A Different World

A work that could have been excellent The world view, the characters, the coherence of the work... Originally this was a (pseudo) Western fantasy that could be used to make gods, at least I once thought it could. But unfortunately, I was wrong. Because his author is the right way. Success is the right way, and failure is the right way. It has a world view that is an excellent fusion of DND, Warhammer, Cthulhu, etc., And has excellent characters such as alien races, time travel, etc., But it was ruined by Zhengdao's writing habits that have always been and never changed, or his writing skills that have almost never improved. Before a character is established, his character will be constantly changed or simply downplayed. Some seemingly important characters may not appear again in hundreds of pictures, because Zhengdao cannot write about people at all. Furthermore, he is neither able nor willing to write about big scenes, about a specific person, or about rich filler, so he is suitable for writing unit dramas like Mu Su. Once he writes this kind of long article, his original shape will be revealed. The sense of rupture is too strong. It's really too strong. The problem with Zhengdao's writing skills is immediately obvious. He cannot control big scenes, nor can he really bring a certain character to life and write it for a long time. Seeing the Lost City, I believe many readers will feel outrageous - how can this map be so fragmented? Yes, it is so fragmented, no surprise. Old readers may understand that, oh, it is connected with Lu Li, but as an old reader, I am even more surprised that after reading this book, some people really make no progress. I prefer to believe that there are three or four thousand updates a day. Maybe Zhengdao has other main businesses and doesn't even think about writing articles. (Laughs) As expected, it will be another eunuch, or an open-ended (Lu Li) novel. People who are unwilling to make progress will eventually be abandoned as expected. Just wait and see.

The chapters before this book was put on the shelf gave me the impression that it was a DND-like fairy tale with a warm and humorous background. The niche subject matter and good writing style really made people shine. However, my impression of the subsequent political conspiracy dropped a lot. First, the frequent transitions and the abuse of montage techniques made me feel that the narrative was messy. Second, the Rat Man conspiracy fell into a rut. Although it cannot be said to be cliché, it did not bring many surprises. After the protagonist started farming, I felt nervous, because the farming novel must involve many political and economic issues, which is inconsistent with the relaxed and warm tone of the previous article. If it is too heavy and realistic, it will cause the style of the painting to be fragmented. If it is still a fairy tale, it will dissolve the seriousness of territory construction. The author's approach is to avoid political theory and institutional construction and rely on charm to unite partners, subordinates and citizens. At the same time, the invention of technological creations such as guns and cement is also briefly mentioned, which can be understood as a golden finger. The advantage of writing this way is to reduce the sense of inconsistency in style, but the disadvantage is that it is too childish and makes politics look like playing house. The author's approach is acceptable, but this part of the content is not as attractive to me as the previous daily routine. I haven't read much of the following chapters yet, so I won't mention them now. As far as the current content is concerned, this book counts as food or food + for me. I personally think that the author's ability to describe daily life and adventure is much stronger than his ability to create grand narratives and depict war scenes. If this book is written as the adventures and daily life of Annan and his companions in another world (similar to a fantasy travelogue), and does not involve or later involve the political games of the upper echelons of the aristocracy, then it would be considered a fairy tale to me. I have no intention of instructing the author to write a book, I am just expressing my own opinion. I will most likely follow this book, because there are too few slow-paced fairy tale-style traditional Western fantasy at present. Most of them are upgraded and cool novels dressed in Western fantasy, which is difficult to read.

It neither wrote the epic sense of Western fantasy nor successfully created a good male protagonist image. The old-fashioned time travel to the Western fantasy world and invent cement, gunpowder, newspapers, movies and so on. Although he is a warlock, there is no sense of improvement in his own strength. The plot relies entirely on females: female rat people, blue dragons, etc. Although it is a world with gods, there are very few descriptions of the church and knights in the face of disaster. It was said earlier that the gods were blocked, but it was also written that the spider goddess was causing trouble around the male protagonist.

