The Dragon Shepherd

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In fact, so far, I feel that the novel does not have a clear clue, and the relationship between the various copies feels very loose, without necessary connections. They are independent stories, and the purpose seems to be to enhance the strength of the protagonist. Unlike "The Charm", there is Nightmare Palace in the early stage, then Tianxiahui, then Vientiane City, and the Crescent Land and the Mystery of the World in the later stage. Each stage has a clear line. Although the later stages of Chongmei gave me the feeling that I couldn't hold it back and it was a bit scattered, but overall it was relatively coherent. It's not like "The Versatile Mage" where the Black Church line basically runs through the whole book. Not long after the beginning of the disaster in Bo City, the Black Church was introduced and it became a climax of the whole book. The Red Devil Line, which was drawn not long after arriving in the Magic City, also runs throughout the book. Afterwards, there are some clues in each part of the search for totems, the battle of the country, Egypt, and Athens. It feels very compact and has a sense of direction. What should I say about "Dragon Shepherd"? Although the book reads relatively smoothly and I still like it quite a lot, there is a sense of fragmentation and the twists and turns of each storyline are slightly stiff. It can be guessed that Li Yunzi must be a line to guide the development of the story, and Li Yunzi's uneasiness will definitely promote the upgrade of the map again and again, but this line is obviously a bit too scattered. There is no pace of Chu Mu moving in the same direction every time, nor is there the excitement of Mo Fan's group of friends exploring. Zhu Minglang really feels like a salted fish running around everywhere. It's already over a million words long, and I still haven't seen clearly who the enemy is or where the direction of progress is. Is it really just to train the dragon and improve its strength? The result can only be to change the map when Zhu Minglang's combat power is about to stand on the ceiling of a certain map. In this case, it will be a short story that cannot be strung together at all.

As freshmen, the new brothers saw that the Hua Qiu was over and left quickly. Don't read any further, it's just to make you feel uncomfortable. The book is a good book, but the writing is too slow when catching up on updates. The ending was too rushed.

I actually started getting into reading books after the Animation in France started airing, and it cost me a lot of money when I was in France. After recovering from his injuries, he went back to see Chong Mei. After that, he wanted to become a dragon priest. When I was about to start chasing the Dragon Shepherd, to be honest, I was very hesitant. I was afraid that the chaos would be like the whole method, and I couldn't write anymore, but I still started chasing. Until now, I have... Mixed feelings about this book? Because after that, Dragon Shepherd kept pestering my little coffers in my bookshelf, watching my little coffers shrink. It was uncomfortable enough. I thought about quitting but failed 😭 Maybe the only good thing is that this book has not collapsed yet... Talking about the plot of this book, I think it is like a matryoshka doll. After writing one world, an accident happens, and then it goes to the second world, again and again. , Which makes me worried that I won't be able to play in the conference. Also, when Xiao 🐷 was pretending, I personally felt that it was not fun enough. Anyway, I would go to the next world after pretending~ I am now in a final wait-and-see period. If the chaos drags on for too long, I may really jump ship {"NickName":"Late Autumn","UserId":321835861}

To describe this book, it is: the fragrance spreads for ten miles, and those who smell it cannot put it down. All the diners fasted for three days and three nights just to feast on this unparalleled delicacy in the world. When the food was ready to be eaten, the lid was lifted, and it turned out to be a 🐶💩! ! !

