Evening Bell Church

Looking at the introduction, I feel that the routine is similar to that of the Lord of Mysteries. Has the Lord of Mysteries become a business model again?

I felt so stupid when I saw the part where Archbishop Ron summoned. The protagonist walked up to Ron on his own initiative and did not bring the battleship into the world. Wasn't he going to die in the past? This is not how you pretend to be cool! If Ron hadn't just pinched the protagonist unconscious, wouldn't the book be over? You surrendered your life to the enemy. Are you out of your mind?

This story line seems to be quite interesting. Although it is already a cliched 25-year-old boy and a forced king routine, the plot is quite smooth. The only unsatisfying evil point is the male protagonist. Any other issues such as too fast pace, poor description of fighting scenes, too many typos, etc. Can be filtered out. After all, good story telling is the most important thing. However, the male protagonist is really disappointing. You want to say that he is not good, but he is not, but his behavior is depressing. To put it bluntly, it is really stupid! You can also write a reckless male protagonist, but as a false god pope with a Goldfinger background, he has not grown at all. It's understandable that I'm not calm and steady at the beginning. I've just traveled through time. After all, not everyone is very smart, but even if I have a golden finger, I don't know how to make good use of it. I don't understand common sense even after I have learned it, and I haven't grown up after encountering many hardships. Kind of kind, but always kind when you shouldn't be. He's a bit smart, but he's always surprised and doesn't understand anything. As an un-advanced evil god, he really has no integrity, can't pretend at all, and is really super weak (even if you are weak, you always rely on others if you are not careful). If it weren't for the supporting characters' intelligence and cooperation, the male protagonist would have died several times. Alas, this kind of food is tasteless and it is a pity to discard it. Male protagonist, male protagonist, you make people hate you!

The style of the Lord of Weirdness, added a special idea in the middle. The setting of Wild Hunt is real, and it can be very comfortable.

After reading Chapter 568, I wonder if the protagonist is born mentally retarded? The Mylar nuclear bomb button is just left outside? Normal people wouldn't do this, right?

Objectively speaking, the author's ability to construct a story is pretty good, and the overall story has good coherence. However, the problem is that the logic of character conflict and correlation is not strong enough, which makes the characters look a bit single. The main reason here is that the characters of the protagonist group are a bit single, but the characters of the villains are relatively three-dimensional. This may have something to do with the fact that you have too many characters in the protagonist group in the early stage, and the social division of labor is highly unified. Also, there are too many characters who know it all right from the beginning, so it will lead to unified confessions, and this unification is abnormal. When there are more descriptions of Rashomon, everyone who is shown is telling the truth. But in this situation, it is everyone's consensus that it is the lie. Of course, I have only read the entire first sequence of stories. As for whether I want to read the subsequent stories, it depends on the author's subsequent stories.

Chapter 272 is blocked? ? ? Why?

A long, long time ago, a god named Azathoth suddenly wanted to play in a band one day. He became the drummer, his younger brother played the flute to accompany him, and Green Flame became the dancer; "The ninth quadrillionth performance of the Indescribable Band is about to begin. Black Goat, please change your costume quickly. What are you doing with so many tentacles, mouths, and eyes? Big-eyed cuteness is no longer popular now. What the audience wants to see is thighs, breasts and snow-white skin. Quickly change it for me to reflect the attractiveness of women. Do you understand?" ' 'And Yuge, don't think about it. If you don't want to teach you how to play the drums, I'll leave the lighting to you. You must make the audience happy and excited. ' 'And you, why don't you let Blood Roar come out and hang out? I know you have it, do you need to show it on your head? Now is the era of lolita, let Nayako show off her cuteness and liven up her popularity. ' 'Okay, my compatriots, cheer up and make sure the audience enjoys a wonderful performance. ' Azathoth said. Near the earth, a grand performance began. First, the sound of the flute echoed in the hearts of every creature. The manic sound waves instantly destroyed the minds of most of the creatures on the earth. They began to repeat meaningless roars along with the flute music; Then the black goat led the dance, accompanied by green flames, and the breasts were densely packed beyond imagination. The human legs and limbs kept twisting with the thousands of colorful lights, and the white skin rippled from time to time. The vision of normal creatures could hardly see the dancing lights in outer space. I don't know whether it was luck or a pity, but it still destroyed the remaining sanity of the creatures. In the end, Naiako stood next to Azathoth and waved and smiled. Cthulhu and other sleeping rulers were awakened one after another and joined the show. All living things were almost extinct, and all the rest joined the carnival. 'My audience can't see clearly, it's okay, I'm coming down now.' Azathoth beat the drum crazily and jumped down from the high altitude orbit of the earth. The material structure of the earth instantly fell apart, leaving not even a trace of dust behind. 'Okay, this time it failed again. There was no cheering, no applause, no response from the audience, but I will not give up. The Indescribable Band will definitely become the most successful band. Let's go, it's time to find the next group of audiences. Yuge, I heard that you have a nephew who traveled to a parallel world? We happened to be visiting relatives. Let's go, I have a feeling that someone will appreciate our performance next time. '

