An Immortal Tower Where the White Clouds Rise

I have read Chapter 124 so far, and have skimmed through the rest. Now I am hesitant to continue reading. Let me write a book review first and share my thoughts. It may be a bit much The author feels that he is very attentive to this work. I have the habit of reading chapter bubbles. , The author has responded to many chapters. When errors were pointed out, they were corrected immediately, including unreasonable ones. He interacted with readers and basically responded to comments The author's writing style is also very good, delicate and smooth, with beautiful and vivid descriptions of scenery and characters, and good use of words. It is relatively "white", easy to read, not too literate, and the daily scenes make me feel that it is very well written. It is a writing style that I like very much As far as the plot is concerned, the background is very open and the world view is huge, but the presentation is very good, and you can read step by step When I read Chapter 124, I felt that the world view has basically been unfolded, and there was no deliberate riddle, and the questions raised were quickly solved. I really like this, unlike some novels where "that guy", "that adult" and "that place" stretch for hundreds of chapters. The connection of the main plot is okay, it is not over-forced, and it advances quickly The only problem I feel is the emotional line. As of now, it is a story with multiple female protagonists, and this is where I feel the problem is. As I wrote earlier, we were already very good with Dongfang, and there was a feeling of love slowly flowing over time. But then suddenly a question came and the male protagonist fell in love with Miss Xia. . . Dongfang's previous episode gave me a really secret feeling. I already had a crush on her, and it was relatively restrained. There were also scenes of jealousy, and there were many scenes. I don't know why, but I suddenly fell in love with Miss Xia even more. There was no foreshadowing, maybe the author would say there was, but as a reader, I felt like a brother has feelings for his sister, and they immediately decided that they were together. . . Then there were more scenes with Miss Xia It felt very abrupt to me, and I had an indescribable feeling. I always felt like I had seen this kind of plot somewhere before. It seemed that many novels from Qidian in recent years had such plots. I guessed that the author may not have wanted to write a harem story at the beginning, or had not thought about it well. It should be the "editor" who asked the author to write it like this. The outline was changed to cause this sudden feeling. The purpose should be to increase traffic and increase the contradictions of the plot, so that readers have more reasons to read and discuss, and it is effective. You can see it by looking at the rankings of the protagonist group, but there are also negative effects Oh, by the way, thinking about it, the author should have watched Zhu Xian. , Lu Xueqi and Baguio Also I don't know if the author reads the comics, the comics Stealing Stars in September and October are Meteor and October, this is the male version These two CP fans will probably fight when they meet, and the popularity will not stop 😄 Looking at it now, let me guess the plot of the subsequent love line. It is estimated that the male protagonist and Miss Xia will show affection, and then occasionally get tired of Dongfang. Finally, because Dongfang also likes the male protagonist, it is unbearable, so he will make it clear to the male protagonist, and then they will fall in love secretly. According to the author's writing habits, it should not take too long. Then there will be a showdown, and Miss Xia will not accept it for a while. In the end, they should go through something, and then open up their hearts. The male protagonist and the two female protagonists are happily together. This is the first type There are two other types, as the author said in a comment One is a dream, the other is reality. As we said at the time, Dongfang should be a dream, Miss Xia is reality, and the novel is not reality, so it is possible to be with Dongfang, but I think it should be impossible. Now that Miss Xia has made it clear, it is possible that the male protagonist later broke up with Miss Xia, and then got together with Dongfang. Then I guess the author will be scolded even if he writes well, or write Miss Xia to death. Well, the result is probably the same and he will inevitably be scolded. This is the second type Then there is the realistic ending. He and Dongfang experienced an unforgettable love, both sides went through hardships, but in the end when the dust settled, they still couldn't be together or Dongfang died. The male protagonist was moved by Miss Xia, and gradually opened up his heart, and finally ended up with Miss Xia I think the first possibility is more likely, after all, the starting point is such a trend, the editor will definitely let the author write like this, and the author also said in his acceptance speech that there will be no regrets. It is estimated that this will be the ending in all likelihood, and maybe there will be more harems in the future. . In the second case, I guess the author would not dare to write like this 🤓 In the third case, it is impossible. But to be honest, I have not seen this kind of plot for many years 🤭 In addition, I guess the author may have been more interested in a single female protagonist at the beginning. Maybe the three types I mentioned are wrong, but are you right, author? I have written so much and I don't mean to blame the author and editor. The editor must have done this for the sake of reading performance and traffic discussion. The author cannot always generate electricity for love. After all, it has to be just right. I can understand you. Hey ~ It's just a pity that it fell into the cliché after all. It was so good to lay out such a good plot background, and it was completely possible to follow the plot, and finally fell into the cp-robbing style of the rice circle, hey And considering the current popularity of reading, I feel that it can be changed like this It's counterproductive. After all, this routine is used by too many people, and it goes against your writing style. Your writing style gives me a refreshing and comfortable feeling. I really shouldn't add such a bloody plot. It will only make people uncomfortable╯╰It is a huge break from the fresh and comfortable daily style before. It's really a pity to feel cracked. Maybe many people haven't read it because of this. Looking at the data, the reading volume is actually good, but it can be seen that the heat has not gone up. It should be for this reason This reminds me of a book I read before, "Ask the Red Dust", the first two hundred chapters, and the following. . . The main character seems to have a harem because of the sentence "do whatever you want", and there is no foreshadowing, but later I heard that the author himself is a harem king. . . In addition, when I was reading your book recently, I was also reading another one, "I Have a Sword Fairy Wife". This is also a harem novel with multiple female protagonists. The writing style is just opposite to yours. It is more classical and has more classical Chinese. Some parts are not so easy to read and need to be read carefully to understand. When I read this book, I did not feel that sense of separation in the emotional line. It has to be a bit joyful and makes people look forward to what will happen next. Maybe this is the difference between having a foreshadowing and reasonable arrangements. I don't know how it will develop in the future, but I feel that it should be no problem I may wait and see again later. The three hopes I mentioned above will not be used by the author, because they are not very good. I hope the author can write a better and reasonable one! Also I only saw chapter 124. . . I don't know if the author has already used it. Anyone who has seen it can tell me how the emotional line develops later?

