A Sword's Embrace of Qingcheng

It's outrageous! No matter what, Yu Canghai saved your life, right? Even though there was a test, he was also teaching you kung fu. The injured guy acted like a grandson, but once he recovered, he became a big shot. The guy surnamed Jia took care of you for a couple of days, and the protagonist still remembered the past favors. But your master, who saved your life, goes up and slaps you across the face? What kind of chivalry is that?!

In the novel *The Smiling, Proud Wanderer*, I feel that joining the villainous Qingcheng sect as an entry point is a poor choice. The Qingcheng sect has no capable members, and the protagonist even takes Yu Canghai as his master (a bad image, irritating). How will the story develop?

You still give the impression of talking too much nonsense, giving too much introduction, and being too superficial.

Too much nonsense is acceptable, and the protagonist forcibly changing his character is also acceptable, but being hypocritical and taking in Tian Boguang is unacceptable. Anyone who transmigrates into The Smiling, Proud Wanderer and doesn't kill Tian Boguang is morally corrupt and just like Linghu Chong.

The character development is inconsistent. After reading the beginning, I thought the protagonist was a morally upright person who would stand up to stop the Qingcheng Sect from destroying the escort agency and stealing the sword manual, which is why I kept reading. But then he starts recruiting Tian Boguang and a lecherous thief, a "womanizer." It's disgusting. The author is clever; he's filtered out both righteous and evil protagonists.

The idiom "to pick up the bowl to eat, then put it down and curse" is used to describe the act of eating from a bowl and then cursing one's mother.

From chapter sixty onwards, just you'll see. It's one thing for her to inexplicably join the Qingcheng Sect and then cause trouble at the Fuwei Escort Agency, but she also acts like a prostitute while pretending to be virtuous. After meeting Tian Boguang, Qu Yang's subsequent actions are truly disgusting.

You're on par with those who write about being reborn as Ximen Qing; you're just shameless and attention-grabbing.

Becoming an apprentice of Yu Canghai is a bit too shabby. If a transmigrator is rescued or raised by Yu Canghai at the beginning, or can't survive without becoming his apprentice, that would be acceptable. But the current situation is unacceptable!

It feels like it's written in too much detail, the protagonist thinks too much, and the effective information density is too low.