This book is the same as Game of Thrones: Lord of the Flame. The writing and plot are very good, but I don't understand why the protagonist has an inexplicable affection for a somewhat negative female character in it. I have a fondness for that wine. I think it is unreasonable. One is that the protagonist has traveled through time, and his behavior is mature and steady. It does not mean that someone who has traveled through time must be a person who has seen through the world of mortals, nor does it mean that a mature and steady person must be a master of love. But it is like traveling in time and not knowing the financial system over there. Things are priced in gold. The first impression I just feel that those things are valuable. Nowadays, it is generally required that the protagonist who travels through the past must kill decisively and have an online IQ. When combined with the protagonist's behavior, the setting of the protagonist's love interest is a bit abrupt, and the reader is the protagonist instead of the female character. Under this premise, the story of Mrs. Wine thinking that the protagonist always appears in front of her that he has an agenda is reasonable. But it makes people uncomfortable. In reality, Internet nomads probably have to go to Weibo hot searches to talk about ordinary girls. These are still minor problems. Later, the plot of the housekeeper deliberately misleading changed the nature. Although there were some misunderstandings in the first part, she was still good-natured, but later she turned into a scheming girl (again, reasonable but unpleasant, people are self-interested, if I encountered this situation, I would do the same) Do this, but if you do this to me, your heart is really bad, damn it. If you put it in other books, it would probably mean that you should not deceive young people into poverty.) In this case, the more innocent the protagonist is, the badder the woman will appear. The protagonist is played around, and the reader who assumes the role of the protagonist will feel more disgusted with the heroine. In addition, the protagonist's behavior is not in line with his own expectations. In this case, the protagonist still chases the wine, and he cannot be substituted. Judging from the current cautious and random attitude of the protagonist towards Meijiu, if Meijiu is one of the female protagonists, I guess the author wants to take the path of reformation. After writing so much, in summary, the book is very good, but it does not suit my taste. The reason why I wasted so much time and effort to write such a long paragraph is ultimately due to regret. I regret that there is one less book to entertain me, and I regret that there are fewer and fewer books that suit my taste.

Reading progress: Section 142, feel free to write a book review. The beginning of this book is excellent. The plain but interesting daily life and the tenderness revealed in the trivial conversations made me, a guy who never likes reading daily life, stay up late at night. The reason why the author writes the daily life well at the beginning is that he can make the characters vivid, realistic and realistic. Unfortunately, in the middle and later stages, this beautiful sense of daily life is gradually disappearing. The reason is that the protagonist has "upgraded". The upgrade of social status, personal ability, economic level, etc. Has made the protagonist rise to a high place, in the void, with nothing under his feet, and the sense of daily life naturally fades away. For example, in the design of the characters, the early characters are very full. The author can portray a character vividly in just a few sentences. I like the upright Tasia, the kind Aunt Susan, the arrogant Victor, the competent father Augusta, etc. But in the middle and later stages, the images of many characters tended to be stereotyped, single, or even extreme. Because there are too many characters in web novels to cover them all. But even so, the versatility of the main characters should be better displayed. Good characterization is a great way to trick readers into making impulse purchases. As for the image of the protagonist, there must be kindness in its setting. When I was young I would scold the Virgin, but now I would praise the saint. This is rare. It is a rare character to still maintain kindness after going through darkness and suffering. Although there is inevitably some kindness in women, this is not something I can criticize. However, there is a contradiction in the article, in the plot of Glacier Port and Pirates. The captain of the Guards suggested inciting the peons to riot, but Annan refused and gave the reason: he did not want the peons to become victims of the conspiracy. However, in the following text, Annan knew the virtues of pirates, but still guided them to Glacier Port, which would harm innocent civilians. The difference between these two paragraphs will cause the author's carefully portrayed kindness to fall into the abyss of hypocrisy. If there is an explanation of three or two sentences, the characterization will be more natural. As a starting point male video article, the author's writing style is very unique, very comfortable, relaxed, and very everyday style. However, in order to promote the plot, some serious, grand, and tragic plots are difficult to show vividly, and they are always a little distorted. Although it is well written, it is not as enjoyable to read as before. Some of the writing is too frivolous (similar to a light novel? I haven't read enough light novels, so I can't comment), sometimes the transitions are confusing, and the description of the scene always feels like it lacks a sense of reality or an immersive picture. It's not bad, it just takes some getting used to. At the same time, the author does not like the refreshing way of writing upgrade flow. After all, if the logic is rigorous and there are no rigid routines, it is possible to write refreshing articles. The progress and upgrade of the protagonist on the career path are exciting points that could use more ink, but the author seems to focus more on territory development, technological upgrading, and cultural upgrading. Of course this is possible, but if you can write more thoroughly and more intensively, there will always be more readers and more money, right? After all, the feeling this book gives me now is that daily life is not daily life, and upgrading is not upgrading. It highlights overcoming difficulties and working hard to develop. I always feel that something is missing. Of course, what I have to praise the author is the description of women in the novel, which is great. It is difficult for the male authors of Qidian to write good descriptions of women. They are either beautiful and weak vases, or they are perfect women who conform to men's fantasies, or they are silly women who seem to be strong but inexplicably surrender when they see the protagonist. It is difficult to judge. But although the women in this novel also love the protagonist, they are not fools who fall in love with the protagonist as if their eyes are blind. This is so important. This is the thinking of a normal male author. Of course, I won't talk about some male readers who made dirty remarks in the comment section, so as not to be accused of punching. You know, lust is human nature, and there is nothing wrong with it, but what is the difference between saying offensive words and being a hooligan? That's all I can think of for the time being. The whole book review is full of A's. I don't want to argue with anyone. I just want to share my opinion because I like this book. If you disagree, you are right.

