Demon Sage

I have to say that it was difficult to get interested in the beginning, so I couldn't even read two chapters. The male protagonist was too weak and stupid, and he didn't have any momentum at all. He was just like a supporting character. Secondly, is there a different world in the police station?

I just finished reading the second chapter of this novel. After reading it, I really felt a little bit unhappy. The first chapter of the book. After reading it myself, I felt it was quite exciting. Although it was a bit suppressed in the early stage, in the later stage, the protagonist used his own resourcefulness to get both sides of the situation, and in the end he was able to drive away the tiger and devour the wolf. It's pretty cool to see that all three parties have been tricked. Although there are some shortcomings in some places. But it's still pretty good. But as for me, after reading the second chapter, Pearl on the Sea, I felt depressed and aggrieved. Look at the early and middle stages, the personal development of the protagonist and the conspiracies of various forces. There is quite a sense of anticipation as everyone takes turns taking the stage. But when I finished watching it, I felt very frustrated. After reading all the chapters, you will realize that the protagonist is a pawn being calculated before and after. It can be said that he was basically plotted to death. It can be said that everything the protagonist does is arranged by others, just so that the protagonist can escort the Holy Son. In the end, you have to accept it even if you don't accept it. If you don't accept it, you will die. I felt really frustrated after reading it. I don't know how you feel after reading it. Anyway, I really can't accept this kind of thing, being forced by others to do something. The protagonist can do this task for various reasons. Because of resources and favors, I have to accept it. There is nothing to say about any of this. But the most unacceptable thing is to be calculated by others. Someone puts a gun to your head and asks you to take it. If you don't accept the mission, you will die. This feeling is really frustrating. After reading this, I really want to give up. . . Hey. Nowadays, when reading online articles, they are basically from the perspective of the protagonist. Written like this, it is really easy for readers to not accept it after reading it.

After reading hundreds of chapters, I have a big problem with the author. First, writing style. Typos aside, there's nothing wrong with a part-time author spending a few minutes correcting it. Anyway, Quan Qin has money, so some people don't care. Many sentences are grammatically illogical and confusing, and you wouldn't know what they mean without the context. Second, common sense is wrong. This can also be said to be a logic or experience issue, which is what many readers call a poisonous point. The text has affected the reading experience, and it is too long to explain clearly. It messes up the author's relatively strong plot ability, and it would be better for Xiaobai to find a ghostwriter than he is now.

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I feel like it's a very good book, but it's actually a eunuch.

A book from IQ Online that is worth reading

Um, the latest chapters have begun to "borrow" from "Empire of the Corpse". I won't mention "borrowing" from "Shame" before. In fact, I think it's completely OK to borrow creative ideas, but directly copying the lines is a bit too much 😰 The author's story is quite good, although the author's stories are occasionally clever (for example, the important props for such a big event at the beginning are just a few major forces, and the protagonist is not changed. The original name is What are they still called and swaggering around etc.), As well as common sense errors (plastics were popularized in the steam era, Western chefs came up to stir-fry bullfrogs, and ordinary Western families ate fried potato shreds) Of course I want to say that the above are all OK, but the problem is that the author's rhythm is messed up. If it can't be straightened out, the eunuch here is much better than continuing to write the book, at least until the end of Deminghan's plot, it will be considered a good work.

The protagonist finally begins his journey of farming and hegemony! It's time to show off! The update is just a bit slow!