What kind of ending is this? I have been chasing it from the beginning. I have invested and given monthly tickets as long as I have them. In the end, I didn't tell anything about my life experience, Koi, Bai Qi, Qingzhuo, Nuwa Dragon, and Zilong. I have never met each other. The dragon I picked up for nothing in the fight against Hua Chou is gone. Shouldn't Hua Chou be the early mini-boss? In the last two hundred chapters, there are all kinds of logical confusion and contradictions, and the level and strength of the dragon keep changing. The heroine, the main character's parents, and my aunt have never taken care of me. If I randomly say that I will continue writing next year and get it in good condition, and I will write a new book, I will really make enough money. Is it casual? - I started watching the pirated version of Full Time, and later I came to read the original version. I also bought most of the pirated chapters in various reprints, but the ending feels unspeakable to be honest. It's over. This is the wave behind the Yangtze River pushing the wave ahead. In the last two chapters, I felt that I could write a thousand chapters, and then it ended? This is when you suddenly revealed that you are a fish in the sky and let everyone read your new book. What is your attitude afterwards, saying that this is the most unrestrained and happiest thing you have ever written. You can really write randomly. To be honest, I really like Uncle Luan's books, and Chong Mei also completed the chapter. To be honest, I really like the various settings of this book, such as the prophet and reincarnation. The various settings make me feel very novel, and I also like this book very much until the last chapter. The result is very disappointing, Moye, Bai Qi's reincarnation, Yushuo, is this Are these just to make people think of Chong Mei as a substitute? The endings of the anime Mirai Diary and Chong Mei are very similar, and they are both called masterpieces. Then the heroine of the work Mirai Diary inherited, the Supreme Command, looks the same as the heroine of Future Diary. In the end, it ended up being a bad movie. Do Chong Mei and his successor work Dragon Shepherd really have to correspond one to one?

I think many readers are already very kind and endure this blatant plot in order to wait patiently for the main plot. I reached the latest chapter after reading nearly 25 chapters. In my mind, such a plot with no information was at least the fourth wave. It stopped abruptly as soon as it got into the main plot, and then there were repetitive pretense and face-slapping routines that made people feel very uncomfortable. It was not even a calm daily routine that controlled the rhythm. The author seemed to really intend to treat everyone as a fool. The first half of the book is quite good, but the latter part, which constantly tests the reader's bottom line, is difficult to evaluate positively. I think that in addition to stating that it is not enough for the author to write randomly and not be exempted from liability, he should add another sentence: "I only care about the plot just to make things happen" and "I will not easily go into the main line before the chapter." At least he is sincere to the end, leaving more speechless.

There is no Cang Shen. The real Zhu Minglang died when he fought against Hua Qiu, and everything after that was just a fantasy before his death.

I have been with Mo Ye for many years in Yu Zhi Tian's "Beloved". Every time I think of the author who no longer appears, and every time I think of the Mo Ye who no longer appears, I always feel a sense of loss in my heart. But today, when I saw "Old Yu" reborn from the "chaos", I saw the touching feeling of being charming revived in Mo Xie. What comes to mind is not only the memory of the past lush years but also the expectations for the future life. Xiao Bai Qi reflects the long-cherished wish of the little fox, and the Sword Dragon Spirit reflects Mo Xie's dream. Back then I traveled through time and space to find you again and again. Now I wait for several years just to meet you again. It's not just the people in the book who are waiting, but also me in life. Finally, I really felt the emotion I felt back then...😭😭😭😭😭😭[fn= 12]😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

The protagonist should have his own role. When it comes to raising dragons, he relies solely on other people's knowledge. He can't even tell the difference between dragon species. Isn't it too childish to just be a nanny and buy some food to directly compare other people who raise dragons professionally? It should be shown that without the protagonist, this dragon cannot be so strong. This is only reasonable. Next, the sword Letting the protagonist fight with dragons can actually better reflect the protagonist's superiority over others. It is best for the protagonist to pay the price and work hard for the dragon to become stronger. Now it feels like any ordinary person can do it. It does not reflect the protagonist's personal charm. But I think the heroine is well portrayed.

I really hope that the sky for fish will still be the sky for fish, and don't let chaos tarnish the good reputation left by Chong Mei.

