Pride and Prejudice, Dragon and Heaven: Seeking the Dao Across the Heavens

It's very well written. Twenty years ago, martial arts fiction would have had a place. But in 2025, this will just be rambling nonsense, lacking focus, flooding the internet with irrelevant information, and annoying people. But you are a talented person too. They managed to write several thousand words without any plot development whatsoever. Just like the first chapter.

I read six chapters, and it's all narration. The actual plot is just the protagonist falling down, Li Qiushui recognizing him as Wu Yazi, the protagonist saying he can get plastic surgery, the protagonist and Li Qiushui having sex twice, and that's it. Six chapters and that's all the plot. The rest is all narration.

Novels these days are so bland; the plot barely moves forward, it's all just a bunch of useless introductory dialogue.

It's meaningless. Writing a protagonist who's like Wu Yazi is just ridiculous. Writing a second Wu Yazi wouldn't be very interesting. It would be better to just write someone who's very handsome and charming, or even more handsome than Wu Yazi. You spared the protagonist by writing Li Qiushui because he's handsome and charming. It's reasonable for Li Qiushui to be a looks-obsessed person!

These days, novels where the protagonist is a scumbag are still quite rare.

It's already past chapter 30 and they still haven't started practicing martial arts.

Regarding the Sanlian edition, the Beiming True Qi left by Li Qiushui and that of Wuyazi are likely not the same version. Li's version only allows for absorbing internal energy, while Wuyazi's Beiming True Qi was cultivated independently. Duan Yu's Beiming Divine Skill internal energy is never referred to as Beiming True Qi in the narration.

"Multiverse Flow," you've been creating a single world for so long, I'm speechless. It's a waste to discard it, but tasteless to read, too lazy to look for more. Please improve the pacing and plot! 😒

It's well-written, but too padded, and the main plot is underdeveloped. It's already chapter 120, and the main storyline hasn't even started. Why use this writing style for fanfiction? I came to this site specifically for the fanfiction, and after all this time, the main storyline still hasn't begun? Isn't this just clickbait and a scam?

The best part of this book is when the protagonist cures Li Qiushui's illness; what's the rest of the story? Either start from the bottom and gradually get closer to Li Qiushui—why start so high? Then begin dealing with the lower rungs of the martial arts world and fighting. Do you think that would be engaging? Think about it yourself; don't just write whatever comes to mind.