Master of the Elements

I just killed more than a dozen people~ The protagonist fell asleep in the carriage? With powerful magical pets protecting us! Then we're fine! Then the scene changes and the protagonist gets a bath? He spat out a mouthful of blood! What the hell?!

Chapter Four: After poisoning her, he unsuspectingly occupied the girl's carriage and fell asleep while she was carrying poisoned arrows? The knight didn't understand, but the girl understood a little.

The protagonist didn't use his signature third-level fireball spell in the opening battle of the novel, which means he was at most level 4, not level 5. A mere 200 meters is a distance that cavalry can cover at full speed in less than a minute. It's simply unbelievable that a level 4 mage could kill more than a dozen fully armed cavalrymen in such a short time. If he's that powerful, what idiot player would choose a warrior? Does anyone even play this kind of game?

The protagonist travels with characters from the game world. After rescuing people at the beginning, he unsuspectingly fell asleep in a woman's carriage. He was also given a bath, which was a little poisonous. He tolerated it first, and then the witch gave her a potion of proficiency in languages.

Having read 41 chapters, I feel the biggest flaw of this book compared to other fire-themed novels is that the strong characters lack a strong mentality, and the weak lack self-awareness. The weak characters show absolutely no respect or fear for the strong. The apprentice and the woman who can curse fire are both aware of the protagonist's strength, yet they show no fear whatsoever. They either yell and shout or take his demands for granted, making it incredibly awkward to read!

Chapter 4 was too toxic! Don't tell me the protagonist was too tired. How could an ordinary person be like that? It starts by saying the protagonist spent three days in the forest—where was it that dangerous? If the protagonist survived that, how could he still be so cautious? The witch later on was even worse. I really can't continue.

The beginning is ridiculous; the first chapter alone is enough to make you want to give up! Based on my experience of over a decade, I thought this book would definitely be abandoned or have a terrible ending!

Where did your new book go? Why was the one about raising characters in a martial arts world taken down?

I found this book again while searching for books, which is a bit strange. It's not unusual for a book to have flaws, but some are particularly problematic, even detrimental to grades, and they stubbornly refuse to change them. They're just being obstinate about making changes that are reasonable and don't affect the plot. Meanwhile, the book next door, "Holy Light," was completely rewritten.

It's hard to imagine that this book was written by the author of The Great World.