Circle of Doom

Chapter 450 or so is considered a dividing line Before that, the battles and daily life with the heroine can be written. That is to say, Qiao Xing's part was extremely uncomfortable to write (male tsundere is very disgusting) But after chapter 450, a lot of political struggles were mixed in, which made it boring and tiring to watch. (There are more than 30 chapters left and I haven't finished it yet, so I have abandoned it, and even the bowl of fish was confiscated)

1 I personally feel that the author's character creation is not very good, at least for now, there is no character that I particularly like 2 There is no brainless coolness 3 The plot is smooth and attractive 4 The writing does not give a sense of substitution 5 The writing style is good 6 ……

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I gave up. The protagonist's character is too wicked. He is not the kind of pure rationality like Cao Cao's decisive killing. He is as disgusting as a villain. Partnering with others to build a company, he owns 75%, and the other two partners add up to 15%, and he still has to make false accounts. Misappropriating commissioned income Going out to fight monsters, coldly violently and verbally insulting the heroine, destroying self-esteem, referred to as PUA, ambushing other teams to silence and steal money, and even blaming the heroine for being too beautiful and being targeted to silence her The protagonist is just a disgusting villain, and he has to erect an archway to act as a cousin.

Come to a sequence collection building to collect sequences from level D to level A. The template is as follows. Sequence d-03-Strong Effect-Strong: Increase vitality by an additional 25%. Introduction: Strong guys always die slower than others. 🤫

Chapter 58: I abandoned the book because of the character of the protagonist! Maybe the author will clean it up later, but I can't stand it anymore! The protagonist doesn't regard the other two partners as brothers at all! If the company does this, it still opens a new business! Are you the only one practicing? Even if you treat those two people as brothers, give them some money, explain it to them, and promise other compensation in the future, you won't cause so many people to abandon the book! No wonder he was drowned in the river! Deserve it! If I want to start a company with someone like you, I will sink you too!

I might have been able to read it 3 years ago, but I can't stand it now anyway. It's full of nonsense, and the development is too slow. I only read a dozen chapters, and two-thirds of it is the exchange between the sequence observer and the protagonist. It's too watery. The more than 2.4 Million words, and most likely 1.5 Million words, are all observation nonsense. It's too watery, and it makes people's blood pressure rise.

I hate those stories about straight male protagonists the most. All the male protagonists meet are beautiful women, and then the protagonist pretends to be cool in front of them, causing all kinds of ambiguities, and then pretends to be cold and disdainful. This kind of protagonist makes people feel the most depressed. If he really thought women would influence him, would he still show off in front of them? I thought this subject matter was pretty good at first, but as soon as I saw the introduction of the straight man, I immediately didn't want to read it. I will see later that it doesn't matter if there are more than one female protagonist, as long as the writing is exciting and reasonable. (○ﾟεﾟ○)

There is no woman in my heart, so I draw my sword to the God of Nature. The first page of the sword manual, forget your sweetheart. A woman will only affect the speed at which I draw my knife, Loli will not, she will make my knife faster. Neither can Sister Yu, she will make my knife even harder. The rich woman doesn't know how. She will buy me a good knife.

😏😏

Too many pitfalls have not been filled, and the combat power system that was set up at the beginning has not been followed up. As the power of the protagonist has increased, it has begun to fade and become the traditional Long Aotian. Several abilities have not been practiced at all. The observer can at least say a few words, and the fusion person and the summoner are never seen once. From the beginning of the Empire chapter, the plot only consists of four words, and it is pushed forward all the way. The supporting characters are almost gone in the later period. Bai Yuetong and Qi Xinzhu have become flower vases. Gu Fangyi and Zhou Kai have not shown their faces. The summary is that the writing is getting worse and worse. In the early stage, I can still watch the pure toilet paper in the later stage. After reading it, there is nothing to remember, only emptiness and a feeling that I have wasted my time. I do not recommend it to newcomers.

So, what does it mean what the Dawn Disk does? What is the evil practice of the Bai family in Guzui? What is the significance of the white green frost in the valley? What does Emperor Wuqiyi's actions mean? What is Bai Yuetong's ability? Why can't you practice? Why can she see so many things? The Wasteland Circle is only a few hundred kilometers away from the empire's border. Why does no one know about it? Can't the border be pushed across? Or is it Meiqi Styx's obstruction? But the empire is so powerful as it says, shouldn't Styx call in people to bulldoze it? Should at least explore it? Qi Xinzhu's teacher, what does that thing that the Pope gave him mean? What's the point of that stuff? Why does Doomsday want it too? The two discs of Dawn and Truth were broken, and several fragments of Dawn were also taken away by the protagonist. The end is in the hands of the protagonist. It is the city under the sea that seals Meiqi. Why doesn't Meiqi dare to enter the wasteland ring? What else is in the ring? Is it true that Gu said that the fewer people there are, the more high-level combat power humans have? What exactly is the meaning of Mechanical Heart? Who gave it its final orders? Is it true that Noah said you can make a lot of this thing? Dark energy is brought by immortality from the void in order to eliminate human beings. Inside the wall, I remember a passage saying that dark energy comes from radiation from the void, and there will be more and more of it. So where does dark energy come from? Immortality says that he exists only when someone remembers him. Did humans create him? Summoned him? Awakened him? Or what? Then why does he want to destroy mankind? Humans created him? Then will he kill himself if he destroys mankind? What does it have to do with humans destroying the environment? Summon/Awaken? He existed in the first place, but came out to cause trouble because of human destruction? Or is it because of the unconscious call of human beings that they come out to cause trouble? What is the protagonist doing? Dark energy is not only usable by alien species What is the strength of the sequence number? Appear sooner or later? Or random? Look at Aotu, Leviathan, and Meiqi calling him the second brother Devourer. I tentatively think that sooner or later it will be a matter of strength. It is known that Devourer is sealed in a disc, so humans have discs. Why should the three brothers Meiqi, Leviathan, and Anbo be placed outside and sealed by other means?

