealt with very well. The more you read later, the more you think the protagonist is awesome. The self-defense office jokes are really funny. The Horcruxes described in the book are really good. I really feel sorry for Harry in the original books 5, 6 and 7. It's a very good book.

The book friend value finally reached 3,000, and the group was full... Tears.

There are too many psychological descriptions, it makes me feel irritated.

I can't be the only one who is annoying😏😏😏

I just like it, William can handle it.

5.5 Three brushes ended. It's very interesting. As an ordinary reader who has read dozens of hp fanfics, reading the latest chapter shows that the author has put his heart into it. ps: I don't know if you are interested in the extra plot about William going out during the students' vacation. I would like to watch it.

How should I put it, as a reader who doesn't know how to reward, I had the idea of ​​​​rewarding for the first time. The reason is that the author is stuck... Maybe it's better to say this. I am very eager to know what William, who doesn't know much about this world, will do after traveling to the HP world? You can't find more traces of the original work here, but there is always no problem with the timeline. Perhaps those who have run through the Infinite Horror Group will have a better understanding? After all, although Kp knows the plot, what does your plot in Hogwarts Castle have to do with us going to the Forbidden Forest to hunt unicorns? It can be said that what attracts me most about this book is not only that I am picky about everything I read recently, but also the original and original plot. I sincerely hope that the author will not be stuck in writing and the writing will flow out like a fountain. ps: I really want to know how Ginny/Tom got the crown. After all, judging by the time period, the crown should be at the back of the diary. Personal knowledge, because I haven't read the official design, I just read 1 to 6.

I have finished reading 463 chapters so far, and the reading time is 1363 minutes This is a relatively unique HP fanfic, and it is generally well written. The early content is a bit bland and boring, but after entering the main story, I feel great. Disadvantages: First of all, it is too unique in the early stage, which will dissuade many people. Secondly, the system has been eaten by the author when I see it later. I hope there will be drama in the future. Finally, this is the biggest shortcoming. This author has too little, and it is not enough to watch.

I feel that this book is really well written. There is no weird attitude towards Hermione in other books. It treats the three protagonists normally. There is no persecution delusion. Every day, I think about Dumbledore and Snape going to Legilimency. They are not so free and they are not natural telepathizers. Besides, instead of being wary of Dumbledore, why not be wary of Voldemort? Dumbledore was evil when he was young, but he really changed his ways when he was old. Later, even Malfoy didn't do anything like him. It can even be said that he helped Malfoy.

"I have a dream" He looked at the OWLS transcript with all O's and the NEWTS transcript with all O's except for History of Magic, Herbalism, and Astronomy. He pondered for a long time, and resolutely submitted his resume to the hitter department under the curious eyes of others. "With your grades, why are you here if you don't want to be an Auror?" The old striker teased him while flipping through the information "I have a dream..." The old striker interrupted him impatiently, "Okay, okay, young man Everyone has dreams, but dreams cannot be eaten. You will work under me from now on, be smart." Now, he is a new striker, and he embarks on a journey to pursue his dreams "Be careful, these mice are alert, there are The slightest movement will make him discover us." The old striker was leading him to hide around the corner, preparing to hunt down a wizard who was selling banned potions "Iron Armor, Expelliarmus, fainting" He rushed forward and knocked him down instantly Criminal After a while, the old beater came out from around the corner and grabbed his ear. "Do you know that he has no accomplices or that his spellcasting level is low, so you dare to rush up like this? What will you do if you have an accomplice?! What will you do if you know black magic?!" The next day, the old hitter compiled the action report and submitted it to his boss. The boss flipped through the report and asked, "How is the new guy?" "He is a talented young man." Now, he is a talented hitter, and he is moving forward steadily on the road to pursuing his dream The old hitter handed him the communicator, and he looked at the old hitter with a puzzled look. "You have found the den, so you can take command yourself." He nodded, took the communicator, "Every unit is ready." "Ready, launch a general attack" Media reports: The day before yesterday, the striker broke into the production den of prohibited potions and followed the clues to remove the sales chain of prohibited potions. The leading striker was an outstanding graduate of Hogwarts. He obtained a good score of 90 in the NEWTS test. In this incident, he successfully locked the production den and made indelible contributions to the striker in eradicating the sales chain... Now, he is a genius striker, and he has taken another step towards his dream. Media reports: An outstanding graduate of Hogwarts recently pursued a cross-border pursuit and successfully captured the last escaped Death Eater. He was a gravedigger in the Death Eater era and another legendary striker after Professor Lupin... Then, the Ministry of Magic announced that he would be awarded the third-level Merlin Order. Now, he is a legendary hitter who is only one step away from his dream but doesn't know where to go. On the night when he received the Merlin Medal, he was drunk by his colleagues and then dragged out for a late-night snack by the old beater "Oh, legendary beater, haha, you, a top student, came to beat for this reputation, right?" Apparently the old beater also drank a lot "No" he replied drunkenly, "I joined the beaters to find someone" "Who are you looking for?" "A legend" "Legend? That's not you" "No! What I'm looking for is the hitman who caught Professor William back then" The old hitter woke up with a fright when he heard the alcohol. Back then, he was the one who raided the smuggling market and captured Professor William into Azkaban. He knew Professor William's current reputation, and he wanted to keep it all rotten in his stomach. "He must be a legend. How could it be an ordinary person who could catch Professor William?" His tone was full of admiration for Professor William "Why are you looking for him?" The old beater's tone was a little trembling. This is really panic "I want to worship him as my teacher. He can catch Professor William, and rounding things off I can catch Professor William too!" "Come on" the old batter patted him on the shoulder, got up and checked out and left The dream seemed to have come true when the batter entered at the beginning, but that's pretty good, isn't it

Every day I think about something and every night I dream, and there is everything in my dream *This specifically refers to the Dementor talking (｀∀´)

Why is Gugu so big. JPG

Anyway, I actually finished it today! ! Although I still haven't produced high-resolution pictures... And I can't write memes ()

Tell me a little bit about my feelings. What I like most about this book is the character of the protagonist. He is not twisted, hateful, or decisive. He treats people as human beings. The character of the protagonist is very well developed. He is kind but not a virgin, scheming but has a bottom line, capable but not ruthless. He is a very good teacher. For a children's book like Harry Potter, the character of the protagonist as a teacher is really just right. Not annoying but a little cute. It would not be embarrassing to refer to Little William directly in the book review.

I saw an inspiration mentioned in this chapter, but I didn't draw that feeling at all. I overestimated myself_(´ཀ`‖ ∠)__ Also, I didn't realize until after I finished painting that the walls of the castle are not just 250cm thick like ordinary brick walls. It should have a very big bay window...