The Invincible Treasure Chest

Real water... The author seems to be unable to grasp the focus of the narrative, always focusing on the corners, and the protagonist is not likable at all, even annoying

The writing is okay. After reading the first six chapters, I still write about the protagonist. Some of it feels very draggy. The details don't need to be too detailed, as this will make people unable to read.

I've only read two chapters, so I'll give you my personal opinion. The author's writing style is worthy of recognition, and he has the ability to describe the story in detail, which is something that many authors lack, including me. But I think some plots don't need to be too elaborate, just dig into a box, and there is no need for so many words. If the author could simplify it a bit, I think the results would be better!

After reading Chapter 45, almost everyone else's Chapter 6 or 7 was full of content!!!

There's too much nonsense. The word count is so low that I gave up after just reading a few chapters. It doesn't matter if it's a little watery, but this is too watery.

After reading Chapter 11, I really can't stand it anymore. Problems include: 1. It's verbose; 2. The outlook is incorrect; 3. The writing is too dense; 4. There's no sense of immersion; 5. I guess the author has read too many novels about gods and heroes. Do you understand?

I stopped reading after reading Chapter 9 and Chapter 10. Do you think that as a woman, you are asking too much from the protagonist? It doesn't require you to have big goals, and you don't even have a basic plan. The protagonist's so-called plan for the future is to have enough fun while you are young. To put it bluntly, doesn't it mean that the conditions at home are not bad, and even if the money is needed, the family can come up with it. For such a person, my ex-girlfriend didn't accept the rich second generation at that time, but I can understand even if she did.

This book is so watery that you can open two books from one box.

After looking at a few pictures, I feel like I was writing essays when I was a kid. There is no limit to what you can do with one thing. In my area, it's called pulling the grass and blocking the bag cage.

I strongly recommend that you don't read it, it's all nonsense