The Unconventional Game-World Male God

Speaking of which, my daughter obviously wants to be a ghost girl, but it's actually quite fake for her to be so powerful. I have an idea. It would be fun if my daughter was a reborn person. With the thoughts of an adult and the body of a lolita, she is still a lolita and eats Yiyin tofu. Yiyin doesn't know yet. It would be best to describe more about her daughter's ideological activities. It would definitely be interesting 😃

This is written. . . I can't help it anymore. My career is just like a joke. If I can't write games, I suggest I change the title of my book and work in other industries 😅. The more I read in many places, the more I feel that the author is using his own personal stuff to vent his dissatisfaction in life. Some writing styles are obviously good. I hope you can at least be logical? What do you mean, otherwise it would be a waste of time? This reason is too outrageous. You are here to open a company to live, not to build socialism. This protagonist is not like a 30-year-old man, but childish like a student who has not graduated from high school. The author is attracted by your writing style. I have no other requirements. I just hope you can smooth out the logic. Please write well and want to read it.

This book is the key to becoming a god😈

Let's talk about my personal opinion. I fully ordered the author's last book, Japan War, and followed the latest progress. I didn't skip a chapter. I personally feel that the look and feel of this new book is not as good as the previous one, and it is inferior in all aspects. First of all, the setting. The biggest label of the two books is that the heroine is superior, but male audiences will definitely not like the real female superiority and male inferiority. Therefore, the heroine in the novel actually means that women are stronger than men, but the male protagonist is stronger than everyone else. The golden finger of the male protagonist in the Japanese War perfectly fits this point, and the male protagonist in this book is actually relatively weak in ability (currently). Then there are the characters. The characters in Japanese War have prototypes, and their life experiences, images and personalities are all referenced. Therefore, even though the male protagonist in Japanese War has so many female characters, many characters are still eye-catching, such as Kenshin, Mitsuhide, etc. There are characters with various personalities, and they are also well written. But as for this new book, to be honest, I have read more than 100 chapters, and I don't think any of the characters have been written. The impression is that I wrote two strokes of this character, and two strokes of that character. And to take a step back, are any of these female characters cute? The author seems to be obsessed with writing about their weird points, or in other words, they are female perverts. I think the difference between the characters in the two books is bigger than the plot. Then there is the rhythm. I don't know the author's outline. I can't comment on the big picture. I can only express my more intuitive feelings. Many book friends criticize the Japanese War for having too much political analysis. In fact, I think that clearly explaining the interest relationships, behavioral motivations, etc. To readers will pave the way for the climax of each volume at the end. After all, a novel can't be happy everywhere, and such a novel won't be good to read either. But I really don't understand the meaning of many plots in this book, and what about the climax of the plot? My personal feeling is that every ten or so chapters seem to be quite independent, without too much foreshadowing, resulting in a fairly flat rhythm. The last point is the subject matter. There is not much to say about this. I feel that the author's writing skills on urban affairs are far inferior to those on ancient war and politics. After writing so many summaries, the most important thing is the shaping of the female characters. There is really a certain gap between the two books. I like the book "Japanese War" very much, so when the author first promoted the new book, I read it with high expectations, but the more I read, the more boring it became. Especially for the "game" career, it was really not written well. I really don't want to criticize the author's book by saying this, but just some of my true personal feelings. To use an inappropriate analogy, I feel that I hate iron but not steel. It is difficult to write about female protagonists. If the author reads the comments and can help a little bit, that would be great. Come on!

It's pretty good-looking, but it doesn't matter if it's a girl. When I saw Uemoto, my brain was messed up. I just like Oda. You can focus on a few characters appropriately, and you don't need to write too many supporting characters.

To be honest, Sengoku Japan still looks good. .

The author is also too courageous. Fortunately, there are not many people watching, otherwise the small black room will be rectified in minutes.

To be honest, I am still looking forward to the story of Xingyue version

It's really exciting, take your time and don't be in a hurry, persistence is the most important thing*^o^*

I don't like Yiyin's description of himself in Chapter 105. If the author hadn't written it, I would still have felt it after reading it. After writing it, I felt a little nauseous.