The Primal Hunter

I just read three chapters. These three chapters really amazed me. They gave me the feeling of watching European and American hard science fiction. For example, the grid-arranged high-rise residential buildings mentioned many times, people's indifference to poverty and cases, etc. Metaphors reminded me of Asimov's "Pebbles in the Sky". It gave me a completely different feeling from modern Internet literature. It's a great start 👍 I hope to be able to become a god with this book🙏

Sharing a wave of pictures, the author stu_dts was amazed

Suggestion: The author should not go on a big voyage just because of the 500 first order. This book has more than 500 comments, and this chapter is also very active. The popularity is not low. For a novel with more than 100,000 words, it is already terrible. But what does the low first order mean? It means that there is not a large base of casual fans, but the people who are reading are very active and are die-hard fans. This means that this book is not just for everyone to read casually (that kind of writing is temporarily called Shuangwen), but those who read it are loyal believers. This is something that many great authors don't have. With loyal believers, the core of this book will be solid. What is the use of a strong core? More later. Realistic situation: This has always been the fate of niche literature. In the early stage, it relies on die-hard fans to win, until one day the popularity can no longer be suppressed and it falls out of the circle. I believe that the author had a clear understanding of the reality when writing this article. But it is a pity that the author also has unrealistic fantasies about writing, perhaps due to the high debts or the fantasy of the treasure at the end of the voyage. In the end, I was shocked by the gap between fantasy and reality. This is completely unnecessary. You have already achieved what you should achieve, and you have tried your best to break through. Think about it, is this result really excessive? First of all, I won't mention niche articles. I know that dark styles will be suppressed. The author has done a good job of retaining loyal readers. The active comment area is the best proof. I guess that these are the more than 500 people who are pursuing it every day, and this is honestly reflected in the first-time subscription results. This is the way to break the situation. The 500 people who read it are different from the 500 people who read other articles. It can be understood that your book has a threshold, so the other 19,500 people ran away. (Mention that the subscription ratio is never something that writers of niche articles should consider, because you also know that most people's aesthetic level is not up to it.) Now, five hundred people have crossed the threshold, and they will keep reading. So, five hundred subscriptions is already a great achievement. Obviously you know it, but your fantasy has been broken. Having shattered your illusions, now let's talk about this type of article. What should you do? That is to keep updating, even if there is only one chapter of two thousand words a day. Instead of picking up the previous eunuch's articles and reading the mood updates, this is just wearing out the patience of loyal readers. A niche article with a solid core has only one thing to do, snowball, and subscriptions will continue to increase. For this point, you can read the novel "The Host" by the Black Sky Demon God, the originator of wasteland novels. He is my friend, and his style is also dark and niche. But to be honest, it is not as good as what you wrote. The first order is only 300. But he is better because he has rich experience and knows the reality of niche literature. Now the average order has been maintained at 1,000, achieving a low opening and high trading. I don't know if the average order is 1,000. Does it meet what the author wrote in your acceptance speech, that the requirements are not high and you can just take care of the food? By the way, he has written one million words now. If you write this number of words, I think it will not be a problem to order three thousand words. No one is discussing the situation of other cool articles in the comment area. Everyone wants to read them and enjoy them. The author can only get a high initial subscription, then wait for readers to gradually lose interest, subscriptions continue to drop, and finally finish the book amidst criticism. No kidding, this is the reality that Shuangwen writers need to realize, and it is a true portrayal of most Shuangwen. They rely on passers-by, so the first order is low, which is really costing them their lives. But for you, a very good author who writes niche articles, there is no need to be discouraged by the first order issue. Your first order is actually the minimum order you will order after finishing the book. You must understand this. You cannot compete with Shuangwen authors for first subscriptions, and they cannot have a stable increase in your subsequent subscriptions. As a result, the only people you can really hurt by going on a big voyage are the die-hard fans you really rely on. I really feel it's a pity to see that you, the author, have mental problems because of your first order. Because this is the difference between late-stage heroes with high growth attributes and early-stage heroes with low growth attributes. With an explosive mentality, there is no need to deny yourself. How good is your writing? I am also an author, and I am saving manuscripts. My study materials are a series of excellent novels represented by Lord of Mysteries, and your original hunter. I picked up your outline and am waiting to see your follow-up thoughts and learn your language description. Haha... I just joined the group today, and they told me that the study materials are gone? ? ? Finally, I want to say that dogs become adults at one year old, while humans are just babies at one year old. But can you deny the value of humans just because a one-year-old baby is temporarily inferior to a dog? So, I hope the author can be a human being.