In fact, I think Uncle Luan can consider writing the next book, or continue writing full-time. The first thing I noticed about Uncle Luan was "League of Legends: Who Will Compete", which made me excited. However, the book fell apart in the later stages. After winning the S-League, it was unfinished. For example, I broke up with my girlfriend. For example, the Clash keyboard that paved the way for the whole book was not reflected. It might as well have said more about the Tiange keyboard at the beginning. For example, the climax of the fateful battle of the World Cup at the end was not burning at all compared to winning the S-League in the mid-term. It was just unfinished. Then there is "Pet Charm". I think this book is Uncle Luan's masterpiece. Although it was written early, it does not affect it as the pinnacle of the pet genre. Every time I see Mo Xie's reincarnation at the end, I cry. I really pay tribute to it. Then there is "Versatile Mage". I updated this book bit by bit, from the third year of high school to the third year of college. I personally think it is Uncle Luan's masterpiece. Putting aside the hurried ending after Mo Fan rose to the emperor level, the whole book really surprised me. However, the only drawback is that the ending is too hasty, leaving too many holes unfilled and leaving too much suspense. But I think this is Uncle Luan's peak. Let's talk about the book "Dragon Shepherd". The whole book is based on the background of dragons. The early writing was not bad, but after arriving in the Jiting Continent, the writing of the book was very average. Why do I say this? Compared with the previous book "The Full-time Mage", the plot of this book is a bit stiff and boring. There is no suspense in the front, and the subsequent plot appears suddenly and the logic is incoherent. Take the most classic scene where the protagonist returns to Jiujun Mountain in Jiujun Mountain and defeats the heroes with his skills. The sudden change in the protagonist's personality is too rigid. The previous foreshadowing does not clearly explain the strength of Mo Xie Jianxing. Although full-time Mo Fan is arrogant, he can be sure of his own strength because of his forbearance. The arrogance of Mu Long Zhu Minglang is to forcibly add the protagonist's aura, which is too rigid. Then in the later period of Tianshu Shenjiang, I didn't have the heart to read it. No matter from the boring fantasy plot or the emotions of the pet dragon, what I want to say is that this book aims to surpass the pet novel, rather than continue to write a bad fantasy novel. Oh, Uncle Luan, Uncle Luan, it was really uncomfortable to read, so I gave up this book and read the "First Sequence" and the sequel "The Naming Technique of the Night" by the elbow next door.

How should I put it, the single lead at the end should be very good, from wildness to order. From disorder to order, but the ending is too abrupt. There are really a lot of things that should be written that haven't been written, especially the scene involving Xue Hen's aunt Xing Hua. After so many months, I still haven't accepted this ending. I feel like I haven't heard the whole story at all.

What I wrote at the beginning is incomprehensible. It feels like a male cat in heat meets another male cat in heat and gets pissed on. It means he can't vent. If you are so suffocated, go find a place where no one is around to release your anger and calm down.

Had a quarrel? Failed the course? Lost in love? Are you still feeling lost, painful, and confused about all the bad things in life? Don't worry, we have a brand new psychotherapy here - come and read Luan's new book "Dragon Shepherd"! Guaranteed you three hours to enter the pit, five hours to pay the ticket, seven days to see the latest chapter... Of course, reading the latest chapter is only the beginning of the treatment, but at this time you are already immersed in it and cannot extricate yourself, eager to read the following plot. While waiting for the update, if 💊the pain like an addiction will spread to the whole body, 💊that will be the updated chapter. However, when you finally see the update, you find that these chapters are either short or chaotic, and there is not much actual plot at all - Uncle Luan is like the most savvy dealer, selling you only a very small amount each time to survive. At first, you will devoutly reward and wait for the update; soon after, you will start to verbally threaten Uncle Luan to update, and finally you will understand that Uncle Luan will not take hard and soft measures. If the previous preparations are taken well, the success will be more than half achieved. Recuperation measures: stay up late to read updates, post chapters and comments like crazy, feel lonely and other updates. The treatment course lasts for twenty-four hours, and it is best to insist on more than twenty-one courses. At the end of the game, you will no longer be lost, because you have reached the lowest point and can no longer fall; you will no longer be in pain, because you have been in pain to the point of numbness; you will no longer be confused, because you only think about Uncle Luan's update; Just because you have experienced the pinnacle of pain in the world - chasing "chaos" books! It is a feeling of excitement and loss, passion and indifference, madness and numbness; It is a kind of disappointment after the expectation is shattered, hope is rekindled in disappointment, and the pain of hope and disappointment alternates; It is a kind of loneliness when staying up late at night, looking at the renewed happiness in loneliness, and the fatigue and sleepiness of loneliness and happiness; It is a kind of desire that is getting stronger and stronger, a desire that cannot be satisfied, and a plea that is a mixture of greed and desire. Short treatment course, good curative effect, low cost, no harm to the body, zero risk, come for treatment! (💊 refers to the Chinese character "poison")

