Steam Dynasty in the Mysterious Age

Well, the author's books have always been good, they are the mainstay, but they also have a fresh feeling... I don't know if the author has many fans here... QQ Reading scared me... I found out that I am the first and second in the fan list, and the author is afraid that he will starve to death... I also hope that the author can get more fans... After all, they all need to eat.

A little personal opinion for the author's reference. The first is the supporting characters. In fact, many of the supporting characters in the first volume are outstanding, especially Xia Tiya. I like this character very much and thought she would be the heroine or at least one of the heroines. Unfortunately, the good times did not last long. As the protagonist changed the map, these characters disappeared. The new characters are a bit inferior in comparison. Lilo writes well, but unfortunately there are too many similar characters to attract readers too much. When a favorite character disappears and there is no new character to replace it, naturally there is no motivation to pursue it. Moreover, as the protagonist's strength increases, the supporting roles play less and less, and even the regular teammates tend to become tool men. They have simply become the protagonist's stand-alone player, which is even more unbearable. Second, upgrade. I honestly don't understand the upgrade system of "Devil Sage". What level is the protagonist? What level is the opponent? How much better than the protagonist? How awesome is the protagonist's ability to leapfrog and fight back? For the current web article, once the upgrade is written, half the battle is won, and this is the case with Fox. Not done well

Such a book-by-book eunuch, opening new books frequently is very popular and very popular.

I started reading Old Fox's books several years ago. Fox loves steampunk and Cthulhu deeply, and coincidentally, so do I. I am posting this post today because I feel that it is inappropriate for a good author like Fox to be thrown into the street, so I would like to share my understanding of Fox from a reader's perspective, hoping it will be helpful to Fox. The first time I read Old Fox's book, I started with the author's name. Yes, at first glance, I saw him as a coquettish fox selling yellow plates. . . I wondered if this was a driving expert? ! So I clicked on Demon Sage, and I was stunned by the beginning. What an awesome idea, and how this kind of tool demon can turn around is so smooth. Then I took a closer look and found that it was in the style of a serious Western fantasy. Although there were humorous jokes, there were no driving skills. (That's when I discovered the author's real name...) Later I read another book, and the idea at the beginning was also good, as is this one. Fox is very good at setting up the beginning, continuation of the overall plot, and laying out foreshadowing. However, combat and skills are sometimes too vague. For example, the Blizzard skill in the original book is written too little and cannot reflect its power at all. Why is the sword so deeply rooted in people's hearts? Because the skill descriptions are gorgeous. To put it simply, it is not pretentious enough. The combat and skills are exactly what they should be, and the fox's too serious description seems bland. Then the plot transitions, and sometimes the description is too detailed and delayed. Finally, there is the background, which is also the biggest problem. I think that although Fox loves steampunk and Cthulhu, the last two books have lost their taste after reading it.(▔,▔)ㄏ. Why, because the theme has been lost. The theme of steampunk is actually gadgets such as steam guns and old objects. The modernization brought about by steam and electrification are two different things. Simply put, it is the characteristics and nostalgia of the times. It can have black technology (such as magic, steam mechas, etc.), But it must be in line with the era it is set in and cannot be too modern. The core of Cthulhu is the weird, unsolvable, terrifying and unknown. The writing in the previous book was so clear that in the later stages the protagonist even had a feeling of being unparalleled, but it lost its flavor. Know what is scary, but you should not know why. Isn't it the style of Cthulhu that the more you know, the crazier you become? Xuan Jun, the strongest investigator, also disappeared. Borrowing power but not going into details, Goldfinger can use magical inner power or even other things, but he cannot clearly use Cthulhu, because this thing should be unknown and incomprehensible. I have to say that my best friend did a good job in this regard. Until the late stage, she could be tricked to death at any time, and the items basically used their characteristics. It is recommended to add more reasoning and little foreshadowing that will make you think carefully. The very last. . . Fox, you have to pick your name right, drive more jokes, where is the plate? This book has a very good Chinese background. Pay attention to keeping the characteristics. Also, let's have some good heroines. There are already a few books. . . The protagonist doesn't even have the right to mate! ! I wish this book a great success.

What you write is basically of the same type. In fact, your writing style is good. The first volume of Demons is really good. As long as you write with concentration, you will be able to make a great book.

Don't open it twice. The first two books were good in the early stage, but in the middle and late stages, they started to become routine and I lost interest in watching them. Especially the studio videos in the early stages of Indescribable are very interesting.

The fox is so jumpy. If this new book doesn't become a god, it will fall. Everyone likes it because of its very good results. If I have to open a new book, I may have to witness the fall of a good online author.

What's going on with this book? Is this a break? He is still a eunuch. If you are a eunuch, please finish your order and give him a chance to repay his money and save some character!

I'm afraid he's not teasing me. The author casually made me wonder whether he cares about making money by writing books. I really think this book is okay. It's a pity.

How can the author make a living if he is not listed on the shelves? ,, It's such a pity that I came from Unbelievable Cyberpunk,, eh

I've read eunuchs and still push them, what's the mechanism?

If it sucks again, I hope someone can send me the coordinates on DotDianquan. I still have 3 yuan (meme: refers to the micro nuclear bomb).

The rhythm is okay, the writing is okay, and it is non-toxic. The indescribable world view needs to be more grand, instead of using one coat to write multiple different upgrade systems. Unfortunately, it is really hurtful not to be able to finish the book. Believe me, if you can persist in finishing the book, your writing will be qualitatively improved. This is the key to breaking through the bottleneck.

In fact, it is recommended to have a stable job and write novels part-time. Although it is very hard, at least it will not be difficult to persevere when everyone is saving books to read 🌙

Author, understand?

Coming from Demon Sage, there are still a hundred chapters left and I found out that the author is a eunuch. I will not read it. I hope this book can stay 🙏

. . . . . . So (*￣m￣) is gone again

It turns out that the author is a girl?

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

Still a eunuch🙂

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~