Please Be My Partner

The Paw Paw Team is a big success! The Paw Paw Team has made a great contribution! I love big dogs so much! It seems to rub all the heads of medium-sized dogs

To be honest, if it weren't for the fact that this book is rarely written by a dog-eat-dog, I would have just withdrawn from the qualification test in Chapter 23. In what age are you still playing waste materials? You are still forced to waste materials.

I feel that either the fairy tale world or the Paw Patrol Team is very good on its own, but when mixed together, it seems very confusing, and the focus suddenly shifts. 1. Paw Patrol Team: The dog beast master, a golden finger with a wolf-shaped pendant is already very good, and the world will be expanded with more plots and worlds. World view, I think it is relatively new in the content (steampunk + extraordinary) 2. Fairy Tale Kingdom: Goldfinger is the fairy tale of the original earth. It is also very exciting to directly create a fairy tale wizard. I personally think it is also very interesting in the wizard stream The author wants everything, but doesn't have the ability to want it, and the more he writes, the more chaotic he becomes. As for the various worlds, to be honest, the first world, the author didn't even write it clearly, so he started to fly around in other worlds, and the upgrade is unreasonable. It is said that the demonic tide has just started in this world, and the fourth level is the pillar of the kingdom, which is not the same. It must be a complete fourth level, most of which rely on swallowing inheritance or skill accumulation. As a result, there are more than 100 chapters so far, and the writing feels like there are as many third levels as dogs Summary: The subject matter is very good, but it is very confusing. The content is okay, but there is no obvious logic. The author thinks very well, but his ability is a bit poor.

I only read the first four or five chapters, and then I became familiar with it. The subject matter is very good, and the introduction is very attractive, but the author's writing style and plot arrangement are very discouraging. It's not that the writing is not good, or that the plot is very toxic, but overall it's similar to the second grade. I don't know if it's because the author has watched too many Japanese anime. Whether it's the choice of words or sentences or the character design, there is always a huge inconsistency. In terms of writing, you always talk about partners, family, etc. In terms of character, such as petting or arrogant dogs, it's not that it's not possible, but it needs to be localized. Since there is no gorgeous writing, then it should be more realistic. Do you usually talk about bonds, partners, etc.? Obviously not. This is one of the reasons why I have seen many works where the author is not bad at writing and the subject matter is great, but the results are unsatisfactory.

The fairy tale kingdom has collapsed since the beginning, and it has become more and more toxic as it goes on.

The biggest poisonous point of this book is that all the fighting power is put on a dog, and the protagonist is his own master. I don't know later, at least in the early stage, how many people were directly persuaded to quit? Who the hell is watching the dog? Aren't they all about the protagonist? If you don't improve your own strength, try to improve a dog and let the dog help you fight. You are not good at it. You put your strength in external objects instead of yourself. If there are any special circumstances, you will die without a place to die. It can only be said that the author is really blind and the popularity he accumulated for you in the last book is in vain.

Join the Paw Paw Team

The holy fire is shining, the holy light is shining, all my children, meow, meow, meow!

The holy fire is shining, the holy fire is shining, all my disciples, meow meow meow meow

I thought it was pretty good at first, except for the awkwardness with Gouzi at the beginning. At that time, the protagonist was pretending to be a child. Then I saw a test magic, making waves, and then being suppressed by unknown things, unnoticed, and turned into waste. It's too stupid to write directly in Menghui 2014. Then at the farm, it felt very good. A wave of people came to give me things, and I was questioned about the theft by the seniors who had no grudges with me. It was like dreaming back to 2014 and being slapped in the face. No matter how exciting the next one is, these two waves have too much stamina. I can't do it anymore. Run

Adult soul, child performance, can't stand it

After seeing the withdrawals from Chapter 23, let's see how many people are not used to the retro writing style╮(‵▽′)╭

It feels like the power system has collapsed after the fairy tale kingdom. I only got a forbidden object in a few pictures. It seems that I have become the leader of a big force. I can let others handle everything. I feel like I am the backstage. It is too separate from the lone ranger from a dozen pictures ago.

Isn't it right? The protagonist has far less understanding than a dog and still wants to be a master? I feel like the protagonist is a tool man. Maybe it would be better to put the pendant directly on the dog, without the need for a middleman to make the difference...

After reading more than 130 chapters, I feel that it is really different from the previous positioning. You think I am a magician? I can't do it, I'm an animal tamer. You think I am an animal tamer? I have mastered taboo, the power of fantasy. Level 2 kids can directly command level 3 bosses, and their combat power is close to that of legends. It's not that you can't have a golden finger, but this golden finger is really very different from your own positioning. Do you still remember what the author said in the introduction? You want to be a Paw Paw Team Now this development is a bit confusing.

How should I put it? It was a great idea, but it was poorly written.

At first I thought it was a dog that evolved, but in the end, who knows what kind of magician I want to be, and I have no idea what the golden finger is for? It's just like an energy converter. It really tricks people into killing them.

I thought it was mainly about writing about dogs, but in the end, there were a lot of plots and arrangements, which was quite boring.

There are some old poisonous points at the beginning, and then the writing is good, with only a few small poisonous points. The avalanche started from the fairy tale. I can only say that the author either sold his reputation or was praised too much and got sick.

This book is really good, the starting point is too big, there are indeed many good books buried!

I feel that the author's writing is too independent. There is no interaction. Strength and power, economy and business are all independent. Only exploration and adventure are left. But why explore and adventure? The reason is too pale. The more I read, the more bland it is. The more I read, the more chaotic it becomes. The more difficult it is to read.

Write a hundred or two hundred chapters, but you still have to go to school, and you lose your golden finger in vain

Come on, author, I will mail you to Pan Hong if you don't work hard. 😌

ᵎ(•̀㉨•́)و ̑̑ Come on

The main character is written very childishly, like a child, so I barely read it

I can read Western wizarding novels, but I can't stand Western fairy tales. You know the style.

Why are they all dogs🙂

Damn it, there's a new book, here I come!

Haven't watched it for a while. Please ask a big boss to explain all the realms.

I don't quite understand the idea of ​​giving a Westernized protagonist name to someone who is not specifically a Western fantasy novel. The second dimension is greatly influenced by Japanese comics. It is normal for the names of many anime and novel characters on the Japanese side to be Westernized. After all, Europe and the United States are the fathers of the Japanese. As for me, when I see the protagonist's name is so long and there's a dot in the middle, I don't have any desire to read it.