The Cow of the Cowherd

Niu doesn't practice heavy weapons, sticks, swords, and embroidery. I'm sorry, the author, but I'm really not interested in reading it.

The story of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl is strange in itself. How could a fairy fall in love with a mortal? The level of life is different. If a fairy looks at the microorganisms all over the body of a mortal, can he swallow them?

There is a reason for the poor performance of this book. At first, it was really disgusting to me that the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl were paired together. If you want him to have a complete family, why can't he find a way to marry an ordinary woman? Whether I can leave or not is because I want to watch the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl get married. It's disgusting. I have to enter the game and then I'm afraid of being eliminated. It's so disgusting. No matter what the rest of the writing is good or not, I can't stand what I've written in the past. It's so disgusting that I opened the door for you. It's so disgusting.

This is the most awesome book I have ever read. It is one of the best. I can fight a zombie for more than 110 chapters. This book only has more than 500 chapters so far. More than 100 chapters are about catching this zombie. Can you believe it?

Don't you think your content is wordy? You force the words into words, but you write a very good story line in a verbose way, which really detracts from people's reading sense!

Poisonous? You've traveled through time, and you still talk about your ex-girlfriend's past life every day?

Too much nonsense, always talking about things that are not on topic. And he always likes to ask and answer himself. You raise concerns first and then give answers immediately. I feel uncomfortable seeing your inconsistency. For example, the previous sentence talks about the loyalty of the three spirits and the Yin soldiers. The last sentence says that the Yin soldiers will not rebel if they need his divine support. The golden eagle among the three spirits sincerely surrenders, so the wolf spirit and pig spirit will not rebel. Damn it, you already have the answer in your mind, why are you pretending to be directing and acting for me?

Make up the numbers, and repeat a paragraph over and over again. Every time you practice the exercises, repeat them from the beginning like this.

Water, 70% of a chapter is spent on conjecture and conjecture, and the plot is not advanced. For example, at the beginning of one chapter, the protagonist asks: What is Yinglong, can you believe it after 3,000 words? The next chapter begins with Yinglong being composed of xxxx, which shows how watery it is. The key story is not told well and it is too boring. It is not as worth reading after it is released as it was before it was released. To put it this way, I originally planned to watch it all, but the more I read about it, I lost the intention to subscribe. I just glanced at the chapter names to know what the content was. Water's conspiracy theories and speculations were boring and boring. The more I read, the less I wanted to read it. It was a waste of a good idea.

Che Zhuluan talks too much, and a lot of it is meaningless hydrology. You can't write well at all. I think your book has no impact on just one glance or a few lines. The content of the novel must be concise, otherwise it will just be watery.