After reading the first 7 chapters, I found that the writing style is really good, and the writing is very fairy-like. Any low-level old Taoist priest on the mountain is devoted to Taoism, and has the feeling of immortality. He does not seek to murder the protagonist because of his heightened spiritual awareness. It is indeed different from other popular novels, and there is no forced plot for the sake of fun and pretentiousness. It is very comfortable to read. Many authors start their books in order to cater to the public. They try their best to cheat in the early stage and create all kinds of contradictory and embarrassing plots to attract readers' interest in reading. At least after reading the first few chapters, it is indeed a fairy grass. I read it naturally and follow my heart. It is quite good. I hope it will not disappoint in the future.

Recommended by a friend, I read this book intermittently for more than ten days, and finally saw the paid chapter. It turns out that there are still three days of free time 😄 I don't want to order all of them... This book does not have many routines, but it is very fairy-like and comfortable to read, especially the emotional line between the male and female protagonists. I like it...👍

After reading more than 40 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The author's writing style is first-rate, especially the scenery description. His ability to express the book vividly and naturally on the page is amazing. But the characterization and plot are really taken for granted. It doesn't matter that the protagonist is a genius. I happen to meet a few friends who are all unparalleled geniuses, and the overall level of the entire world of immortality plummets, as if this world of immortality is in a village. After a few months of entry, you can go directly to the late stage of Qi Condensation. The geniuses of the previous batches mentioned above only reached this level in more than ten years. However, when you get to the protagonist, they are all in trouble. After a few months of breakthrough, what were you doing before you met the protagonist? Isn't this the speed of foundation building? Don't you have to wait for the protagonist to break through together? Write and write about an academy full of tool people. The four people in the main courtyard are either enlightened or on the road to enlightenment all day long. The academy is also inexplicable. These so-called teachings are taught in just a few words in this book. If cultivating immortals is so simple, I would be dissatisfied if the streets are full of immortals.

Recommended by Brother Lanke, I read the previous article and it is indeed a good book with a fairy spirit. Although this kind of writing method is thankless, it is difficult to see that this kind of immortality writing is really about cultivating immortals.

The manuscript has reached 1.18 Million words~ No more pretense~Double heroines 🌹🌹 No more~ One is responsible for giving out sweets~ The other is temporarily pure... Taoist couple~ Ai Xin Don't believe it~ … A few supporting characters have been added, tell me what you like ❤️ If you like the supporting characters, please reply to this post, feel free to add them~🤝🌹

This book is very much to my liking. The start is very magical! The protagonist is not the kind of person whose parents died and is full of violence. I read books just to kill time in my spare time, not to read the kind of underworld cultivating immortality that is full of negative energy. Unfortunately, after the Qidian update, the sounds of the books are very difficult to listen to. I also like listening to books. So I listened at the outstation. Yu Jie's pronunciation is clear and slightly emotional. I heard from outside sites that authors can also make money, and it's not just free prostitution!

I watched the extra episode, it was very good...🤓 Rewarding the male protagonist, now it's complete, haha It doesn't matter if I add more or not, I write slowly, it feels good 😁

Write a book review carefully! The beginning of this book is a bit dull, but it is refreshing, just like the author said, a cup of tea, but I like it very much. After more than eighty chapters, we have completely entered the vision of cultivating immortals. As the plot unfolds, the fairyland-like small world becomes more and more vivid and exciting... This book is really not only about peaceful cultivation, but also has friendship and passion. The battle at Xuanyin Temple in more than two hundred chapters, and the transformation of the state of mind in about three hundred chapters are impressive! The Mid-Autumn Festival, the Chinese New Year, and the Lantern Festival are all included in the article, and the subtle details provide insight into the beauty of the world 🌹 The Yan Qi that has always been missed is finally coming to the surface... What a trap in more than 400 chapters... The recent plot has become more and more exciting, and the author will do his best ✊

A fresh and elegant book, unconventional. It tells the story of three or two Taoist lovers cultivating immortality in a leisurely way. The Taoism is natural and full of immortality. Come on, author!