High-Tech Wonders Begin with a Liberal Arts Student

Come on, we've started school, and we're going to school six days a week. We can't read books, so I'll reward the cats with 100 points. I'm just a poor student with little money. If possible, please add some details?

If you write a story without a heroine, there will be no heroine. I don't understand that you write so many disgusting female supporting characters! Forget about Rong Shishi and Zhu Qian at the beginning, and Zhou Niang later. I vomited. I came to see the black technology, not to see the vicious female supporting role and the cowardly female student redeem themselves.

Come on, write, author, no heroine, I'll give you all my recommendation votes today.

I suggest that the author stop writing about conflicts. First, there are the cerebral palsy classmates Rong and Zhu, then there is the gangster schoolmate they met while staying in school during the vacation, then there is the female classmate who committed suicide, and then there is the disabled middle school righteous hacker... If these can promote the growth of the protagonist, forget it, but they are all branch plots, and they are still useless. Cutting them all has no impact on the book. Nowadays, the supporting character named Gu who is engaged in artificial intelligence is more useful. The absence of other characters will not affect it. It feels redundant. I know that the author wants to embellish the daily life, but this daily life is full of cerebral palsy conflicts and does not help the growth of the protagonist. It is better to write a casual daily branch line. I feel that the author's aesthetic of creating conflict is really poisonous, and he repeats it again and again. I'm convinced. I was quite interested in this book at first, but now I just feel speechless.

The setting of this book is very good, but I don't understand your question. Why do you insist on doing it in literature? Isn't it faster and better to study science? Why do you still have trouble with literature? What's the need? If you are new to writing novels, you should not be too toxic in the early stage. This will make it difficult to quickly increase the number of fans. I hope the author can correct these problems sooner. Change it now while it's still early, otherwise, this book may become useless.

At the beginning of the book, the protagonist explores the ability of Goldfinger and restrains his desire to play games, using learning to test the ability of the jar. And later the protagonist thinks about the consequences of losing Goldfinger and therefore has the motivation to move forward, which brings a deep sense of reality. It makes people think about what they would do if they got the golden finger. Will it be the same as what the protagonist does? What is the essence of Goldfinger? This is something that many novels do not clearly express or do not write about.                        I personally feel that the only shortcoming of this book is that the foreshadowing is a little long, but it is still a good book with great potential (๑>؂<๑) 👍👍👍               I wish you good luck and good luck, may the cat become a god (❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~

If you want to see the specific changes, start rewatching from 56. If you don't want to watch it again, just go to chapter 63, it's a new plot! Sorry, I accept your opinion. It's not a good idea to push up and change the plot, but I've been criticized so much these days that I'm almost autistic. I admit that it doesn't matter if that part of the plot is removed. I change! Also, it's okay to make suggestions in the future, but not human roosters. I've been crying watching it for days. I really accept all suggestions. But directly scolding me is too much. I almost cut it, but a senior author friend took it back and persuaded me to revise it. I changed it. I like this book very much and I want to finish it well. No personal attacks! ! ! Reiterate! As compensation… One hundred more chapters have been released.

This... I originally wanted to support it more, but I couldn't stand it anymore, so I had no choice but to put it from the "relief food" to the "don't want to read" book list 😥. Although readers should not randomly "teach" the author to write a book, I feel something is wrong now. There are probably the following problems: the main plot is too watery (still can't see it), too many branch plots (compared to the main plot), the adoptive father is poisonous (personal feeling:), and plug-ins (also It's water), there are too many tragic characters (Gu Shuwuyue, and the protagonist is a poor boy), the writing style is... (Just mediocre), and there is no plot (there must be a bright spot, right?) Maybe the author has a female perspective, and the coolness of the male video is not reflected very much (or can't be seen at all...), Of course this is just a small problem (if this is the only problem...) It took 300 tips for the full order to get an apprentice, and don't say I'm a free prostitute. I really don't want this book to sink. I've read the author's previous book, and it's quite relevant (but the part before the ending is not quite right). I was confused about the previous book because I saw that the author was only level one, so I wasn't sure if it was worth pursuing (don't scold me, don't scold me for being wrong 🥺)

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This realistic writing gives me a headache. Your focus is on the use of golden fingers, a touch of pretentiousness, not such a blunt reduction of the IQ of the supporting characters and forced creation of conflicts. I don't understand what your point is at all. .