Tokyo’s Third-Generation Scion

Sister and Sister deserve over 9 points, and Young Eagle deserves 7 points, but this one deserves at most 5 points. I don't know if it's because I've read some fanfiction about Mother Hen, but the beginning was completely unappealing to me. You're putting the world view of an anime into reality, and it's too incongruous.

Isn't that the old eunuch short-tailed cat?

Which sucker sponsored the treasure chest?

The title of this book feels like someone fired a shot at me, leaving my head buzzing. However, its advantage is its simplicity and directness, which might be more in line with the market... But could you please add an alternative title in the synopsis: "Takasaki's Playful Tale"?

The male lead is just a complete kid 😒😒, and you can even write a story where he's not shy in front of his peers... Don't be ridiculous, bro.

I initially thought it was just an ordinary Tokyo novel, but then Toyokawa Shoko appeared, and Bengbu was mentioned.

This author is truly phenomenal. The title and synopsis give absolutely no resemblance to the Wooden Cabinet band. The cover features a cheap, AI-like image of a large, imaginary creature. Anime-oriented readers, not seeing what they were looking for, immediately became engrossed. Others, unfamiliar with Wooden Cabinet and assuming it was just a simple Tokyo-themed story, also became engrossed upon seeing this utterly ridiculous work.

The plot development is insufficient. They're top-tier conglomerates; breaking the rules might be acceptable to those at the bottom, but at this level, continuing to do so without any incentive will only make them a target. If someone breaks the rules at a card game, everyone at the table will kick them off before continuing.

I remember reading "Flowers and Swords" when I was a kid, and even the earlier "Young Eagle" was considered high-quality. This one, however, reads like that other school-themed bragging novel next door—so childish and full of overpowered protagonists… It has a kind of old-fashioned online novel charm. Can't you write something like "Flowers and Swords"? This part where they act all high and mighty while being slapped in the face is really dizzying!

I wonder if anyone else had the same thought after reading it: "Oh, I see," and then moved on to the next chapter. The plot lacks twists and turns, is too straightforward, and relies entirely on the characters to keep you reading, but the characters aren't original, so those outside the fandom won't get the appeal.