It was still very interesting before, but after I went to Breeze City, I started to lose my temper. Then I started building machines and making movies. It was so vulgar.

The movie plot of this book is old-fashioned and a bit disconnected from the previous text. I originally thought it was a book like "Open Your Mission Log", focusing on farming, but as I wrote it, it turned into "Cultural Invasion of Another World"

"Are you awake? The operation was successful." The soft female voice slowly washed away the blur in front of my eyes, and the dim light gradually illuminated a slender figure. "Don't move in a hurry, the wound will be sewn up---" Zheng Dao blinked, half of his forearm was exposed in brown-gray clothes, and a pair of blue crystal eyes showed that she was not an Oriental. Her face was expressionless, and her body was thin, making her look particularly weak. If you ignore the delicate dagger and bright red gauze shining coldly in her hand, as well as the saw hanging on the metal shelf behind her. Zheng Dao was silent. He just slept, who took him abroad. But why does the foreign woman in front of me speak Chinese? And he speaks so fluently. Looking around, it turned out that it was not a light, but a torch hanging next to the door frame. The walls seemed to be stone or wood. There were teeth from unknown animals hanging on it, as well as a heavy-looking bow. There is also a cavity recessed into the wall, and inside is a statue that looks like a dog but not a dog. The blanket underneath me felt warm. She wiped the dagger with a cloth, turned and walked out of the door. "Okay, remember to give him medicine, I'm leaving first" "Okay, okay, thank you so much------" Listening to the conversation outside the door, Zheng Dao just wanted to sit up, when a severe pain hit his head, as if a truck was slowly running over him. Turning his head, he found that he was not wearing a shirt. His exposed left arm was thick and bright red, and his muscles outlined the pitted skin as if it had been burned by fire. There is a black iron ring tightly wrapped around the left arm, and a thinner iron chain wraps around the arm and extends to another black iron ring on the wrist. The palms, which are also different from ordinary people, are also bright red and have long sharp nails. Apart from being a bit white, there is no other problem with my other arm. Slowly enduring the pain, I sat up. It seemed that I could still use my left hand. The thick fingers were surprisingly flexible and powerful, and I didn't feel any discomfort. Zheng Dao lay back again. After all, it was snowing outside and seemed a bit cold. "Brando! Why are you so disobedient? I won't let you move." A tall man walked in from the door carrying a gray-black stone bowl. Brando? Am I Brando? Zheng Dao has realized that he seems to have accidentally traveled through time. It's not like he hasn't read the novel. He turned his head and was about to ask why he was lying here when the man pinched his face with his hands and had to open his mouth. The dark, viscous liquid in the bowl was poured in, and the bitter taste dissatisfied the entire mouth. Zheng Dao vomited a few times, his throat hurt badly, and liquid flowed from the corner of his mouth, which the woman wiped away with a clean cloth. "Who are you? Where am I?" A hoarse voice sounded, and Zheng Dao spoke. "Ah! My poor brother. You must have been injured by the horned devil's poisonous fog. It's all my fault. I couldn't take you out hunting. If it weren't for Dr. Ethel, you would have died. Thank God." Zheng Dao was carried over, and his face was pricked with pain from the chest hair of this overly strong man. My ears were almost deafened by his voice. Zheng Dao pushed him away with difficulty, and then noticed the wounds on his chest and arms that had been smeared with an unknown drug. "I am Brand, your brother, this is our home." Brand looked anxious. Zheng Dao quickly accepted this fact and was even a little lucky because he didn't have to deal with the capricious Party A. It's just that I don't have any memory. Poor Brando probably died from the poisonous fog. "I'm Brando? Yes, I'm Brando ------" Zheng Dao could only pretend to act according to the impression of amnesia. However, Brand seemed to be careless, and he obviously didn't notice anything unusual, and thought that there was nothing wrong with his brother. He took out a large piece of brown meat jerky from somewhere and stuffed it to Zheng Dao, "You eat some first, I'll roast the horned demon we fought back." After saying that, he turned and left, leaving Zheng Dao with no appetite at all for the huge meat jerky. He stared blankly at the roof, his head still feeling dizzy. Suddenly, he seemed to hear many people shouting his name. "gzhengdao——, are you so embarrassed for 39 words?"

