An Unusual Sengoku Japan

I have written hundreds of words. I am not criticizing, but I just hope that I can provide some help to the author. I won't talk about the plot. The author has his own ideas and there is no need to influence them. I only want to make some comments, that is, the author writes things in too detail. There are many unnecessary characters or scenes. In fact, you only need to mention them when they are used. But the author just "because here" A time and space happened, so I'd better write it out." I know this is a reasonable deduction, but reasonable deduction does not mean that everything must be written. After all, you are writing a novel, not a history book. History books have their own focus. In novels, all your plots should be the main line, human beings. For those who serve things, you need to prioritize them. For many plots that are of little use, just abbreviate them or mention them in one stroke. You can even combine people with similar functions to better serve the plot. Anyway, there are not many sophisticated people who read this book. At most, you can just indicate it There is a saying I I forget which writer said it, saying that if the sword hanging on the wall is not used in the next three chapters, unless it is part of a clever plot you will conceive in the future, there is no need to write it out This is my family opinion. It would be best if it can be helpful to the author.

The more I read the novel, the more amazing it becomes. To be honest, I don't like to use my brain when reading online articles. Internet articles are originally illusory pastimes outside of reality. They are people's helpless solution to reality. It's just fun. You don't have to think too much. I have read a lot of online articles, from ancient times such as "I am the Archmage", "The Magic Apprentice" and "Blasphemy". Starting from the early articles, it later moved on to popular IPs such as "The Romance of Dragon and Snake", "Devil's Law" and "Tomb of the Gods", and then to "Douluo Dalu" and "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality". To be honest, no matter how embarrassing and poisonous these works are now when I look back on them, they were all heroes of the time in the online literary environment at that time, and they all told the wonderful points of the story. ——The following contains spoilers, please read with caution—— I personally think this novel is a traditional web novel before the Kanto chapter. It has a world of female queens, a charming protagonist, various celebrity sex changes, and a title system. In terms of setting, it is very playable, the pace is brisk, and various exciting points emerge in endlessly, even if the background is the Japanese War. A niche subject like China, relying on the world of sex change and a large number of female lickers, can also occupy a place in the fantasy or fictional history genre. From now on, as long as the protagonist is written step by step and relies on invincibility to dominate the world and end the troubled times, various female characters are jealous, and there are some side effects, you can guarantee a qualified online novel with several million words. Until the arrival of the Kanto chapter, the rhythm of the novel suddenly changed, and the invincibility gradually faded away. The protagonist gradually transformed from a reckless man who just did it (in various senses) to a political figure, an outstanding politician who understands who I am and what I want to do, unites real friends, and attacks real enemies. The protagonist is roughly characterized. He should be of the feudal (Wujia) class. This is the reason why some book friends in the comment area cannot accept it. Everyone is accustomed to seeing protagonists like Oda Nobunaga in this book, who completely overthrow the old system, sweep the old forces into the garbage dump, murder the lives of those in power, and engage in self-centeredness and military dictatorship. Therefore, some book friends will evaluate the protagonist as a holy mother bitch. After returning from the Kanto chapter, the protagonist has become more mature and has a deeper understanding of improving the samurai system. The improvement of family business and reputation not only gives the protagonist a real basic base, but also allows the protagonist to more perfectly integrate into the samurai system. Through business profits, righteousness and "love mole", the protagonist will unite the conservative samurai families in the world under the banner of the elder Genji. The collision between tradition and innovation is about to begin. I personally think it is quite exciting. It is the kind of narrative that seems chaotic at first glance but is coherent and logical upon closer inspection. Unfortunately, the author likes to see the big picture from the small, and the narrative rhythm is a bit protracted. Moreover, the style before and after the Kanto chapter is quite different. The change of the protagonist is slightly abrupt, and there is a slight sense of fragmentation. But overall, the flaws are not concealed. It is a good book that makes people willing to use their brains. I look forward to the follow-up stories.

