Master of the Elements

Just killed a dozen people~ The protagonist fell asleep directly in the carriage? Protected by a powerful magic pet! That's okay! Then the scene changed and the protagonist was taken a bath? A mouthful of old blood spurted out! What the hell?

Chapter 4: Poison Bi took over the girl's carriage without any precautions and slept with her poisoned arrow? ? ? The knight didn't understand, but the girl understood a little. . . .

The protagonist did not use the signature three-ring fireball spell in the battle at the beginning of the novel, which means that he is not level 5, but at most level 4, and the cavalry can charge at full speed less than 200 meters away in less than a minute. It is simply a fantasy that a level 4 mage can kill more than a dozen fully armed cavalry in such a short time. What idiot player would choose a warrior with such a fierce force? Does anyone really play this kind of game?

The protagonist travels with characters from the game world. After rescuing people at the beginning, he unsuspectingly fell asleep in a woman's carriage. He was also given a bath, which was a little poisonous. He tolerated it first, and then the witch gave her a potion of proficiency in languages. Inexplicably, because the witch apprentice said that the witch wanted to drain the child's life, he went to kill the witch. There was no benefit or anything~ This witch was written as a mere tool, and she was afraid that the count would find out. What's the point? ? If the protagonist has an excessive sense of justice, he just wants to eliminate evil, but I really can't feel it between the lines. How much sense of justice can he have after using people to do pharmaceutical experiments? From the author's writing style, it seems like he is writing a rational and real alien story. But it was really poisonous in the early stage, and I couldn't see much wisdom and meaning~ Later, the lord function appeared~ It was so confusing~ I ran away when I saw this In summary, the author's writing style is good, but the witch is really inexplicable and purposeless~ In my image, the caster should be rational, knowing what is needed~how to do it~do it in an orderly, purposeful and planned manner, rather than doing irrelevant things here and there~

After reading Chapter 41, I feel that one of the biggest shortcomings of this book compared to similar popular books is that the strong people in the book do not have the mentality of being strong, and the weak do not have the consciousness of being weak. The weak ones inside don't see any respect or fear for the strong ones. The apprentice and the woman who can curse fire both know that the protagonist is very strong, but they just can't see any fear of the strong ones. They either yell or take the demands of the protagonist as a matter of course. It's embarrassing to watch!

Chapter 4 is too poisonous. Don't tell me what the protagonist is too tired. Why are ordinary people like this? I started talking about the protagonist spending three days in the forest. It's so dangerous. How can the protagonist still have a sense of prevention after spending three days? The witch later is even more poisonous. I really can't stand it anymore. Some comments say that the reader has a God's perspective. The protagonist Experience, this is a novel for readers to see, and it should be based on ideas that readers can understand (I don't mean to ask the author to write according to the readers, at least it must conform to the readers' general ideas, which can be different). After all, novels are for comfort. I wish your novels will get better and better, slip away

What a ridiculous start, I was immediately persuaded to quit in the first chapter! I thought that judging from more than ten years of experience, this book would definitely be a eunuch or a mess!

Where has your new book gone? Why has the book "Martial Arts World Playing and Training" been removed from the shelves?

I was looking for a book and found this one, and it was a bit strange. The book has poisonous points, which is not surprising, but some of them are extremely poisonous. The poisonous points that affect the performance cannot be changed, but if they are changed more rationally without affecting the plot, it will be frustrating. Next Door Holy Light has also completely overturned and rewritten it.

It's hard to imagine that this book was written by the author of Winning Big World