How about writing about mental illness?

The beginning is quite attractive, but I don't know if it's because of the author's habits. His sentence breaks and transitions made me very uncomfortable. In addition, the protagonist's strengths are not highlighted later, resulting in a flat character and lack of charm, and the plot progression is very rigid and unclear. The summary is that it is a book that starts high and ends low. It is very average.

After reading more than 100 chapters, I can't stand it 1. The writing is a bit childish 2. It's as bland as water. Although some parts, such as the description of the little spider, are very good, it can't change the overall plot. 3. The first volume gave me the feeling that I made a meal of dumplings for a dish of vinegar. Off topic, if the protagonist remains the same, if I were to write it, I would write a story about a kind person being favored by the gods. Although the protagonist is not very talented, kind people are always worthy of being loved.

The author had many ideas, which were quite interesting, but he did not make appropriate choices. It's like a painting that uses all the colors in the same place and turns it into a mass of paste. It looks colorful at first glance, but it is meaningless.

When you become aware of breathing, your breathing changes from automatic to manual

I really like the author's books, including Too Ancient's Never Peace, two editions of Lu Li, two editions of Mu Su, and For Longevity, which I couldn't put down all night long. I was also following the new book when it first came out. Although I wasn't very interested in the subject matter, I still followed it for a year out of inertia. The plot was also interesting. After that, maybe it was the update speed, maybe it was the direction of the plot that had no end in sight, maybe it was because I didn't have much time at that time, but in short, the reading gradually slowed down, and I habitually subscribed to it every day to read 700 chapters. For half the book (which was difficult to read), I completely forgot about the previous plot, and the later plot saw one-sided reviews in the book review section... I finally gave up completely. Jian Sui's writing style is actually a unique writing style (at least I like it very much), but the dull and repetitive daily life based on the horizontal plot development is really a bit poisonous. The cycle-like plot day after day has already touched the marginal effect of atmosphere description. In the infinite stretch, it is like an endless August. The effective plot in which to search for clues makes the follow-up not only face the challenge of remembering the previous text, but also the follow-up itself is a bit difficult - the fragmented narrative, the snowballing number of characters, the names of the characters in the Western Fantasy, plus the slow progress of the plot, are really hypnotic under the huge volume of the online text. Real life is boring enough, but this novel, which is as long as life, has a strong experimental artistic flavor. The above is the feeling from a pure reader's point of view. Back to the book... Of course eunuchs are not a good habit, but Annan... There is really no hope. It is really a pity that these words cannot construct a better story. Finally, out of selfish motives, please finish updating Mu Susu, please mess with me.

Of course there are good books about the harem, but this one is obviously not one of them. The beginning is quite fresh, but after changing the map, things started to go wrong, so I chose to skip reading. The descriptions of women are deliberate and greasy, and they are ambiguous while working as eunuchs. You can say they are friends. The description of the writing far exceeds the intimacy between friends. The key characters are all beautiful women. When I get tired of it, the back is as watery as the sea. The above is my personal opinion. Seeing so many people complaining, I am obviously not the only one who thinks there is a problem. A filial son should not use force. Just use force, yes, yes, yes 🙂

When will Zhengdao become a superman again? This is not enough every day!

