Abnormal Paradise

The content of the novel is very attractive but the description of the glass of wine getting thicker is a bit...

I have read more than a dozen chapters. The book is really good and the writing is good. The protagonist is not wise and I haven't found any poisonous points yet.

When you read this kind of novel, you will have a kind of rebellious mentality. The protagonist always loses every time. Is this still a game? Why, just because you are the protagonist, you have to keep losing. The more you read, the more uncomfortable you become.

The rhythm at the beginning is very good, but the rush to set up the scene in the middle makes the fairy tale world plot far-fetched and unclear, and because the scene is too large, the protagonist's process of saving the fairy tale world is a bit unreasonable. I hope the author can grasp the rhythm well and not bury hidden dangers.

In fact, I have always had a lot of questions about 173's blink kill. For example, what will happen if Feitouman blinks at 173? Or what will happen if a creature with only one eyeball blinks at 173? What would happen if Two-Face blinked at him from the front and widened his eyes from the back? What would happen if a modified man with a bearing in his neck that could rotate 360 ​​degrees blinked at him? Also, it is said that you can avoid Blink Kill by leaning against the wall? So what are the requirements for this wall? Material? Thickness? Quality? What is the minimum length and width? If the requirements are low, can I be immune to 173 by tying an aluminum alloy plate to my back? 😏

It was actually an online game. I thought it was reality, but I instantly lost interest.

Thriller Paradise is a successful example. Although it was an online game in the early stage, who paid attention to it? These are all crazy operations that you can't even realize 😁

If fellow Taoists think there is something wrong with the writing, you can say it here or directly in the APP. The free part can be modified.

Why do most books nowadays require fans to comment? I'm speechless. It's so rare that this book doesn't.

It's a pity that it's an online game novel... If the labels are removed, the number of people can be doubled

Don't you want to find a way to recommend this product? There are too few people to see, and there may be no more people one day|･ω･｀)

The book is very nice and the author is very diligent. . At least I haven't stopped updating, and I'm chasing the investment.

It's a masterpiece from the Foundation at the beginning, but once I saw some senior players, I lost interest. Why do online games always have rich kids from guilds (don't criticize if you don't like it)

"Under the blue and white world, all absolute characteristics are abolished. I am the backup for all information in the entire interface. Any absolute characteristics can only exist in the blue and white world." "At this point, the natural returns to nature, and the absolute returns to absolute. This is the ultimate order."

The writing is pretty good, although the realistic plot is too cliché. Moreover, the portrayal of the female character called "The Glass of Wine Grows Deeper" is too stiff and cliche, but this book is still considered a good book. Come on, author!

Why is such a beautiful book not popular? . Actually, Qidian has recommended this book to me many times, but I have never clicked on it before. When I saw the name, I felt that it was similar to Samsara Paradise, and the introduction was not attractive. When I saw the few recommendation votes, it gave people the feeling of seeing a third-rate novel. I feel that the author could do more work, but the results of this book are far inferior to the quality of this book.

A good book is not popular. When will the ember be able to completely kidnap Miss Puppet? Although the cards have been shown, I still don't trust the Creator.

I just read Chapter 31, and I don't know why the author likes to highlight and bold the retarded behaviors of supporting characters and passers-by in a large paragraph. There is no need to write explanations of psychological activities and behaviors. If you skip it once, few people will get to the bottom of it. It's useless to write a lot and pretend not to see it.

This is actually Lobotomy Company, right? There are also abnormal equipment

The author gradually reduced the presence of a glass of wine in later copies, and the impression became much better. It is really unnecessary to insert a female character into a data flow novel. The protagonist's character is a bit strange, and the description of expressing his emotions in some places is not very good. The description of ridiculing and being proud of the opponent can be changed.

Suddenly I found that the way of judging this dice mode was too arbitrary and not as objective as the previous attribute suppression. You can write whatever you want in this card drawing mode, it all depends on the author's mood. It was boring to watch. The attribute suppression during the closed beta looked comfortable, but after the public beta, the writing was very arbitrary. The various judgments were really written how the author wanted to write. Some attributes were hugely crushed, and they were turned against the wind purely by writing in a certain way. It looked like luck, but in fact it was arranged. To put it bluntly, I think the points you drew are the ones you draw. Uninteresting.

The protagonist always wins, which is boring, I hope he loses

The author is the only one who has lived this book, and the other two seem to be eunuchs...

As the name suggests, the style background also has all kinds of weird and foreign objects. If you are interested, come and support it!

The ending is rushed, the plot in the middle feels a bit fragmented, and the foreshadowing is far-fetched But the previous chapters are well written, especially the part about first entering the wasteland.

Recommended to me countless times, come to test the poison today

Very good(✪▽✪)

This book is serious and good. Let's get another one like it.

The early writing was good, but the later writing was a bit messy.

It's a pity that it didn't go beyond the scope of online games, otherwise it would be more exciting