A Flawed Otherworld

Having read the pirated version up to the part about the time vortex, here are my thoughts. Advantage 1: The beginning is quite attractive, so I wanted to keep reading. As the plot unfolds, the constant connection between different story segments keeps me, or the reader, on edge with an extremely tight pace. This is very good.

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First, the female lead designation in this book is solely for spoiler purposes and is unrelated to the content. Second, this book is intellectually stimulating; the protagonist wins through wit and strategy, not through a system-driven, easy-to-follow narrative. Readers who prefer lighthearted, invincible stories should proceed with caution.

This book is already under contract, so please read with confidence. I'd appreciate recommendations, favorites, and comments... I'm not looking for a huge readership in the early stages, but if you point out any problems early, I can correct them sooner. Also, it would be even better if someone could help me come up with a striking title...

Honestly, I almost didn't click on it after reading the description!

Seeing your book reminds me of "Gene of the 13th Division of Brilliant City." Both were initially underestimated by Qidian, and both had mediocre early performance. But now, that book is a top-tier read, with a breakout index of tens of thousands and nearly ten million words. Keep it up! Persistence pays off!

I stumbled upon it yesterday afternoon and finished reading it early this morning. This is a book with a fantastic world-building and storyline: The protagonist, Meng Fei (the male lead), is a programmer who dies from overwork and is transmigrated to another world. Through a debugging system, he discovers that this world is full of loopholes.

Writing about multiple female leads almost always fails because the romantic storylines are poorly handled. Just look at how many of the top ten best-selling novels feature multiple female leads; if you don't have the ability, don't write them.

Police officer + female gender, no other meaning intended, it's just that this is a long-standing problem.

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