Ascended Blazar

I'm pretty sure I haven't read Qidian in more than a year. Anyway, I feel like I've read seven or eight books recently, with different styles. I feel that the author's writing style is becoming more and more unified. It feels like something that was washed out after being written in a unified manner and thrown into a machine. Is anyone else feeling the same as me, or am I getting stupider and stupider? Has middle-aged Lao Deng entered a state of getting stupider and stupider?

I'm complaining about this book, not maliciously, just subjective feelings. My personal evaluation is that the battles in this book are pleasing to the eye, as if seeing the old man in the park smoothly performing a Tai Chi style that has been practiced for decades. In contrast, the description of the scenes in this book is vague, and it makes me feel like I am in a fog, and I don't know what the world is. The above is more extreme, but the less extreme ones may be due to the lack of scene reference, and its description of the atmosphere is hazy and hazy, making it difficult to see clearly. It feels like you have just woken up from a dream, as if you have dreamed something, but you can't say anything. On the other hand, there is the fighting style, which lacks the hearty and hearty fighting style, but because of the dreamlike style, it overlaps with the protagonist's master temperament. He is one step ahead, one step ahead, every step ahead, just like the reincarnation of Zhang Sanfeng. It is quite interesting. Anyway, I think fighting is better than pneumonia. Finally, to summarize, the scenes in this book seem to be sleepwalking in reality, and the battles in this book seem to be fought in a dream, with various combos being freely unleashed and pleasing to the eye. Finally, I couldn't sleep due to emo at night, and I went crazy. If the description is wrong, please scold me lightly, and I continued to sleep.

The protagonist of the beast-eared girl currently appearing in the book kills one by one and kills her sister to prove it. He is a veritable butcher of beast-eared girls. If you like beast-eared girls, don't be tricked into getting the knife.

Stop writing a 4,000-word chapter. You really have no talent in this area. Tell us honestly that you are not dead in 2,000 words.

The author's game writing is truly outstanding. From Star Abyss really shocked me at the time.

I really like this setting, but the plot is a mess, especially starting from the title of Thunder, I don't know what I'm writing about. I really can't hold on any longer.

The Empire and the Federation feel that they can rely on Warhammer and Helldiver. Neta, it just so happens that the Super Balloon has recently been linked to 40K. The description of the Federation still has a super balloon flavor, and the Empire can also rely on Warhammer. The most shitty thing now vs. The shittiest thing in history is quite interesting. The parent books are both American and Soviet, and if they want to be more science fiction, these two are good references. Of course, you can also mix it with other things, such as the space station colony in front, which has a bit of Federation and Zeon flavor. Regarding human supremacy, there are also shadows of the Human Alliance and the Earth Alliance. They are all based on the fantasy of the Cold War, and they are all parent materials, so I feel like we can learn from them.

There's nothing cool about it. I don't know if it's been too long since I've written a cool article. Maybe the author's idea of ​​coolness is different from mine, or maybe the author wants to write something more in-depth. When I saw the protagonist pretending to be a gangster in an underground black boxing place, I thought it was going to be cool. But I didn't expect that the fighting was just a small part of the picture. Most of the rest was about psychological description and introduction to the world view. It talked about a lot of social discrimination against aliens, the love and hatred between aliens and humans, cannibalism and so on. I have been crazily setting up the settings in the past, and I can't stand it anymore. I'll wait until I can write cool articles normally and then read it again.

I think there is nothing wrong with writing a plot outside the main plot. The protagonist is equivalent to time travel, and there is no emotional concern before time travel, let alone after time travel. If there is no emotional support for the protagonist, and the protagonist is just a pure egoist with no emotional motivation, I don't think it's not good-looking, I can only say that it is better to expand some character relationships. The only bad thing is not to write too much. I hope it can be included in the main line before it is put on the shelves.

