Taking a Train on a Wild Ride

When I woke up in the morning, I saw a lot of comments from book friends in the background. There was a book friend named "Breath of the Steel Dragon". The name seemed to be that of an old steamer. He dug out a bunch of Easter eggs like a sapper in the middle of the night. There is also a book friend of "Brahma Yuan". I don't know if the name is taken from the meaning of "Hinayana" and "Mahayana" in Buddhism. He was the first to guess the origin of the number SL772. Although it was still a little bit short, it surprised me. It's this kind of surprise where two friends are playing with their cell phones in a cafe without talking to each other, but they always find a big pudding in the leftover smoothie. The author keeps burying it, and the readers keep digging it, and each enjoys the process and tacit understanding.

Very good, but at the beginning, I am willing to vote for a monthly vote to encourage the author, in order to commemorate those who have fantasy dreams. Submit a name for the protagonist's company, let's call it New World. This world is a new world for the protagonist. The protagonist, who has experience in another world and fantastic abilities, will also lead this world to a new world. It is also a new world for readers. Add a little unknown and original intention to the resonant whistle of steam and industry. Out of the window in the early morning, at the ruins of the relocated train station, you can still hear several long whistles from the train passing by. This is the greeting left to people as the wheels of time pass by.

a. System upgrade b. Train upgrade c. Special team members d. Dimensionality reduction attack e. Customs and customs f. Exotic food g. Please tell me about others

The lack of writing power is like this (sad) The story is quite interesting, but the scattered descriptions, unfocused text, strange sentence fragmentation, etc... Are all things that the author needs to improve. It has potential, so work hard.

The main plot is unclear, the rhythm is like constipation, and the names are messed up. Some people compare it to Best Friend. Every character in Best Friend can be impressed when watching it, and the portrayal is very good. This book only has names but no places, so I don't even know what it is about. It is good for the author to be ambitious, but there is a suspicion of showing off. I predict that he will be defeated.

The content is messy and boring

When I saw the high-speed and small interception ratio, I knew that the author's theoretical knowledge was sufficient. Continuing to scroll back, I was caught off guard by the increasingly strong Western fantasy and literary flavor mixed with the hardcore steampunk content. Time is money, my friend. The time and energy required for such a novel is contrary to the entertainment and relaxation I seek. I didn't abandon the book, I just read a dozen chapters to complain about it.

There's nothing wrong with the content, but it's really unattractive. I thought it was a big escort driving a train, but it turned out not to be the case at all... Intrigue and intrigue every day plus a bunch of names of people and places that I can't remember...

Mao Xiong's response plan to the railway guerrillas

It is said that the main plot of this book is too much, and there are too many side introductions. In fact, readers are not so fragile. They will abandon the book if they can't understand it at all. Some settings can be placed in the easter egg chapter with pictures. What I hope most now is that the author can make subtractions and simplify the unnecessary plots. There will be a climax (a bit more fun) between a few chapters, or a small one (a bit more fun). When accumulated bit by bit, it will reach a big plot and then the whole climax. I recommend an author ~ Let the Breeze Go ~ who specializes in writing refreshing articles. You can learn from the first half of this work, which is more suitable for the current state of the protagonist.