If you have read Lord of Mysteries, then you don't need to read this book. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt that this book was just a low-end version of Mystery, and I couldn't stand it after seeing the part where the protagonist pretended to be a god. Is Yog-Sothoth so strong? As for the reason for saving the witch, it is even more unreasonable. I have no strength at all. Who gave him the courage to save the wanted criminal? It makes me feel embarrassed.

The first reaction when I saw the evening bell was Wang Hassan...😐

Can you please stop mentioning the mystery? I also like mystery, but do you mean that no one else can write a book like the fantasy Cthulhu? Is it still a mistake to follow the trend? Then you should make a batch of losers and become the richest man. I really don't want to be famous for Wuma Xing, but I really don't want to be famous for Xiao Wangchuan, and there is also the number one hater of my wife. Anti-routine articles 🐴, these are not all the same 🐴. In my opinion, they are more similar. Some of them are just copy and paste. Why doesn't anyone say anything? It feels a bit like a rice circle.

When the church first asked you to become a medium, you didn't go and instead came to take in the witch? Being a psychic medium only involves certain risks. The advantages are high wages, joining the system, and professional knowledge training and training. Where to take in the witch? The risk factor is infinite, and the rewards are completely incomparable to joining the system. You are afraid of death when you join the system, but now you have no hesitation in taking in the witch? It's just like being a coward in reality and being asked to be a criminal police officer. You are afraid of bandits' revenge, but privately you see criminals who want to subjugate them and set up their own mercenary group. Do you really think that someone who is so afraid of death that he doesn't even dare to be a criminal police officer would dare to take in a group of wanted criminals, train them and give them weapons?

Holy Mother, how do you know that the witch has never harmed anyone? You start to feel unbearable even if you don't understand anything. It's like you are sick. But please first understand whether the witch is true and kind. No one will say anything to you even if you don't understand anything.

There is a problem: Gods are generally not majestic enough. A central archbishop is described as "overwhelming" or "lovely". The bishop is the representative of the god. In this regard, describing Emilia as an empress is not good. Generally speaking, bishops are loving and majestic. Having bad thoughts about them is blasphemy. Using the words "overwhelming" or "lovely" is very dramatic and loses the sense of mystery.

I have just watched the beginning, and there are all kinds of little poisonous points one after another. The overall logic is not rigorous, the protagonist is frivolous and contradictory, many plots are so embarrassing that it makes people dig their toes, and the various settings are all stitched together. In particular, the protagonist's personality is extremely high-class, but his words, actions, and inner activities are extremely low-class. The writing is really not good either. If it is an old author, I will definitely give a negative review. If it is a new author, it will be pretty good. At least it can be seen that the author is trying to solve various problems. I don't know what will happen next. I feel that I may not be able to stick to that. . Anyway, good luck to new authors. Old author. . .

Undecided, quantum mechanics; jumping style, virtual world; incomprehensible explanation, traveling through time and space; not understanding color matching, cyberpunk; insufficient imagination, parallel universe; old-fashioned picture, pursuit of retro; unclear, paying homage to Cthulhu.

In fact, the most important thing about this book is that the protagonist is not likeable, which is why so many people think it is book poisoning. They are all talking about mystery. Putting aside the writing style and the like, isn't there something poisonous about mystery? There are also many people who don't like mystery, but they are still deeply impressed by the character of Ke Miao. His wisdom and hard work under struggle are really very charming. Let's look at the protagonist of this book. He is reckless, pretends to be a sand dollar, and has no sensitivity at all to some events caused by spirituality. Coupled with the writing style and the like, it is normal to feel poisonous.

I don't like watching Lord of Mysteries. I don't know why I can't watch it. I watched it twice and couldn't stand it.

It can be said that this book contains a lot of elements that I like, such as Darkness, Bloodborne, Cthulhu, Steampunk, SCP, Norse Mythology, First Civilization, and so on. I finally see the star-studded gathering I wanted. The only bad thing is that the storyline written by the author is too hasty. Many places can be dug deeper, and the character dialogues can also be more expressive.

