Pride and Prejudice, Dragon and Heaven: Seeking the Dao Across the Heavens

Very well written. Twenty years ago, martial arts had a place for you. But in 2025, you are just talking nonsense, without focus, overwhelming the golden mountain, and annoying people. But you are also a talent. Without any plot advancement, I was able to make up a few thousand words. Just like the first chapter. There are a lot of bala bala, just the last sentence has some information. Another example is Chapter 2. Bala, there are a lot of them, just the last sentence has some information. Another example is Chapter 3. There are a lot of bala bala, but there is only a small amount of information. The plot advances extremely slowly. But! This does not prevent you from being a master. Maybe this is the writing technique you developed after writing more than 5 million words. Strive for this book to upgrade you to lv3!

After reading six chapters, the whole story is narrated. The only real plot is that the protagonist falls. Li Qiu Shui thinks he looks like Wu Yazi, and then the protagonist says he can have plastic surgery. The protagonist and Li Qiu Shui do it twice. That's it. Chapter six, the plot is just that. The rest are all narrated introductions. Not to mention that everyone has basically watched Tianlong. You know a little bit about character relationships. Even if it's an original world, that's not how you introduce the background.

Nowadays, the novel is really weak, the plot is only a little advanced, but it is all a bunch of nonsense about the introduction.

It doesn't make sense. Writing a protagonist who looks like Wu Yazi is speechless. Writing a similar second character like Wu Yazi doesn't make much sense. It's better to just write someone who is handsome and charming, who is better than you, or more handsome than Wu Yazi. If I write about Li Qiu Shui, I let the protagonist go because he is handsome and charming. Because Li Qiu Shui is a good-looking person, it makes sense!

These days, it's still rare to see novels in which the protagonist is a scumbag.

It's been over 30 chapters and I haven't started practicing martial arts yet.

As far as the triple version is concerned, the Beiming and Wu Yazi left by Li Qiu Shui should not be the same version. Li's version can only absorb power, while Wu Yazi's Beiming Qi was cultivated by himself. Duan Yu's internal power of Beiming's magical power has never been called Beiming Qi by the narrator. Xu Zhu's internal power obtained from Wu Yazi has always been called Beiming Qi, and the various special effects of Beiming's Qi have always been emphasized. Duan Yu's internal power has no special effects.

Zhutianliu, you have always been in this world and I am convinced. It is a pity that I abandoned it because it is tasteless and too lazy to find a book. The plot should be more compact 😒

It's well written, but it's too watery and overwhelming. It's 120 chapters in and the main plot hasn't even started yet. Why do you have this kind of writing technique to write a fan novel? I see that you, Shu Ming, came here just for the sake of fandom, but it took you so long to write and the main plot hasn't even started yet? ? ? Isn't this headline fraud? ?

The most interesting part of this book is that the protagonist treats Li Qiu Shui. What is written next? Or you start at the bottom, slowly get closer to Li Qiu Shui, and start so high? Then start to deal with and fight with the bottom of the world. Do you think it can attract people? Think about it yourself. Don't write randomly.