Plant grass, and if it is still at this level next time, it will be a proper fairy grass

The author's darkness is simply darkness in the overall sense of the times. It is similar to the law of the dark forest. It does not mean that you are evil and selfish, but that the entire background environment forces you to do this. What the author is criticizing is actually the darkness in the individual's heart. In a simple sense, he is an evil element and does not conform to universal values. But there's this guy's unique villainous charm. A clear example is Dior in jojo. But we should pay attention to one point, the problem of wrong. It is right to pursue the brilliance and greatness of human nature in a dark environment. There should be good returns. Personal selfish and destructive behavior is wrong. There should be retribution. This is very simple correct value. So it's no big deal to worship evil people. But remember that evil people should not be rewarded. It's a pity that many villain protagonists do not suffer the price that villains have to bear in the end. (Dior was imprisoned for nearly 100 years, and his life activity was only a few years, and then he died permanently. The final outcome of all the villains in Jojo is death or stopping thinking) This is actually the price of doing evil, which is a universally correct value. The protagonist who may do whatever he wants and be arrogant seems really happy, but mistakes are mistakes. You may like it, but you cannot change the fact that this kind of thing itself is wrong in universal values. Back to the topic, it makes sense for the author to look down on the second kind of darkness. We should all look down upon it, it is the right value. But I also watch this kind of thing sometimes. Because he will amplify the dark side of our hearts and vent our own dark desires. This is understandable. Who wouldn't watch a movie? But venting is just venting. If you really think that approach is right, from a practical point of view, it is naive. In fact, some of the author's words are biased, and it's not that I absolutely don't like the heroine. I simply don't like emotional dramas, after all, there are very few such things written. Some people who support no heroine are actually bowing to reality. It would be better not to write poorly than not to write. It's hard to see this. Of course, some people hold prejudices and believe that women are a stumbling block and that men should rely on themselves. Let's not talk about this. After all, not everyone has enjoyed maternal love. In general 1 In a universal environment, if the background is dark and people are forced to be selfish in their hearts, this can be called adapting to the environment. This is the case in many apocalyptic novels. This should maintain a neutral attitude, neither opposing nor agreeing. 2 In the universal environment, if the background is dark, people still yearn for humanity in their hearts and open up the light, so they should remain friendly. No objection. To agree. Similar to mystery, in fact, the most popular novels recently are this type. These are universal values ​​ 3 In a universal environment, if the background is normal, the behavior will be selfish. For example, Long Aotian's behavior is like killing his whole family if he offends me. You like me, but I don't like you, so I just use you, that kind of thing. This should be firmly opposed. If you have any other opinions, you are welcome to discuss them with me. As long as my views are not too bad, I am willing to communicate. If you directly curse someone, then decline.

It's a new book. I read all your books again, Mask of God, I Killed Long Aotian, Final Old Age, Visitors from the Abyss, Carnival Abyss, Goblin Notre Dame, King of the Losers, King of the Undead, Up to Now, The Original Hunter, and Yifa's writing feels more mature. I'm wondering why you always love Eunuch, monthly recommendation? The plot collapsed? I think it may not be the case, maybe it is dissatisfaction with the previous one? I have been a loyal fan of Yifa for two years. This time, the Original Hunter is quite interesting. I hope that Yifa's works will get better and better.

Can you believe that when I read this novel, I actually felt like I was watching a movie. I read it word for word. I felt that jumping to read it was disrespectful to the book. The writing is so fucking beautiful.

Your works amaze me, and your laziness makes me despise you. You should be very aware of your shortcomings. But you seem to have no intention of correcting it, and think it will do you no harm. What you call laziness is just limited to the illusory Internet. The expectations and high expectations you have let down are nothing but strangers you don't know on the other side of the screen. The fact is that you have written several books, each of which is wonderful, and many of them have obvious ideological connotations, but you never persisted every time. You always ended the book quietly after a period of time after it was put on the shelves. You have ideas and foundation. You should have imagined the possibility of becoming a god with a book, or even being given the title of "Internet Literature Revolutionator", although you are more just thinking about it than making a "serious" plan. Your arrogance makes you think that your grades should not be so bad, so every time you put it on the shelves, you always lose motivation, and you can't stick to it for three minutes. And you always have no plan, you may not even use an outline at all. You seem to be overconfident in yourself when it comes to writing. Please stop making excuses for your failure. You are very aware of your shortcomings, but you have not yet "made up your mind" to change them. I hope you can think carefully about how you should proceed as an "author". Should I continue like this, muddle along in this mirage-like virtual world of the Internet, or should I make some changes and make "serious" plans and preparations?

This. . It's really a book that a picky eater like me can stay up late to read. .

If the author could keep at least one update every day, the results would not be too bad. As a result, he always gives people the impression of being a eunuch. Who would want to pursue it? I hope the author can finish it this time.