Refining the Dao, Ascending to Immortality

I read eight or nine chapters. The writing is okay, but the plot is terrible, making for a frustrating read. The protagonist is inexplicably suppressed by a teenage supporting character right from the start. Are all the adults in his family dead? Are they all short-sighted? The Dharma assembly isn't just recruiting one person from the Zhou family; why suppress a member of the clan?

It's so baffling! With such great talent, why are they fighting within their families? They wrote dozens of chapters about attending a Dharma assembly, but they didn't clearly explain any restrictions or limitations. It's like two delusional teenagers are playing mind games and scheming.

After reading the free chapters and table of contents, is the main character a vibrator, going around vibrating other people?

The author of this book has a criminal record; he previously used a secondary account to write fanfiction about the Great Dao Contest. Many chapters were simply copied and pasted, and most importantly, the book was ultimately abandoned and taken off the shelves. I've read about 70% of this book, and there's a lot of meaningless fluff. So, everyone, please be careful!

The Golden Finger's Creation Pool is a perfect embodiment of the Yin-Yang Dao and the Five Elements Dao. Even if you don't choose the True One Sect, you shouldn't choose some insignificant Sword Sect. Why pick up a sesame seed to quench your thirst instead of a watermelon?

Is it fun? I like crazy water play, so I'll skip the cap!

It's dried hay. It's not that it's inedible, it's just a bit harsh on the throat. It's an old-fashioned, pretentious writing style, but the combination of time travel and rebirth with the previous plot is a bit disgusting 🤢. After all, think about it, you must have been seventeen or twenty years old before time travel, and then experienced at least twenty or thirty years of life before being…

I really don't understand the author. I really liked "Pure Yang Dao" and "Reborn in a Mythical World," although they had occasional filler and a few plot holes, the overall writing was delicate and the plots were quite engaging. I felt they were among the best classical fantasy novels I've read in recent years. Why did this book suddenly become so padded?

Are you doing this on purpose? Are you filtering your readers? Do you think what you write is right, the best, and that readers don't care? Wow, seriously! Anyone reading your novel is just being pathetic. Keep it up, strive to write something second to none, you absolutely must be second to none!

The author relies heavily on ornate language and superficial plot development. The protagonist's strength is not properly established; the scenes of joining a sect and competing for its true teachings are glossed over without any solid, step-by-step progression. His rapid advancement in power is laughable, especially the part at Qingyu Terrace. The supporting characters are more engaging. The protagonist lacks any presence and is utterly weak. Reading this book is like eating nothing at all.