"Born to Die" Roderick Death is the gift of liberation Roderick took this sentence as a credo, even though he was a doctor, a military doctor. He only needs to wave his hand to make the dying soldiers stand up and fight again, but what he gives is not life, but the final death. Foreign Object: Gloves of Life and Death The gloves were carefully sterilized, although they had never been stained with blood. There is a cross on the back of the hand and a skull on the palm. It is surrounded by hymns written in demonic language to Ragas the Ferryman from Hell. Equipment abilities: (1) Flesh and blood resuscitation Roderick clenched his fists, displayed the cross pattern, absorbed the flesh and blood essence from the corpse next to him, used his spiritual power to draw it, and then patched it up on the wounded man's wound. The supplemented flesh and blood has the same functions as normal cells, but will decay like dead cells after a period of time. The replenished flesh will be accompanied by a death mark. The mark is invalid for a period of time after being generated and cannot perform operations, but it will move slowly near the wound to prevent the injured from digging out after remembering the wound location. The length of this period depends on Rodrick's mental strength. (2) Dead air erosion Roderick covered his palms with rotting flesh. Absorb the death energy and transmit it to any death energy mark within a certain distance at a certain ratio. The superimposed dead energy will expand the infection range of the repaired wound. The teleportation ratio and distance depend on Rodrick's mental strength. (3) Conversion between life and death Roderick attached the skull on the palm of his hand to the cross on the back of the other hand, and converted the death energy mark to another part of the host's body. When it is converted to vital organs, such as the heart, lungs, and brain, it will be rejected, and the invalid and inoperable effect will be regained for a period of time, and the death energy will continue to be lost. The loss speed and debuff duration are determined by Roderick's mental strength and the host's physical condition. (4) The death knell tolls Roderick clasped his hands together, put the two skulls together, selected a death energy mark within a certain distance, consumed a certain amount of death energy, and caused the mark to rot immediately. (Does not affect the decay of the original wound) The consumption ratio and distance are determined by Roderick's mental strength. Note: The souls of people killed by this foreign object will be devoured by Lagas Roderick's mark of death cannot be removed (except Roderick's own) Common usage: (1) Select a group of friendly cannon fodder and use the effect to revive flesh and blood, which is equivalent to group treatment (2) Use flesh and blood resuscitation on yourself when you are fatally injured. After leaving the battle, wait until the time reaches zero to cancel. (3) Select an injured enemy, use flesh and blood resuscitation to mark it, and use life and death conversion to switch to another part. It depends on the situation and then explodes I originally thought of many characters, but I still feel that this one is the most suitable for the author, because although this character has pseudo-instant death (corrupted heart) and strong wound recovery, it is extremely powerful. But the protagonist's psychic vision can see the marked location and dig it out in time. Mental attacks can save the opponent's flesh and blood from recovering. Very suitable for the protagonist to step on (skill restraint) Can be added to the cult camp

Do you know why this book sucks? What does it mean to have a golden start and continue after the dog's tail? The early writing was very exciting and very bright---what was the result? You call it a devil, and it starts out as a cult, but in the end it has nothing to do with the dark flow. The protagonist Wei Guangzheng and this kind of theme make me feel sick and speechless. Next time, author, if you want to write about good people, can you change the subject? If you want to change the subject to darkness, you have to be dark. Don't be like the Holy Mother.

Except for the beginning, it doesn't look like Lord of Mysteries. I feel that both books are very good. The detective aspect of this book is more attractive to me. It feels a bit like the book "Detective Detective". I like it very much.

I came in from the introduction and read the first twenty chapters. The author has a very good idea, the writing is smooth, and the plot design is very good. The taste is a bit familiar, like the feeling of Mystery. I checked the time and the same period as Mystery. They are both books written in 18 years. There is definitely no problem of "borrowing". I read the comment section and said it was a eunuch, and I scrolled to the end to see the author saying he couldn't make any money 😰 Mystery is a big hit. This book is a bit inferior in terms of setting and characterization. I can't say it's comparable to Mystery, but it's pretty good. In the end, it ended with no profit. I feel sorry for the author and this book, so I won't continue reading.

This book could have been a god, much better than the indescribable cyberpunk. The author should not have published it twice.

Will there be that woman later? I didn't look back. I gave up when I saw the woman threatening the protagonist with chronic poison. It can be said that the protagonist's previous tragic experience was caused by that woman's group. Haven't you killed that woman's group yet? If you are slow to warm up in the early stage and the protagonist is weak, you can see. Can you kill all these people when you become stronger later? Can anyone who has finished watching tell me the spoilers?

When I saw the author talking about his poor grades in the previous chapter, I really wanted to say that the author wanted to suppress his desire first, but everything in the previous chapter was depressing and not enjoyable at all, and the readers left. In the end, it just moved myself, and I performed a series of exquisite psychological operations. The protagonist survives in the crisis, but the reader is not you. There is no God's perspective. If you suppress it for a long time, you will naturally lose it.

To be honest, the beginning of this book can be a masterpiece, but the more you write later, the more it collapses, no matter how good it is at the end.

When the plot reaches Demingham, the author forcibly reduces the protagonist's intelligence; this is no longer a matter of the author making the writing whiter and more refreshing in response to the readers' request, but the author destroying the rationality of the plot as he writes. The concept of rationality does not distinguish between white novels and dark novels. There are also many novels written in the white style that have reasonable plots. In the eyes of most people nowadays, novels are novels with simple plots or logic, or straightforward descriptions with little polish. They are not novels whose rationality suddenly collapses. I feel that since the end of Good and Evil, the plot suddenly became unreasonable, and almost all the characters fell short of IQ overnight, and rationality collapsed. In fact, this problem (the rationality collapses after writing about it) has always been with the fox. After the change in Chapter 39 of the book, I thought that the author had solved this problem after listening to the readers' suggestions. Unexpectedly, it happened again in the Pearl of the Sea volume. I hope the author can get rid of this old problem and write better and better.

