Refining the Dao, Ascending to Immortality

After reading eight or nine chapters, I found the writing to be okay, but the plot to be weak and frustrating. The protagonist is inexplicably suppressed by the teenage supporting character from the beginning, and all the adults in the family are dead? Are adults too short-sighted? When recruiting people for the Dharma Conference, don't we only recruit one person from the Zhou family? Isn't it necessary to suppress others from the same clan? Jealous of the virtuous and capable, Yingying's stubborn character conflicts with the achievements of the supporting characters mentioned in the article, and is incompatible with the entire world! Written in this way, the plot is only suitable for writing about historical settings of small families!

It's inexplicable to watch! With such good qualifications, why are you still competing within the family? I went to a Dharma conference and wrote dozens of chapters without explaining clearly what the restrictions were, so I just fought there. It looked like a two-for-one who was pretending to be a scheming bitch.

After reading the free chapters and table of contents, is the protagonist a vibrator? He vibrates others everywhere.

The author of this book has a criminal record. He used to have a trumpet account and wrote Dao Zheng Feng fan fiction. Then many chapters were directly copied and pasted. The most important thing is that the final book was immediately removed from the shelves. This book has seen 70%, and there are a lot of meaningless hydrology. So, please be careful!

The Golden Finger Creation Pond, the proper Yin-Yang Avenue and the Five Elements Avenue. Even if you don't choose the True Sect, you can't choose the Fool Sword Sect. Instead of picking up sesame seeds to quench your thirst for watermelon?

Is it fun? If you like crazy water, the upper limit is waived!

Save money and make hay. It's not that I can't eat it, it's just that it's a bit choking. The pretentious writing style of a long time ago, but the setting of time travel and rebirth combined with the previous plot is a bit disgusting 🤢. After all, you think about it, you were seventeen or twenty years old before time travel, and after time travel, you experienced at least twenty or thirty years of life before you were reborn (if you add some factors of cultivating immortals, it will be more than twenty or thirty years). After nearly a year and a half of experience, you are not at all good-hearted, and you are still talking like a child. It has to be wordy, the routines generally have no highlights, and it is too awkward to show off to others, the writing is ➕1, the writing is average, and the resistance to poisoning is not high. I read a few chapters and couldn't finish it. I hope you fellow Taoists will do what you can, so as not to eat poison pills and die on the way. 🙄

I really don't understand the author. I like both Chunyang Avenue and Rebirth in the Mythical World. Although there are occasional mistakes and a few pitfalls, the overall writing style is delicate enough and the plot is quite attractive. I feel that it ranks among the classical fairy tale books I have read in recent years. What? I started to get crazy when I read this book (I read the Hydra book from the beginning, but it didn't appeal to me, so I didn't read it. I heard that it was a slut later). The first 100 chapters were pretty good, and then I started to get frustrated. At chapter 200, I comforted myself. The writing is still there, and I can still read it. After reading chapter 300, I became more and more angry, Che Luoluo. I can say this over and over a dozen times. A sect contributes merits. It's the same sentence over and over again. The key is that it still doesn't reflect how precious and rare it is. The writing style is gone, and only water is left. A green pond of creation is such an awesome treasure that it will take you to be reborn twice. I'll give it to you. Turning it into a power bank can only replenish mana, and it is said repeatedly that it is awesome and has endless magical effects. However, if you say that a drop of good fortune can be converted into a lot of mana, it makes sense. You can transform it into almost the same amount... How high is the quality of the mana you cultivate? Is it directly equivalent to good fortune? There are so many people practicing the same skills as you, and the quality of their magic power is about the same, so how big is your pool? I really persisted until chapter 343 and couldn't stand it anymore. The good impression I had accumulated on you from the first two books was completely lost. Goodbye.

Did you do it on purpose? Filter readers? Do you feel that what you write is right and the best, and readers don't care? That's awesome. Really, whoever is reading your novel is really being stupid. Come on, try to write the best novel in the world. You must be the best in the world.

The author focuses on the gorgeous words and embellishments, but the actual plot is not foreshadowed. There is no foreshadowing of the protagonist's strength. The plot of worshiping the sect, competing for the true biography, etc. Is not one step at a time. It is just mentioned in one stroke. Soon the strength is greatly improved. I really laughed at Qingyutai. The supporting characters are not exciting. The protagonist has no momentum at all. He is very crotch-stretching. Reading a book is like eating food and eating air.