A Floating City from Scratch

Without a clear name, it is easy to persuade someone to quit.

Why does this book seem to be failing? Is anyone else watching? If you have favorites, please subscribe. It only costs a few cents. It is not easy for a human author to write a book.

Damn it, even a level 4 mage dares to get involved in things related to God. I'm really tired of living. This plot is about forcibly reducing intelligence and then forcing the protagonist to survive and obtain divinity. It's really poisonous!

I think this book is good. It can be seen that the author worked hard to write and construct the setting. But... There is something missing, some... Spirituality, and the characters in the author's works are like actors. Readers sit in the audience and watch them perform. Perhaps the feeling of running in a troupe had too much influence on the author. After all, running in a troupe is actually about shaping the characters and then bringing them into the performance. Details, adding some action details may be able to remove the showmanship.

Although the author describes the outlines of the world, I felt it was too stereotypical. First, while there are many races, they shouldn't all be segregated into different corners of the world. There should be a lot in between spaces. The Elven Empire shouldn't be the only place in the world where elves live. Just like humans are distributed on the earth, elves and other races should also be scattered in different places. The Empire can't be the only place where elves live. There should be multiple territories for each race. Elves from two different regions may be at war with each other. Just like the difference between Europeans, Asians, Africans. The world is a big place, and stories seem to be set in only a small part of a particular continent. PS: Please stop calling them high elves and wood elves, please give them their correct names. At least associate them with their country rather than their race. China does not represent all of Asia or all of humanity. No specific country should represent all specific races. Simply calling them wood elves or high elves is like calling black people niggas or Asians yellow-skinned monkeys.

In fact, I wish the author had depicted the Empire in a more sci-fi style. A civilization that is capable of interstellar travel will never be a low-level civilization. At least their scientific achievements should be comparable to Earth's. Even if they could use magic, nothing would stop them from pursuing normal science. In fact, science will advance regardless of the type of world they inhabit. Science is part of human nature, even if it is an arcane civilization, as long as they reach a certain level of education, they will develop science. I think they develop things like television, radio, the internet, video games. Wait, wait. Additionally, they have traveled to other worlds before. I guess they've also been to technologically advanced planets. It would be strange if normal science didn't develop properly. After all, science is the process of discovering truths about the world. The mage is a scientist. Finally, in order to develop high-level spells, certain scientific knowledge is required.

Think about why you write novels. I don't know why you wrote a novel, but I believe it's not to cater to a few idiots who don't even have basic humanity, right? There are indeed many heart-warming things in this unfortunate world, but what makes this world continue to be valuable is the flash of humanity in the ordinary lives of countless ordinary people, not the selfishness and hostility of a few idiots. That's it.

Why do I feel like I'm looking for this kind of novel, I'm looking for a copy of The Eunuch, and I'm looking for similar books.

Mainly because the lack of chapter names dissuaded me. . .

It takes a real elf to break into the empire to know what is going on. In the final analysis, although the humans in this world and the humans in the Arcane Empire are both called humans, there is actually no relationship. The protagonist blindly favors humans. It is foreseeable that humans will double enslave the elves after the rise of humans. This should not be the result that the protagonist wants. Moreover, the empire composed of great arcane masters is not called the Human Chauvin Empire, but was originally established by the great arcane masters of humans. The protagonist's purpose is to obtain resources and benefits, so a balanced strategy should be adopted.

I am now turning from pink to black. After all, it is a DND genre. No matter how messy and unreasonable the plot written by the author is, I think it is all because of the newbies. So I worked hard to write a review of more than 2,000 words based on my own thoughts, mentioning areas that could be improved. And I ordered the full amount directly at that time to show my support. But on a whim I discovered that my book review was missing?! I sent it, but it can only mean that someone deleted it. If the author deletes it, it only means that you are awesome! Just ask, are my suggestions pertinent? Have I ever personally attacked you? Or am I suspected of fraud and violence? Hehe→_→

Or about the great arcanist killing the gods? Killing all the believers is too simple. Let's not talk about whether the believers of a god are only in one plane. The impact of killing all the believers of the god in a plane, and whether it is possible to kill all the believers of the god. Let's talk about whether the god will be there waiting to die during the time you kill the believers? Knowing that you want to kill me, I have a hundred ways to escape and ten thousand ways to fight back. Anyway, I think the only way to kill God is to rely on sneak attacks. To put it bluntly, it means taking advantage of loopholes. God will react and exercise GM authority to kill you in minutes!

