Immortal Fate Is Not Fate

I've read dozens of chapters, and it feels a bit pity. Let me share my feelings! This book is like a good house facing south and north, with plenty of sunshine and good air circulation! It's great, but it's a pity that it's a rough house. You can't live in a rough house! The biggest shortcoming is the lack of details. The author is as lazy as a pig's feet. He only knows how to level up and has no skills! The most obvious point is that after establishing the foundation, readers still know nothing about the sect. The sect is the home where Zhu Tiao lived in the early days. Its history, its structure, its leadership, the daily life of the disciples, etc. Are not included! The geographical description is also unclear. Just talking about the state is meaningless, you have to talk about the direction! Journey to the West is very obvious, the four continents! There is another big problem. There are too few important supporting characters. The role of the heroine is to accompany the pig's feet to grow up. Since there is no heroine, you must have a male supporting character! Of course, the last one may be more difficult, describing the characters in detail, including some body movements, facial expressions, etc.! These are all to increase the sense of substitution, but none of them are. Just a frame! Looks so tired! In the end, I still say that, no matter how good the rough housing is, it can't retain people!

Ordinary people have abortions, and the platinum gods have female protagonists and n number of confidants, but they just want to be unconventional. Originally, whether there is a female protagonist is up to the author, so why should there be a special label? I don't believe that cultivating a ten thousand-year-old eunuch is popular taste. Anyway, I won't read books without female protagonists.

Finally, I found a novel without a female protagonist. I have read many novels with a female protagonist. There is no woman in my heart. I draw my sword and draw my sword to the God of Nature. The male protagonist's heart is for the Taoist Way, which is a good material for cultivating immortality. Having a female protagonist changes the taste. You can't ask the female protagonist to be a unique genius, so it will turn into a pile of dust in the end. Normally, there should be no female protagonist on the male protagonist's path to immortality. If there is a female protagonist, it will only increase troubles and affect the way of cultivating immortality. If you have no Taoist heart, you can have a female protagonist.

Come on, author, there is finally another fairy tale novel that is neither a stallion nor a novice. The character design of the protagonist is also very good. He is no longer a loser who just walks around and does everything, like a firecracker, and he doesn't just lick women when he sees them.

I suggest you have a female protagonist, otherwise there will be many fewer people

I haven't read it yet. Xianxia has only written 880,000 words. Will it be completed in a hurry or normally? Friends who have read it can tell me.

Asking for collection🥺 Asking for recommendation🥺 Cute new author begging online🥺🥺🥺

Can you still build a foundation at the age of 90? And he is still considered young among the foundation builders? Shouldn't 30 be the limit for everyone? After the age of 30, it is difficult to successfully build a foundation, and the lifespan during the foundation building period should only be 2 to 3 hundred years, right?

The promise in my mind

Don't watch sand sculptures, don't watch dog licking, don't read joke collections

No heroine, just a man (ಡωಡ)

Come and encourage me~ Come on, the author~

Is it okay to write about family traditions now? My friend wrote a book "Starting from Family Cultivation of Immortality". Please give me some advice.

The book is a little worse than expected. There is still a lot of room for improvement. After finishing the book, you can consider rewriting it to find the feeling. If a book is like a drink, then this book is just a drink without taste [features, style] 🤫 The above is a book review written a long time ago that has not been published. 😵 I saw the ending today, which brings an end to my senior year of high school. My thoughts are gone.

The protagonist, well, very ordinary, ordinary and handsome.

I like the author's style

Is the protagonist decisive in killing?

No causal relationship? The content is not compact, the logic is unclear, and the storage bag is picked up for no reason! The storage bag turned into a zombie bag, and in the end, I got one. It explained the sect of casual cultivators in a long way, which was funny. Not a casual cultivator! He became a disciple of the Three Corpse Cult again. After talking so much, do you think he has a story? The result is nothing more.

Brothers come to write a novel about a family cultivating immortals

I heard that after the post is refined, one hundred contribution points can be increased? 🤓(Crazy hint)

It feels like the protagonist has too many opportunities, one after another. Was he the savior in his previous life?

The writing is good, but the plot details are poor. The protagonist has no personality. It's just plain water.

What's the use of starting at 5,000?