Let me explain in advance, I have just seen the part about taking the Stigma of the Lake. Because I couldn't hold it in any longer, I came here to complain and comment. It's neither praise nor criticism. You can just treat it as a joke and laugh. First of all, I want to say one thing. Many people have said that it is embarrassing to pretend to be cool. This is not a problem at all. You can just read it quickly at a glance and ten lines. Secondly, and this is the key point I want to talk about, the rhythm issue. I don't know if there have been any modifications or corrections later. Anyway, up to now, I feel that the rhythm is very strange in many places. Take the part of the Stigmata of the Lake that I saw as an example. The memory of the elf is very abrupt, very abrupt. There is no sense in placing this memory here. What is the meaning? It has no meaning other than telling readers that there was such an incident before. Many people say that this can explain the reason for the subsequent change in the attitude of the elves. Yes, it is true, but is it really necessary to put it here? It can be put later and brought up when describing the previous things in detail. Later, the attitude of the elf changed. This elf is not a permanent character (even if it is, it will not be awkward at all when we talk about it later, but it is obviously very strange to put it here). There are more than one such place. The most obvious one is that just after the pretense is finished, the next paragraph suddenly loses its pretense. It's okay for a comedy novel to play like this, but in fact, the novel itself is the same mysterious and serious route as Lord of Friends. This makes the rhythm very strange, and the brewing emotions are directly broken. The viewing experience is very bad, and it happened more than once. In fact, it was very uncomfortable for me to read. After that, from where I see it now, the male protagonist has no direction. It doesn't mean that the male protagonist doesn't do things. It means that the male protagonist doesn't know what he is going to do. He just handles whatever happens. All preparations are done by accident. This may be normal for many people. Performance, eyes darkened, not knowing what to do, can only take one step to see, but from God's perspective, the so-called step to see, will make people think, what is this person doing, is he a fool, take one step to see, no problem, but you have to make sure , the information obtained by the protagonist and the information obtained by the reader need to be the same. It cannot be said that there is something obvious and the readers know it, but the protagonist pretends not to know, or directly gives the reader a God's perspective, otherwise it will make people feel that the protagonist is very stupid, maybe some people I like this feeling, but obviously in the context of this game, it makes people uncomfortable. There are also some places where the pretense is too much. Have you ever seen pigs run away if you have never eaten pork? The queen's vagina is so obvious that you think she is sick. This kind of unnaturalness will also affect the look and feel. Finally, the combat power system of this book is very chaotic. As a matter of fact, when I see a character appear now, I don't even know whether this guy is strong or weak. What he said to me is expert level or something like that. I have no idea. As a result, no matter who the protagonist defeats, I don't have any sense of surprise or accomplishment. To put it simply, it is not exciting. I feel that no one is surprised that the protagonist wins. To sum up, I think that the background and writing style of this book are quite good, but the control of the outline details needs to be strengthened (I haven't read it since, I hope it can be improved. After all, the background setting is really good, it is a pity that the writing is poor).

According to the author's description, Kiara is obviously suitable.

I was very curious to ask the author how he wrote such a promising book. The difficulty of failure is far greater than the chance of success. I didn't expect that the author did it. In one word: convinced! ! ! A Crusugar steampunk fantasy novel. The setting is obviously very Western. Why does it like to mix in some private goods? The end result is a good novel that is neither fish nor fowl. Finally, I would like to say that the male protagonist's IQ level is far lower than that of normal people. It's really annoying to read this book.

I don't quite understand the logic of the protagonist's behavior. Because of the risks of being a psychic, the protagonist has a lot of worries. But isn't the risk of protecting two witches very small? Just kill him directly? What ability does the protagonist have to protect himself? Moreover, his pretending to be a god is too cheap. Which god have you seen nagging ordinary believers? You directly brought the impression of Erha onto your mount. God rides an Erha. Even if it's not really Erha. If you think about it, it's very cheap.

This protagonist is a bit disappointing, too young, and it feels like he has inherited a fortune worth hundreds of millions, but the protagonist says, Oops! Thank God I can eat bread every day.

This is a completely bad book. The more I write, the worse it gets. I don't know how many times I read it every day.

Why do real people recommend this book? The gap is too big.

As for this book, just make do with it. If you don't have a book to read, you can read it (that's me)

Why is it over halfway? What happened?

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

The comment section is so noisy. I just want to know how good the book is.