There are quite a lot of people complaining about it. Objectively speaking, the emotional impact of this book is indeed not as good as Chong Mei. However, the plot of this book is also real. In some aspects, it is similar to The Versatile Mage, but it is not as exciting as you think. It is a relatively good book, which is very good for me. Nowadays, there are fewer good books to read. Books that are refreshing and have a smooth plot are really rare.

I don't know if there is a storyline in chapters 253 and 254 that cannot be connected. If you don't know the author, I will let you know. If you know, can you please make up for it? If the connection is not correct, please explain! It makes me suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder😅

From a full-time job to a dragon priest, the fatherly love in Uncle Luan's works has always been silent, silently paying for his son. Mo Fan's father sold his house in order for Mo Fan to go to school. Daddy Pig withstood everything when he faced the Sparrow Wolf God for the first time, and later he was in a desperate situation. Father's love is silent, without any expression but he gives everything for you. Zhengfeng's father wrote a story about how he hoped his son would have a good future, but he didn't understand the emerging industry of e-sports, which led to early conflicts with Team Yu. Then Xiaobei's sacrifice made him slowly begin to understand and finally encourage Team Yu. I really like Uncle Luan's portrayal of the characters in the book, especially the supporting characters.

To tell the truth, it's so uncomfortable. I've loved Full Time since I started watching it. I don't know how many times I've watched it. At least I can understand it a little bit after it's finished. Dragon Shepherd, I'm chasing it every day. The first thing I do when I wake up every day is to search to see if there's any updates. I'm waiting every day. The pace of Dragon Shepherd is fast and slow. Some Waters is a bit exciting. After becoming a god, I felt it was the most exciting part of the whole book. Until the fall of Shenzhou, the opening chapter a hundred years later was still exciting but a little watery. Until now, the ending is so bad. After a hundred years, it felt like it was forced to be sensational and fast-forwarded to the end. Personally, I felt that there was still a lot more in Dragon Priest. There are a lot of story details that can be explored, and it may even feel like a full-time job. It's been another 4 years. The Dragon Shepherd is not as delicate and exciting as a full-time one, but I still read it every day and keep following it because I like your book, Uncle Luan. But such an ending, such an ending, I really don't want to tell the readers. Don't be responsible. At the very least, I feel that Uncle Luan is very irresponsible for his work. He is too sloppy. He is not in good health. I want to spend time with my family. I understand. I made a statement saying that I would take a break. I believe everyone can accept it. However, being so hasty gives people the feeling that Uncle Luan has exhausted his talents after working full-time.

