A Sword's Embrace of Qingcheng

It's also against the sky. No matter how you are in the sea, I can at least save your life. Although there are temptations, I am also teaching kung fu. The injured person in the front pretends to be a grandson. After the injury is healed, he will become an uncle. The person named Jia in the front took care of him for two days. The protagonist still remembers the old friendship. The master who saved your life went up and slapped him. What a bastard.

When I traveled through Swordsman, I felt that joining the villain Qingcheng was not a good entry point. The Qingcheng sect didn't have any successful members, and they even apprenticed under Yu Canghai (who has a bad image and is a bad person). How will it develop in the future? The first time he was forced to leave Qingcheng, and he was accused of bullying his master and destroying his ancestors, which is inconsistent with the title and setting of your book (you have to go out in an upright manner), and the second time he revived the Qingcheng sect, he had no initiative, and he had to wait until all the villain brothers and masters were dead? Are you standing by and watching, not repaying the favor of saving your life? Will you save Master Yu Canghai? If he is rescued, he will become a father. Can he help Yu Canghai clear his name and return to his lost ways? Not saving him would be ungrateful. Even if the protagonist is a modern person with a low moral sense and doesn't care about the reputation, he would still be too unlikable.

You still give people the impression that you talk too much, introduce too much, and are too watery.

It is acceptable to have too much nonsense, and it is acceptable to have the protagonist forcefully break out of his character, but Tian Boguang is unacceptable to act and win immediately. Anyone who crosses into Swordsman and Killer Tian Boguang has a wrong outlook on life, just like Linghu Chong.

The character design is fragmented. After reading the previous chapter, I thought the protagonist was a person with upright views. He could not accept that the Qingcheng faction wanted to go to the Miemen Escort Bureau to steal the sword manual, so he stood up to stop it. As a result, someone later came to recover Tian Boguang and a prostitute, "Gong although she committed the crime". It's so disgusting. The author is amazing. He has screened out those who like the righteous protagonists and those who like the evil ones.

Pick up the bowl to eat, put down the bowl and scold your mother

Chapter 60 begins, just take a look. Earlier, he inexplicably joined the Qingcheng faction and went to the Fuwei Escort Agency to stir up trouble. He also acted as a cousin and established an archway. When he met Tian Boguang, Qu Yang's subsequent operations were really shitty to me.

You have a fighting chance with Ximen Qing, who is born again, and your lower limit is eye-catching.

Becoming a disciple of Yu Canghai was a bit too early. Travelers, if they were rescued by Yu Canghai or raised by him at the beginning, or if they couldn't live without becoming a disciple, then that would be okay, but it's impossible to accept it now!

I feel that the writing is too detailed, the protagonist thinks too much, and the effective information density is too low to read.