Demon Hunting Spirit

I am a newcomer, and this is my first novel to be published. In fact, I never expected that I would be able to achieve this level of success with a novel. A collection of several thousand seemed to me an almost impossible task. In fact, from the time I started writing this book to now, I feel happy and disappointed every day because of the rise and fall of several collections. I really appreciate everyone's support for me. I know that I still have many shortcomings, including poor writing... Some flaws in plot control... And so on. But I am really working hard to improve myself, and I hope you can give me some time and patience.

What the hell is this book? There is no ending.

The biggest flaw of this book is the author's pacing control. It is basically destined to be a eunuch, because according to the soul repair progress of this book, the protagonist needs at least 3,000 chapters to completely repair, killing at least 248 monsters and thinking of 248 abilities. It is already slow enough, and the author also needs to add the restriction that the more complete the repair, the stronger the soul will need to be added to repair it. , Dragging out a long-paced book even longer. This kind of upgrade progress is completely impossible to complete. If you change the progress of killing a monster to 1%, you can finish it in about a thousand chapters. The rhythm of the plot can actually be calculated with elementary school mathematics. I don't understand why the author wants to weaken the progress of the protagonist so much. It is simply to increase the unnecessary writing difficulty for himself.

I'm a eunuch. I haven't finished the book. It's a trap.

Well, the sense of reading! First of all, the level names are really embarrassing 😳 What the hell is the master, teacher, general, king? The division of strength is a bit confusing, sometimes strong and sometimes weak! The previous settings are often forcibly overturned😱Maybe the author forgot! This type of subject matter is what I personally prefer🌚 Finally

The character of the protagonist is very uncomfortable to watch. At the beginning, it is written that he has been learning from his tutor for a long time to control his expression to prevent people from approaching, and he repeatedly emphasizes that it is not his own business to leave alone. The aristocratic lady the protagonist met on the train at the beginning also visited the town police station, and others just said a few words and went to help, which is completely inconsistent with the tutor's teachings. They also popularize professional knowledge to ordinary people at every turn. Isn't this knowledge passed down from generation to generation within the witchers? I really like this kind of novel about trade unions, demon hunting, and various professions, but I really can't stand it. I hope the author will get better and better.

I don't know how to use punctuation marks. I'm afraid this book is in a dream 🤫

What this book gives me is that the most perfect sentence segmentation is the complete sentence segmentation. . . 😅

Why not use a sword? Have you never watched The Witcher? He also uses two swords, which is not what the master is good at. The protagonist is too arrogant and has no taste.

When I saw the title of the book, I always wanted to come in and take a look.

Eunuch, future book friends, please don't fall into this trap 😭

Bad dog, bad dog, bad dog, Why don't you die if I force it to end? Not as good as a eunuch, who at least lets others know that his book is not finished! I really called you a rotten dog and insulted the dog!

It's a pity that the protagonist doesn't have a clear path and doesn't even wear black-rimmed glasses. I'm afraid it will all come to nothing in the end (๑•ี_เ•ี๑)

The book is good, but the deputy job system is not strong.

The deputy job plus potions and gold training can meet daily consumption.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.