It turns out that the author is thirty years old, but I thought the author was only in his early twenties. The author imagined the world so beautifully. Not to mention the alternate world in the book. The protagonist travels to a foreign forest and walks for three months. After coming out, he casts spells like a novice. He also said he had fought against wild beasts. . You came out walking on the street, right? After more than three months of encountering many beasts and encountering many dangers, my brain has not yet converted. Humans and elves are hostile and have a feud. How confident are you that you, a half-elf, know the general relationship between the alien forces after meeting humans and go to a gathering place for humans without turning around and avoiding others? After three months of studying in the forest, I didn't even learn the basics of being a mage. . As humans and intelligent beings, we should be cautious in unfamiliar environments. How confident is it to touch the divinity? If others only use you, tell them how to sacrifice to the gods and then design the protagonist to die when you are weak, even if you don't die, the protagonist will not think about the gods waking up and regaining some strength and directly snatching you away. If the author hadn't forcibly cheated the protagonist and found his backer, he would have been dead. By the way, author, you should write urban novels so that the characters will be better. The protagonist in your book is not dead yet. I can only say that the author is great. It is the creator god of the protagonist's world who directly gave the protagonist a top-notch lucky halo. As far as the character of the protagonist is seen so far, he cannot get out of the forest according to the normal process. Even if you are a wretched person, you don't know how to take things for granted. If the author had the protagonist make him a demigod from the beginning of time travel, it would be more like such a thing.

After writing more than 200 chapters, the mage tower has not yet been built. If you train those lizardmen to mine underground, you will not have the resources. I run to the elves without much ability to protect myself. The standard process for exploring other worlds is not to build a base and prepare a retreat before going out.

Before you kill gods casually, AO will probably kill you first. Whether a large number of gods seek refuge in the abyss or a large number of gods die, AO will kill you first.

Did I raise another one to death?

I feel like the plot is a bit over-expanded... In the beginning, it was the journey of a three-ringed little mage to another world.... Suddenly it becomes the arcane empire conquering other worlds... Even the protagonist's sister is close to a legend, her combat power has expanded too fast...

In fact, I don't advocate that Gray Feather devour other demigods, whether they are aliens or not. This is similar to the Holy Mother. To put it bluntly, the reason is very simple. This is a cut-off of oneself, similar to Batman's statement (although he is too extreme). But the fact is that it is difficult for people who have taken shortcuts to compete fairly with others. Are people who have eaten intelligent creatures still far away from cannibalism? After devouring the delicacies of gaining strength and the shortcut to gaining divine power from the alien demigods, will she still stop? In the final analysis, the demigods that humans believe in or primitive beliefs are all animal spirits and magical creatures. At that time, I just said that human demigods are not human beings and took over.

Let the magic mechanical armor be equipped, so that it will not affect the success rate of arcane spells if it is not equipped by the mage, and it does not need to occupy additional arms, but the shield can block all kinds of damage on its own. It is also recommended to use spells to activate the black wood shield. According to DND, the cost is about 10,000 gold (make the copy yourself)

A fishing village becomes a multiverse empire again

To be honest, I rarely write reviews after reading books because I think it's a waste of time. But this book made me think that I should not write a book review again. There are really a lot of people in the book review area who are just looking for trouble and are full of food. First, scold the protagonist, the Virgin. This kind of thing makes me laugh. The reason why people are human is because they have feelings. The author does not care about people with such erroneous views. Secondly, spray the setting. The author said at the beginning that this is a second set! Second setting! Second setting! Do you understand Chinese? Want to know about the secondary settings? It's up to the author how he wants to write, so you want to be blind? Why do you say that DND and Warhammer fans can't accept it? I am also a DND and Warhammer fan. I enjoyed watching it very much. Do you want you to speak out on my behalf? Then there's the story of the protagonist being forced to become wiser. I think it's pretty good. This is the mentality of a normal person, okay? If I were the protagonist, I would also touch the divinity. All in all, the book is quite nice and I really like the author's writing style. I hope you, author, please keep up the good work! Ignore those haters and trolls, come on! I'm optimistic about you!

How did Xiaobei's method come out!

I'm wondering if the protagonist's father or mother (elf) has anything to do with this world.

Damn it, is it a eunuch? I just started watching it.

Please update! I have no interest in other dnd novels anymore

What, it's not a medieval warhammer? ! You disappoint me so much😏😏😏

It's so beautiful and it's not updated anymore?

This is another good book. Although I feel that the protagonist is a little bit bad and a good person, the protagonist is a growth protagonist and basically writes about the psychology of ordinary time travellers. Are all the big guys who write novels like this? The writing is smooth and the words are precise. Are you sure you are a newbie?

It is recommended to add a prologue to fill in the story before the time travel and the process and reasons for the time travel. There must be no shady story, just make it an accidental time travel.