It's a bit hard to read Chapter 18 What kind of personality should the protagonist maintain? Is it reasonable for the protagonist to single-handedly kill several upgraded terrorists, and then return to the company to pretend to be an introvert and submissive person? The author said it was to avoid white pants. But if a normal person becomes a promoted person, kills so many terrorists, and is still submissive in the company, isn't that a promotion in vain? People in this world are really kind 😰 but everyone knows that there may be problems here. But the author just lets the Ministry of Truth continue to enlighten him. Then if you maintain the original character, you will keep it. Why would you suddenly provoke a lurking female agent because of your own bad taste? ? ? Didn't you say that you have to keep growing? I've made so many mistakes... Do you really think you don't pay enough attention? The Ministry of Truth portrayed by the author is also a mess. It always thinks about spies with positive logic and never considers the possibility of counter-logic. Is this really a secret service to catch spies? If the author doesn't know how to write about this aspect, why don't he write about the perspective of the Ministry of Truth or the derivation process of the Ministry of Truth? It is also good to leave appropriate blank space for readers to make up their own minds 🤭

I want to laugh when I see people comparing the author to a mechanic all the time. I was completely addicted after reading some of the previous game articles. I wrote about three-way women every day and it made me sick. The plot is as chaotic as if I've taken too many drugs. The plot develops one by one. Compared with the mechanic, it unfolds gradually and slowly, one day at a time.

Doubao can write better plots than you. Why don't you let Doubao polish it up? I really don't blame you.

It's all nonsense, just written whatever comes to mind, which makes people's heads hurt when they read it. The author of Cthulhu, anyone who reads nonsense will have their sanity exploded. Total mental damage.

The main character was not exposed, all thanks to the author's skill, such poor acting skills and the Sichuan Opera face-changing in public...

Alas, the first few chapters had a strong "Super Mechanic" feel to them. I thought it was just a fairy tale that was running towards the masterpiece, but it turned out that around the 20th chapter, my hips suddenly fell apart. The author has arranged two completely opposite personalities for the protagonist, one who is strong and expressive outside, and one who is shy and introverted in the company. Every time he switches personalities, there will always be a very simple flaw, making it difficult for readers to understand what the author wants to do. Your plot arrangement and writing skills are completely unable to smoothly take on such a protagonist, and the look and feel is extremely awkward.

When I first read it, the battle writing was very good, but the follow-up writing was too simple and inconsistent. The protagonist's self-reported mentality: a little arrogant after awakening, dared to grab a gun and kill more than a dozen soldiers; but when he returned to work on the ground, he became introverted and shy? Although there is a patch for fear of not doing well in the assessment, it is too much. Many people complained about it in the comment section.

Author, do you really know what you are writing? Lao Da's jokes are embarrassing. Please have more normal plots. You are not paying to see ghost stories.

I don't quite understand why the author wrote this picture. The protagonist gave the guide and asked Jasmine to come over and do a task to earn gold. As a result, Jasmine took a subjective initiative and focused on not wanting what you think, but what I want. In the end, the protagonist has to come to the bottom. What does it mean?

It turns out to be the author from Xingyuan. I am waiting for Shen Nong to see if the author's Wenqing disease has improved.

Pi Pijia has been ill for many years, and I am very optimistic about you filling his ecological niche. Please work on the outline carefully, and don't collapse it again in the later stages.

Is this still a literary illness that requires surgery every day? I used to think that the early version of "From the Star Abyss" was 11 out of 10 good, but it was disgusting because of the literary youth. Has the author made any improvements in this book?

If you play too much, it can easily turn into a joke 🙂

Well, it seems that starting from chapter 40, it doesn't matter if you watch the rest, because the plot doesn't advance at all?

Even the full-time master who has been finished for I don't know how many years is ranked second in monthly votes in the sector. The real sector is really cool.

I can feel that the author put a lot of effort into building a complex world, but there is too much information, which seems very laborious. There are a lot of knowledge points to remember, there are too many characters, and I have read so many chapters, but there seems to be not even a week in the plot?

From the author's book "From the Star Abyss", the main character shouted "I'm moved, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no", and then the mentally retarded person watched the supporting character die trying to save him from behind. From the book review, it seems that more than one person was stabbed.

Let me tell you my personal opinion. To be honest, the story is a good story that makes people want to continue reading. But I feel that the writing is not good. It's not that the main plot is not good, but I feel that the author's writing style is not up to that level and he can't write the story how it should be. This is the case with many people. How to describe it? It's the kind of thing where you are obviously planning to write a novel or a story. The result is written like an expository essay. I feel like I could write more from the perspective of the protagonist.

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It's been a long time since I've heard of Kohaku Ryu. Most of the people who have heard of it are old people now, right?

I keep emphasizing that escorting is a joke.