To be honest, I've only read three chapters now. Generally speaking, just reading this little bit of a novel is not enough to judge the whole book, but Yu is worthy of being an experienced author, and the style of the entire book is revealed in the first three chapters. In just three chapters, we successfully assembled a goddess and a B-King, and successfully demonstrated the protagonist's personality that changes at a moment's notice. Goddess belongs to the ups and downs of life and there is nothing to say. Looking at his behavior, King B was obviously so angry that he couldn't think. But even a man who was so angry that he beat his enemy didn't forget to hold his enemy in a sea of ​​fire and strike a pose before continuing to go crazy. I thought someone was taking pictures of him next to him. The protagonist appears as a serious figure, which can be felt from the initial negotiation with the guard and the negotiation with the former city lord in prison. But the style of the silkworm-eating scene suddenly changed, and an old joke was thrown out without any foreshadowing by a character with a serious appearance and a teasing tone. At this level of the book, these three characters are almost stable. Will this book be fun? I believe that since Yu has written so many interesting articles, this book will not be bad. But is this book good? To be honest, except for the big breakthrough from Yeyue Xue to Chongmei, the subsequent full-time mage to this dragon level is almost the same as the Tang family's third young master from Douluo one to three. I knew that Luan was a fish about a year ago. I still remember reading Chongmei four or five years ago, and I felt quite disappointed when I never saw a new book about Yu. During this period, I also watched Versatile Mage, and I was shocked when I found out that Luan = Fish. The author who has written masterpieces can actually write such a thoroughly satisfying article. It feels like seeing Douluo Continent entering the interstellar era. I don't know how to describe it... But it's understandable. It's commercialized. Even now I can still remember the joy of watching Chong Mei six years ago...

I have read quite a few novels (maybe I can't compare with many book friends), and they were all very cruel. One of the three evil books of the year, Mo Hei, I happily followed and read more of it (it has a happy ending after all). Only when I read the end of this book, I turned the pages and wanted to finish it quickly. Unexpectedly, after reading the ending, I realized that it was better not to read it and give myself some space to figure out a good ending. The dragon pastor, the dragon pastor, the dragon pastor, and even the dragon pastor didn't find all the dragons in the end. The one who was in charge of the dragon food and the grass grower. There were so many supporting characters, not to mention the fact that one of them could achieve enlightenment like a chicken or a dog and ascend to heaven. Why don't you mention it? You are really just a tool, and you will throw it away after you use it. Some people have always said that it is not better to write more stories about the supporting characters and have a more complete image than to make a big splash? The setting of the story is really good. I really like this kind of animistic world (I also watched Chongmei at the time), but I feel from the bottom of my heart that such an ending is not worthy of such a good setting. To sum up, this story is about a young man named Zhu Minglang who sucked the blood of his teammates in four directions, and finally sucked the blood of his teammates (physical meaning). He was alone and carried, but the base exploded. Two words, body odor!

Is it possible that Luan is terminally ill? I knew I couldn't finish writing, so I just ended it.

"A Genius Who Bumps His Wife" If you want to see a dragon pet, you can basically leave Dragon equals martial arts Chapter 335 is abandoned (too poisonous. Accepting only the boss of the whole server is actually the same as the game. Directly write passers-by's shocked faces and then live a happy life The anger value of the boss is completely gone. If the update is too slow to write, just abandon it. It's really rubbish.

Hurry and finish the update, waiting for Versatile Mage 2

Come on, boss, write fanfics, I really can't stand it anymore

It doesn't matter if one person stays or four of them become one person, what's more important is that the important people stay with you and cherish every moment with them. There will never be a perfect ending, and an ending that is too happy will be a mess. Although Uncle Luan's books are full of pitfalls and confusing, sometimes you can still make some sense. It is more about the chaos of society, the choices in life, and the justice in the heart. Except it's too urgent, everything else is fine.

I got into Dragon Shepherd because I like full-time mages. I followed more than 200 chapters. I originally thought it was okay. But after watching the ending out of curiosity, I was directly persuaded to quit. I couldn't complain. The beautiful longing in my heart was shattered in a quarter of an hour. I was disappointed.

When I read unfinished novels in the future, I will definitely think of this book you wrote. And repeatedly remind myself to read carefully🙂🙂🙂

😢It's hard to calm down

I can still recite Chu Mu's fifteen soul covenants, Yushuo, Queen of Good and Evil, White Devil, Ghost Dragon, Ning, Demon Tree, Ye, Zhan Ye, Moye, Ghost Lord, Qin, Little Hidden Dragon, Ning Man'er, Dead Dream, and Misfortune. In fact, my favorite is the White Devil. He is like the mirror image of Chu Mu, a naughty younger brother. It's a pity that the White Devil has merged into Chu Mu's soul and it is difficult to come out again.