The Cow of the Cowherd

Niu doesn't practice heavy weapons, clubs, swordsmanship, or embroidery. Author, please forgive me, I really have no interest in reading this.

The story of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl is strange in itself. How could a fairy fall for a mortal? Their life levels are different. How could a fairy, seeing a mortal covered in microorganisms, bring herself to eat him?

There's a reason this book did poorly. The way they insisted on pairing the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl up at the beginning was absolutely disgusting. Why couldn't they find a way to marry an ordinary woman if they wanted him to have a complete family? They could have left, but they insisted on watching the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl get married – disgusting!

This is the most padded book I've ever read, bar none. The zombie-hunting scene alone has over 110 chapters of padding. The book is only over 500 chapters long now, and over 100 chapters are spent on catching this zombie. Can you believe it?

Don't you think your content is verbose? You're forcing words into it, turning a perfectly good storyline into a rambling mess that severely lowers the reading experience!

Is this toxic? He's already time-traveled, yet he keeps mentioning his ex-girlfriend's past life and stuff like that?

You talk too much nonsense, always bringing up things unrelated to the topic. And you always like to ask and answer your own questions. You raise concerns first and then immediately give an answer; this contradiction is so jarring to watch. For example, the previous sentence says, "But be mindful of the loyalty of the three spirits and the ghost soldiers."

They just fill in the numbers, repeating the same phrase over and over again. They explain the cultivation techniques from the beginning every time.

Water—70% of the chapter is speculation and conjecture, with no real plot development. For example, if a chapter begins with the protagonist asking, "What is Yinglong?", Can you believe that 3,000 words later, the next chapter begins with "Yinglong is composed of xxxx"? This shows how much filler there is.

Too much repetitive rambling and meaningless filler makes it impossible to write anything substantial. Your book is so short it could be read in a few lines without issue. Novels need to be concise, otherwise it'll just be filler.