Wizard: Starting from Immortality

The eternal being is a nanny for others, that's too weird!

There is no threshold for wizard immortality style, so I don't know what I want to do when I write this kind of wizard immortality style.

There is a gu and he ran away. Aren't there worms in Western Fantasy? Forcibly adding a trick, the style doesn't match up to me

It's hard to write about the wizard immortality stream, because in my impression, the wizard's cultivation system is so life-saving that you don't even have to reach a very late stage. You can easily live for eighteen hundred years just in the early stage.

It's too complicated. You either have to write a Western fantasy or just write a fairy tale. The settings of the two dramas pop up at every turn. It's like a sentence suddenly pops up in a traditional fairy tale about cultivating immortals. The master of a certain sect went into retreat and broke through to an Omega-level immortal cultivator. It's really uncomfortable to watch.

Wizard Immortality Stream. . . . Which wizard did this? Shouldn't immortality be the key? If we try to make wizards immortal, which wizard can't live forever? . .

A story about a fourth-rate protagonist who, with the help of a third-rate author, goes through a second-rate plot to achieve a first-rate goal (hint: the goal is accomplished at the beginning)

Many plots involve the left and right brains fighting each other.

It's well written. If the follow-up doesn't collapse, I should be able to go to Sanjiang.

The author took the advice and changed the poison into a bug. Readers have a stereotype that if there is a poison, it doesn't look like a wizard novel. Just like what I read is a martial arts novel, but their martial arts names are: Fireball Technique, Wind Blade Technique, and Earth Release Technique. It will look nondescript, and readers will feel separated when reading it.

What I don't like the most is being plotted, making mistakes, or being stupid. Thank you for saying it in your introduction. Who wants to see you grow up slowly? It won't be fun until later.

To be honest, I don't have any sense of empathy.

There is nothing wrong with Goldfinger being immortal. The plot at the beginning goes by so fast because it wants to compress the apprenticeship period that is infinitely extended in other wizarding novels and quickly enter the official wizarding stage. This resulted in the loss of a truly inhuman feeling of being a mortal and an apprentice to a formal wizard, and the apprenticeship period was no longer set up, making many settings very abrupt and smelling of oriental fantasy. In short, it is just a waste of time.

It's very well written. I'm lucky that I read this book when it was in its infancy. The protagonist is very consistent with my idea of ​​what an immortal should be. He is slow and slow, advancing slowly, with clear goals and firm will. It is the best book I have read this month, but the update is a bit slow.

Thinking in leaps and bounds like the title, lack of coherence, like prose

The author you wrote about the Seven Witches fell in love with the protagonist in the first few decades of her life, and then silently loved Bai Yueguang for 50 years. Is it not a bit heavy? Now, join the vice-dean's sect and quickly develop a wave of strength that surpasses the protagonist, and then capture the protagonist as a ⭐Work hard

To maintain this level, we have the resources to produce high-quality products.

It takes a hundred years to farm, and it takes a hundred years for magic plants to mature? There have been too many changes during this period. Will it remain stable for a hundred years? Using the comparison method, a hundred years is indeed short in the scale of eternal life, but it does not look at the changes in the actual development of a hundred years. For example, New China has undergone earth-shaking changes in less than a century. Another example is that many decisions are made every day due to the many events brought about by the operation of society. These all show that things are changing all the time. Is it possible to ensure that the ever-changing society does not affect farming in a century-long period?

When will it be released? I can't see enough.

It's nice, but the description is too brief. Becoming a second-level wizard seems to be very easy. The protagonist's abilities are not described in detail.

Nonsense and a waste of time.

It looks so good, I was almost dismissed due to the lack of comments.

The curse of witchcraft. Wizards can also play poison. For example, the spring and autumn poison is changed to the spring and autumn insect. It feels like the grade is low.

The writing is very good. When will the update be released? It's not enough to read.

Brother, please don't write too much. Just wait and wait for takeoff. We'll make a good one at the end.

Interesting, I hope the author can stick with it

This is a genius novel. It has nothing to do with immortality, and it has nothing to do with any area or Gou. The protagonist doesn't know how to be Gou and can only rush forward. After all, he is a master who can decide the war between two planes.

Too slow. With daily updates of 10,000 words, you can become platinum tomorrow 🙂🙂

I want to say if there is one, the kind that I can't beat you now, so I'm going to beat your grandson, in front of the person involved 😁

Write it well, your imagination is still good, this curse is still a bit interesting, the sun-chasing syndrome, hahaha,