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1. Nobunaga, Mitsuhide, Motonari and Yoshiki were riding in a balloon. The balloon leaked and could not lift the four people. It began to fall. It was extremely dangerous and someone had to sacrifice themselves to jump out. First Nobunaga shouted "For the sake of the world!", And then jumped out. The balloon fell temporarily, but after a while it leaked more air and fell again. Speed up, and one more person must jump out. So Yuan shouted: "For a million people!" And jumped out. After a while, he couldn't do it anymore, so Mitsuhide shouted: "For the Shiba Jiuben family!" With that, Yihui was thrown out. 2. Question: What is the difference between fairy tales and marrying Shiba? Answer: Fairy tales always begin with "A long time ago", and marrying into Sibo is "not far away, not far away" 3. Mitsuhide announced at the family meeting: "The opportunity to marry into Sibo has appeared on the horizon of Sibo!" Yukino didn't understand what the horizon meant. After thinking about it, I went home and asked my sister Haruno, and she replied, "It is a line that can be seen but can never be walked." 4. After the recent war, an old lady from Sakai Port saw a photo posted on the street and said that he looked like her nephew. Others scolded her: What nonsense, this is homosexuality. Old lady: What does he do? Answer: He drove away the Mihaoshi family The old lady asked eagerly: Can he drive away the Sibo family too? 5. What will happen if the crocodile eats Comrade Mitsuhide? It takes a year to digest the ink 6. There is a rule in hell. Anyone who kills someone in the world will be drowned in the blood of the victim. One day, God went to hell to inspect and found that Mitsuhide was only drowned up to his legs. God was surprised and asked, "Why?" "You have done so many bad things but you are not drowned?" Mitsuhide replied proudly, "I stand on the shoulders of the great Comrade Shiba Yiyin!" 7. Mitsuhide was walking down the street when a blind old man passed by with his dog and said hello to her, "Hello, Akechi-sama." Guangxiu was very surprised and asked, "You are blind, how can you recognize me?" The old man replied, "It's because my guide dog backed away when it saw you."

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The characters are getting worse and worse. They are obviously following the path of the world to write a pleasant character, but they want to play politics and fight wits. However, the author obviously cannot grasp it and keeps writing some trivial things. After Chapter 1200, the protagonist goes from playing the world to planning to integrate into the Wu family society and then turns into a compassionate bitch. In fact, in reality, she is completely unflattering. If you want to write about politics, you can, but as for your political line and your political opinions, you have always spent 1,200 chapters with the image of an ordinary modern male with soft ears, soft heart, and lust, without seeing any progress, just like the Asasi male protagonist in a harem light novel who insists on entering Game of Thrones. As for the outline, I have been a little disgusted since Kanto. What is the objection? The most annoying thing about system writing is being forced to do things by the system. Maybe for the author, this is to push the outline from Kyoto to Kanto. By the way, it can also collect stamps from the popular Uesugi Takeda family in the Warring States Period. However, as a reader, my personal opinion is very poor. As for the current Oda Kamiro Line, in order to restore the original historical process, the protagonist can be said to have become wise all the way, which made me touch my toes. I sincerely recommend that the author be less ambitious. If you don't have the level of integration between sexual transformation and political wits, don't focus on both. Just focus on one point and finish the book. It will be considered a success.

After reading more than a thousand chapters and seeing Yukino running away, I was really confused. The protagonist was indecisive and soft-hearted, which made me faint. Several retainers under his command were more disorderly than the other, and none of them took the protagonist seriously. Then it doesn't matter if the protagonist just plays. Yangno made a mistake earlier, and then planned to threaten the lord. The protagonist handled it lightly and left important matters related to the future to her. Yang Nai has no repentance at all, and backhand supports Yukino in causing trouble. Seeing this, I really couldn't help it. I can only say that it's like a waterfall. The protagonist has always been flaunting himself as the Lord of Benevolence and Righteousness. I think the protagonist can conquer the world, not to mention the Tokugawa Shogunate, even the Western Jin Dynasty. The protagonist will be divided after his death.

You licked the Ming Dynasty too much, right? You also wrote that it is an honor to be a Ming Dynasty dog. What about the Qing Dynasty next?

The protagonist is lustful, has no brains, and can't bring himself to be ruthless. If such a person gets a cheat, he won't be able to accomplish much.

The author wanted to write a historical article, but the readers came to see the protagonist being raped.