I want to say that as a modern person who traveled back in time to the Middle Ages, I don't have to talk about whether there are superpowers, but what kind of pub do you go to to make money? Aren't you a modern idiot? Don't you know what the knowledge gap is?

It's okay to recommend a new book through the introduction, but delete the introduction of the book and only leave the following to recommend the book.

The pop-up box on the Qidian message bar recommended this novel. I clicked in and took a look. The introduction recommended new novels... In order to promote new books, even the introduction content was gone. I have to say that it was really discouraging 😤

Final comment, from the initial time travel to learning the last words of my parents, I think it is still very exciting, and the bookstore's act of giving tea and books is a bit interesting. When the protagonist starts to fight back, I went to the group intelligence halo. The villains collectively don't know about tracking or surveillance. From ratcatchers to thunderstorms to wolfhounds, do you have any of these occult tracking techniques? The people of the Silver Moon Church lost the protagonist for a few days, and were not worried at all. They had to wait until a fixed time before using the dream inquiry potion. The protagonist could practice spells anytime and anywhere, without any protection from mysticism or ordinary people's investigation, so he could rest assured. The Justice Church is also worried about seeing a ghost. A wave of people from other churches stayed in their parish for two years without any accompanying people. Other hidden forces can be said to have sneaked in. This elite team that greeted them can rest assured that no matter what they do, fighting with other people in the underground world will have an impact. Are you so rest assured? And in your own cathedral, just a few people can rush in and do disrespectful things to the statue of the main god. Is this a bishopric? So***?

Both his book and the cyberpunk fantasy themes are very good, and the writing is also good, but because it is a double book, it is obvious that the latter two books become weak, the plot becomes a lot rougher, and the latter two books end hastily. If I didn't open each book twice and polish it one by one, my results would definitely be much better than now. Therefore, authors, don't be too big-hearted. Just take it step by step steadily. It's not okay to be impatient!

I don't know what the author is thinking. I've also read the steampunk book, but it's still the same old habit. I lose interest in reading it. This is online literature, not a physical book. What can seduce readers is not how rigorous and how vast the world is. The vast world culture, but keep getting more exciting one by one. The high quality does not need to be so high, but you must have it. If there is no climax point in the online novel, how many readers will eagerly follow you to update it. At most, you can say, oh, I will read this after you finish it. Online novels can be rough in direction. Readers can take over if you are rough. If the author still doesn't understand what Shuangdian Link is, I can only say that you have a mine at home, or you have already cultivated to the point of inestimation, so there is no need to eat.

At first I thought I could become a god, but after arriving on the island, various abnormalities made me feel awkward. It was contrary to the previous character design of the protagonist. Maybe I had forgotten the original intention of the protagonist.

I read this book before, and I thought it was very exciting in the early stages, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch, so I'll post it as a souvenir.

After seeing a few chapters on the shelves, Pig's Feet is not very good, the plot writing is not very good and there are many loopholes, the climax is very bland, I feel there is no need to read the rest.

What the hell lj, what a rotten book, messy, without a trace of human kindness. What follows what.

Hello author, I am a student. I used to pursue your book when I was in school. If I have money, I will pay for it. The following are some of my little feelings After following two of your books, my personal favorite is the personal struggle in the confrontation between major organizations and the explosion after the dark and bright lines are intertwined. At first I didn't understand why your results were like this, but gradually I also felt some problems, such as the too boring daily life before the explosion, and the various ambiguous female supporting characters (rather than developing with the heroine) which made people unable to hold on until the explosion point. I've read a little bit of the new book, but I still want to complain about whether the name Fox is bad or can the name be a little bit more cliché?

It's awesome. The introduction also says about a new book. I searched for 200,000 words of "Eunuch" and was convinced.

I just read the Pearl of the Sea chapter, and here are my thoughts: 1. The author wrote well in the early stage (I haven't read it yet), the logic is relatively strict, and the world view is relatively reasonable, but I feel that there are a few shortcomings in the climax: the villain's IQ seems to be lowered, and it is too easy to step into the trap. I think the author was a little anxious that this chapter should be longer. 2. If the author wants to write what he wants to write, he cannot make a living as a writer full-time. Either he has a small amount of capital, or he can write online articles part-time, otherwise he can only slowly compromise