I Am Not the Supreme God

I always feel a bit contradictory. I still want to say my feelings about this book. I have never written a novel but I have read a lot, so I will express my personal views from the perspective of a reader This novel has three lines in total. The earth line, the main universe line and the sub-universe line. The earth line is only a branch line. The connection between these three lines is not good enough. There is a slight jump, but it is not a big problem. The main problem is that the selling points of your book are very contradictory The main selling points of this book are sandbox civilization and interstellar travel, but I really don't think these two themes are suitable to be written together Most readers who like sandbox civilization think that the protagonist must have a divine existence, no heroine, no parents, and it is good to be a casual person. In fact, this is indeed in line with the selling point of sandbox civilization, which is an almighty sense of dominance. One moment he is omniscient and omnipotent, and the next second he is pretending to slap people in the face. In fact, there is a sense of identity tearing. In addition, the existence of the earth branch and parents makes people feel very awkward because gods do not need to worry about it. After becoming gods, they have to repay the blue star. It makes people feel that this god is cheap and has dissuaded a large number of readers And for those who like interstellar travel and pretending to slap faces, it does attract a considerable number of readers. But your sandbox civilization takes up half of the page. Readers have to jump to read it. This is not good for the reading experience. After all, why should I read something that I don't like half of the book? Those who like to show off may still be interested in the sub-world. What about those who like interstellar travel? Similarly, those who like sandbox civilization are probably not interested in interstellar travel. After all, there are a large number of people who just come to see sandbox civilization, and coupled with the pretentiousness and slap in the face, they will directly dissuade most readers. What's even more embarrassing is that the overlap rate between these two readers is very low This book falls into a situation that is unflattering to both sides, because the length of the main world and the sub-world are almost the same. Interstellar travel and sandbox civilization are not in conflict, but it is difficult to combine the two together. I believe that the author's writing skills are not up to the requirements, and sandbox civilization and pretentiousness are conflicting attributes, and they cannot be written together. So we can also see that the score of this book is not good Generally speaking, books with good scores are either like raising all human beings, the real part is very short, and the protagonist has no worries, full of character, or it is like most immortal novels with a small world setting, and the small world is just a tool to improve strength It can be seen that there are many things you want to write. But thinking and writing are two different things. Your writing power cannot support these story lines, so in the end, you wrote a book that is not pleasing to either side and is inferior to everything else The above only represents my personal opinion. Rational discussion is very welcome

The plot of Azure Star was painful to watch, especially the way the protagonist's parents spoke. I don't know why, but one word came to my mind: pretentious, yes, that's pretentious. I hope to write more about things in the universe sandbox, that's the most interesting part.

Good book🙂🙂

Humble Tang Chuan, asking for a hug online 🙂🤐

Ancient God

Drive high and go low. The front gives a particularly grand view of the world. What is written on the back?

Why do I just not like this female pope? I feel like she has not positioned herself correctly. I especially don't want to see her opposite Tang Chuan from God's Family House. Ahhhhh, ahhhhhhh, ahhhhhhh, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, so annoying! Maybe it's because I think Tang Chuan shouldn't have some bad qualities, such as sexual desire. But the ambiguity between the related body and the female pope made me very uncomfortable. Especially the female pope!

Help the protagonist return home

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The layout is very grand, but the writing techniques and descriptions are simply not worthy of this grandeur. The protagonist's thoughts are also very primitive and are not worthy of this powerful style. The author's writing techniques are also not worthy of the powerful setting of this setting. It feels like a king plowing the land with a golden hoe.

In the beginning, the protagonist's status is too high. He is directly one of the several supreme beings in the universe. The other supreme beings used the universe to be sealed into a ball and used it as a glass ball, while the protagonist used half of the main divine power to create a sub-universe. Then, in order to suppress the protagonist, he gave various meaningless explanations. In the final analysis, the author doesn't have enough imagination and can't hold on.

The beginning is obviously very exciting, the main plot and the main plot are very good, but the author is so good at talking about popular science and philosophy for several chapters. I wonder if the later chapters will be better, so I keep reading. The key details are all charged, I really want to give them money.

My thoughts on this book The first few chapters are really amazing, and the setting about the Supreme God is very good👍 You may say that the setting is good, but the b-character of that kind of god comes out! Those tens of thousands of levels finally reach the highest level. This is the article that men want to read! Some of my own thoughts about this book, first of all, I mentioned before that the protagonist can directly give some suggestions or conjectures to some questions that even the earth consciousness does not know how to answer. There is also a dream that you can create a "self" to accompany your parents on earth. These reflect the supreme power from the side. In particular, it is said that some gods create the world in a dream. Think about how powerful this is! I thought I was watching an epic of Western European mythology, some cyberspace, and some Marvel science fiction heroes! But what? I just saw a Star Trek article. There was a huge gap that made me wonder what on earth I was looking at? I looked at the title of the book "I'm Really Not the Supreme God" I looked at the introduction and it also describes God. But why am I watching Interstellar Adventure? Just like a Marvel hero! I believe that those who are attracted by the title and introduction of the book want to see the power of God. We don't need any exciting plot! We just want to see why God is supreme? Just want to see how wonderful these more than ten thousand realms are? Even in some articles about great emperors, the highest combat power is only the "god" in this book! What's more, in the eyes of the Supreme God, God is nothing more than an ant. Such a mysterious and powerful world is actually Marvel's interstellar heroes? Is it the Avengers? Author, what kind of book do you want to write? What exactly is this book?

Chiliujia arrived

Add a skin to the meat ball, which one do you think is suitable to be the heroine😂🐶

Author 666, it's okay to be on site b

A very familiar advertisement popped up, what's going on?

I can only read the first few chapters of this book

I was speechless when I saw the comments in the chapter reviews. How about getting rid of the disaster, being killed, and finding an ordinary person with good compatibility... Does this still need to be explained? Level four civilizations can prevent paradoxes, and their supreme means are many more than those of saints. The highest level must be for the main body to have a clone to play with when it is idle. Just like when I was playing cdda, I couldn't debug it at first, but then I got bored and ended up playing Extreme Survival. Just like in the book, there is not much power in the Godhead at the beginning. That is because the main body does not want to give too much, otherwise the protagonist will become invincible and it will be meaningless. If I have to say it, what Ontology wants is the reader's experience: giving the avatar limited knowledge and power (the protagonist is confused and groping a little bit), and then produces a dramatic story (this book)

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Elderly Kumbana Original character drawing from Regis Lucis Kellam, the 113th king of the Kingdom of Lucis in Final Fantasy 15

She has to be a woman. She doesn't get angry no matter how much she plays the protagonist, and she tolerates her without a bottom line. Is this worthy of being called the Pope? Still ambitious, I can't even place my position clearly, should I die or not? Moji

I hate the female pope so much, she is actually the heroine! Abandon books

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I have reached chapter 160 of this book. I remember that I was still waiting for the update, so I just left it there. I didn't expect to see someone like my comment today, and I realized that four years have passed and it has been several years since I finished this book. Time flies really fast.

The subject matter is great, the writing is attractive, and I like the beginning. But I panicked when you started, and in the end it was as expected (ﾉД`)

Add some juice?

Have you received the follow-up reward? Let the protagonist die quickly and change his body. I have a pv here, will you come? The same is 1000 points, and there are 1000 more points for good writing.

Work out? This book is not popular. When Qidian advertises on station B, it does not promote this book to those at the top of the monthly ticket rankings. It's amazing.

It's such a pity that this theme can continue indefinitely and the main plot is not interesting.