I like the love dramas written by this author. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. First of all, there are too many women who love the protagonist. Secondly, some love comes out of nowhere. Finally, some love is easy to forget. Then there are advantages. Most of the love is sincere and touching. Secondly, love is real love rather than desire. Finally, it is relaxed or likes to hang readers. The love that cannot be obtained is always the best love.

Let me first talk about my first impression of this book Good news: there are many female characters Bad news: there are many female characters There are really too many, and they all have more or less plot progression with the male protagonist, so some girls who seem very important at first become more and more marginalized as they go by, making them look very confused. Having said that, the main characters are at least well-written so far. In terms of plot, the male protagonist is not a combat-oriented character. The summoning skills have been cut down. After the elemental legions are abolished, they can only rely on territory training. Fortunately, the author's understanding of the male protagonist's positioning is quite accurate. There is a clear "evolution" route from the video merchant at the beginning to the small lord to the entry-level politician now. But I currently like the New Beginning chapter the most. The hero is really worried about finding a new territory. I couldn't stop laughing when I saw him touching the blue dragon to find the gems on the skirt, endorsing products, and trying to steal money from his opponents. If you take off Tedder, Irelanze and Olmedo and throw them on his bed, the temptation is not even as good as Orin's small bag of gold nards thrown on the floor. Laughing to death, this is the "gold content" of Annan Nan

I really like the author's slow and funny plot content and the less utilitarian protagonist who has a bitter hatred for everyone. It's enough for the author to write according to his own heart. Don't let people who say bad things affect your mood.

The writing is good, but the content is watery.

Not recommended It gives me the feeling of reading a light novel or old-fashioned literature. Many people say that the character description is very good, but I just feel that the narrative is very jumpy and inconsistent in many places. The biggest problem is the character design of the protagonist. The protagonist is a time traveler. But in fact, the memory of the past life has not become the main part of the plot of the novel. It feels like a person from another world occasionally got one or two design drawings and a small amount of inspiration from the other world: the memory of the past life has a very low sense of existence, and it is almost 100 chapters. The purpose of moving these two things is just to sell them for money. Once sold, they have nothing to do with the protagonist. The same is true when reading other book reviews about magic guns and the like in the later period. It's like a military blind person who has only seen the appearance and heard the general description. He doesn't understand the principle or the power. If he thinks it is useful, he just takes it and seals it into the novel The boss ratman in the early stage of the book, the description It's very contradictory. The main character's current bodyguard is a ratman. After being disguised, others usually think he is an elf. Elfs have been described in other parts as being very beautiful. So from this part, we can conclude that the ratman is different from the ratmen in other novels. It should be a demi-human variant with a good appearance. However, in other descriptions of the disasters caused by the rat men, the rat men are described as hateful and ugly existences. The left hand beats the right hand. And it feels like the protagonist has been entangled in those palace battles and conspiracy plots in the early stage. Half of the supporting characters around him are freaks. They believe everyone they say and do whatever they are told, regardless of whether they are strangers or not...

I have read Chapter 50 so far, the plot is good, check it out

I haven't watched it for almost a year and a half. What's the progress? Is it going to be finished?

I've read almost 500 chapters. The first part was a bit interesting, but the second part is getting more and more boring. The only positive character to appear is a woman. Women are not only beautiful and powerful, but they are also sure to be captured. If you eat too many repetitive routines, it will become disgusting. And how many girls would really like a young lady with young teeth? Feeling perverted? The weapons don't match The first 200 chapters still have a bit of a retro western fantasy feel. Later, Long Aotian spent so much effort describing Martin, a fun-loving person, and didn't even mention it in the following chapters. The one who summoned the beast mother, the elf mentor mother who came to the door, the mother who pretended to be an elf mentor, the missing wine lady, the rat-man-turned-elf mother, the count rat-man lady's mother, some kind of princess, Mrs. Winter, the daughter of a boss, the sister who pretended to be an identity, the one who even confirmed the gender of a cat after picking it up, will she turn into a cat-eared girl in the future? How short of a woman there is?