When I saw the confrontation between the human will and the world's will mentioned by the author in the last chapter, I was inexplicably reminded of a video about soul sacrifice I had seen on Station B. It was also the reincarnation of the world, the confrontation between the human soul and the world's will, but the ending was really too hasty, and there was no sense of shock of human beings' unyielding struggle against the world. I hope the author will work hard for the next book By the way, I finished it on QQ Reading. I don't know if it counts as one of the author's book fans... But I also started following the book when it had less than 100 chapters. I don't count it as a fake fan, hahaha 😃

The previous articles were all good, but when I wrote about Nightmare suddenly coming to a room with intelligence, I reluctantly read on. However, the 8th-level alien species later created a game space, and I couldn't stand it at all 😵

Chu Qi's death was definitely a failure. . . You can write death, but if the protagonist kills someone who can obviously be saved, and the protagonist still thinks he is superior, that's disgusting.

I abandoned the book after seeing Chapter 163,

After reading the previous point, my evaluation is that the setting is good, but the content gives people a vague feeling of nausea.

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The incredible protagonist makes me, a free prostitute, even unable to finish the free chapter. I can't help but subscribe to one chapter and comment on it. Why are so many people reading this book? Do you people who read it usually also like dime books? 🤔Otherwise, how can you continue to read this? You still have double standards. You can blame others, but you can't criticize others. This protagonist deserves to be thrown into the river.

To be honest, the protagonist with a short position at the beginning really put me off. There was no sense of immersion at all. The short positions I saw in reality were basically not handsome. I don't know if the author is a short position himself. Most of the handsome guys in reality are not a short position 😰😰

Chapter 330's description of the performance of the Inner Circle families is too witty. Throughout the chapter, the protagonist is directly describing the problems of each family, but how could people not know? The author lets the protagonist speak directly to convince others. It is too distracting.

The first few dozen chapters were okay, but by the first time I was exposed, they were getting weirder and weirder, and the more I read, the more uncomfortable I became, so I slipped away.

I'm very disappointed that my only fully-ordered novel is such a crappy one.

Come on author, I'll give you two monthly passes

I think the author's writing is still very good, not as bad as what was said in the comment area. Some people really started to hate this book out of nowhere. I took this book out of the blind box and read it safely. It is worth reading.

Starting in the middle and late stages, the protagonist is constantly being whittled away. ………………………… Isn't the writing in chapters 361-365 too outrageous? Not even one sentence is poisonous. ………………………… Forget it, I died from the poison, we're withdrawing.

This paragraph is a bit outrageous. You can pretend to be 13, but you can't act stupidly. Stories have their own inertia, and you can't just write them however you want. This is also the reason why many novels collapse in the later stages.

It is said that the author missed an apostle Lulu's 4 observers, the Devourer, fused and summoned The Queen's Charmer, Qi's Healer, Bai's Judge The First Apostle Destroyer, the 890th Pretender, the Giant Whale and the Doomsday Snake, there are only 11 in total.

Is there still hope for the bowl of fish stocks I bought?

The plot advances slowly, with useless detailed descriptions and explanations. There are too many dialogues, which is similar to how I couldn't write my high school essay. I just crammed in the number of words, which is the same as the story. At the beginning, the plot of one chapter can last for two chapters, and then it becomes more and more complicated. The title can give some clues, for example: Chapter 71 is ready to be released. The wall has reached chapter 73, and it is still coming out. Chapter 77 begins with a preliminary exploration, and chapter 80 leads to the first building; from 97 to 104, there is no obvious plot advancement that can be covered in one chapter. A new plot clue appears in 105, Little Swan Entertainment Club, and I won't talk about it after that. I can't watch it.

The first 400 chapters are pretty good, but the rest are dispensable. The disadvantage is that the protagonist is a stallion, and the prettier girls are basically male protagonists. This is also a shortcoming of old novels. Fortunately, the author writes emotional lines well, otherwise few people would accept this novel.