There was a girl in the town who was pregnant. Her parents asked the girl who the father of the child was. The girl was forced to have no choice but to say that the child's father was an eminent monk from a nearby temple. After the child was born, the family found the eminent monk with the child in their arms. The eminent monk only said, "It looks like this!" And then silently picked up the child. After that, the eminent monk carried the child from house to house asking for milk every day. The town exploded with everything. The eminent monk was pointed out and even insulted. A year later, the girl could not bear the inner torment and admitted that the child's father was another person and had nothing to do with the eminent monk. The girl and her family were ashamed to find the eminent monk. They saw that the eminent monk was very haggard, but the child was white and fat. The girl was filled with guilt. The eminent monk replied calmly, "That's it!" And returned the child to the girl. The eminent monk was wrongly accused and his reputation was ruined, but he never defended himself. Why? The eminent monk said: "Monks regard fame and wealth as something external to themselves. Being misunderstood by others has nothing to do with me. I can relieve the plight of a young girl and save a little life, which is a good deed." When we are misunderstood, we will spend a lot of time to defend ourselves. But it was no use. No one will listen, no one will listen. People make judgments based on what they hear and understand, and everyone is actually very stubborn. If he understands you he will understand you from the beginning understand you from beginning to end rather than listen to your explanation once. Instead of trying hard and painfully to reverse other people's judgment It is better to endure it silently and give others more time and space. Save the time to defend yourself and realize your longer-term life value. To cross others is like crossing oneself. To ferry oneself is also to ferry others. If you can't look away, just carry it on your back. If you can't let it go, just remember it. If you can't bear it, just keep it. Wait until one day... If you can't carry it anymore, just look away. If you can't remember it, just let it go. If you can't keep it, then let it go. Cherish the people in front of you and do the things in front of you. Everything is wonderful It is cloudy and it may not rain. Breaking up is not necessarily the saddest thing. Hatred may not last a lifetime. Disappointment is not necessarily despair. Facing is not necessarily the saddest thing. Loneliness is not necessarily unhappy. Owning does not necessarily mean staying together. Silence is not necessarily indifference. Losing does not necessarily mean you no longer have it. Failure does not necessarily mean giving up. Miracles may not happen. Rely on yourself for everything Don't cry poor, because no one will give you money Don't cry tired, because no one will do it for you Don't want to cry, because no one cares Don't admit defeat, because no one wants you to win Don't rely on others, because only you are the most reliable Don't beg, because others Waiting to see the joke Don't be depressed, because a bunch of people are waiting to add insult to injury Don't look back, because what you see are unrepaired cracks Don't be sad about separation, because you only know how to frown but it's in your heart Don't bow your head, because there is no gold on the ground, only stones Don't force it, because there is no sweetness in the hard-picked fruit. When you meet someone who loves you, learn to be grateful. A month later, the girl became pregnant again. The girl's parents pressed her and asked who the father was, and the girl said he belonged to a eminent monk. Senior Monk: "Almost done😅"

A teacher asked three of his students to buy three things to warm a dark house. The first student bought a lot of hay, and the teacher shook his head. The second student bought a candle. Although the candlelight filled the room, it left a shadow. The third student hero took out a photo of Zhengdao, his sparkling beauty lit up the whole house, and the teacher smiled with satisfaction.

Zhengdao writes a new book and I organize one, so that Zhengdao can only go back to sleep more deeply 👊😡👊 Hehe, any evil will eventually be brought to justice

Augusta, I'm sorry for you... As the most miserable character in my works, you were tainted by Chaos when you appeared in the strange world. You managed to stay awake and you were loved by your father. Rest in peace, Old Ao... If you really love Augusta, just vote and tell me... If the monthly votes are in the top ten this month, I will consider resurrecting him in the future. Otherwise, it proves that everyone is not too persistent in resurrecting him, so let Ao go quietly.

You are right, but "The Different World" is a character-based farming novel that combines DND, Warhammer, and Cthulhu worldviews and is independently created by the well-known writer Wu Ji Zhengdao. The story takes place in a closed world called the "Alternate World", where those chosen by the Righteous Path will be awarded the status of "protagonist" and guide the Righteous Path out of the circle. You will play a mysterious character named "Reader", meet characters with different personalities and unique abilities during free reading, and gradually discover the truth of the "story".

Starting tomorrow, I will become a superman in the fifth update. I will be a superman in the first and fifth updates.