Let's Start with the Main Road Battle

Come on, come on, come on, there aren't many people on the road.

Dao fanfics are the worst to write about. The combat power in the middle and late stages is too high, and the author of the original text has basically blocked the fanfics. What you think is rebirth, time travel, golden finger, system, portable grandpa, no one else knows about it. In fact, in the eyes of high-level people, it is like looking at the lines on the palm of your hand, which is clear at a glance.

In fact, the template of Dao Dao, which starts with the direct lineage of the Chen family, should be very exciting, with all the resources available. The protagonist has a big gold finger, but he is still being suppressed? I don't understand. . . Isn't Chen Taiping still alive? Why did he start to fall apart? The Chen family, which had a bunch of sons-in-law to support the situation, suddenly had a super-class family, and as a result, the support in the early stage was so strong. . . KouKouSouSou. It feels like there is more for the son-in-law than for the protagonist. So only villains from aristocratic family backgrounds can exert their power?

No wonder your previous books did not do well. Although you are better than many authors, your writing style is really poor. . . In addition to learning the gorgeous rhetoric of Dao Zhengfeng, his details are handled, his sentences are smooth, and his words are concise and concise. He has not learned anything about summarizing complex content in simple words. Moreover, the background of the novel is still fan fiction, so the setting and other things can be directly used. One thing to say, after reading so many novels, writing skills really depend on talent and accumulation.

It's a pity to write about fandom with your style of writing. You can borrow his settings to write fairy tales.

A batch of water. The first-grade golden elixir of Dharma and Qi Dao, and you can join the top ten disciples in more than 10 chapters. You have practiced the magical power used by your opponent, but you are still being suppressed and beaten. You laughed at Yipin Jindan.

The great thing about this book is that you can't see any problem even if you jump through more than a dozen pictures. You can still connect. Author, are you a fool? Your writing style is so familiar to me 🙂

Recently, I have been focusing on how much fighting experience the protagonist brings when he travels back to kill demons. As a result, in the first fight, the mysterious light is smashed into the opponent's face, and the second layer of mysterious light crushes the third layer of mysterious light. Is this the fighting experience that the protagonist brought back from tens of thousands of years ago? Boring and boring

It's full of water, and it's crazily filled with water in all kinds of inexplicable places. This is the author's old problem, and it happens in every book. If it weren't for this stinky problem, several of the author's books wouldn't be as successful as they are now. Why would he lose all his popularity with fans just for a few extra chapters?

An alchemy meeting, ten days, ten chapters have not been finished, and there is basically no plot, only a lot of description. Your words must serve the plot. To be honest, my patience is wearing thin.

The author uses poison to screen readers before putting it on the shelves, here's what he says

This is the reason why I don't read fantasy novels. It's too watery. All kinds of watering is added, and watering is done after it is put on the shelf. A fight can fill dozens of chapters. There is even a novel. Three years have passed and the tea party has not started yet. I don't know if it will be three years and three years. Are you really preparing a book for freedom of wealth?

This is so unbelievable. I only ordered a few hundred fan points, which are all about introducing things from the original work. I've read the fanfic, but I still don't know the setting of the original work? The writing is so poor and the updates are so slow. Your diagnosis is outrageous.

It's too watery. I estimate that there will be more than 30 chapters of elixir formation, another 50 chapters of various shocks, another 300 chapters of birth, and more than 100 chapters of various shocks. If no one subscribes by then, they will probably be eunuchs if they can't defraud money!

It's so bad that people who read it will be angry. This author's previous Dao Dao fan directly pasted the original text and was removed from the shelves. Just read it if you can bear it.

He spread the poison before it was put on the shelves. He boasted about the five major names for a long time, and also boasted about the super name for a long time. As a result, his own family did not help, and he was bullied by the foreign surnames, and he still dominated the sect. An outrageous plot that makes the protagonist look like a passerby

If you haven't eaten shit, you can go in and take a look. What the hell is written? It's just a piece of shit. Can you please stop insulting Dao Dao and change it to a fanfic?

It is suspected to be a parallel-imported vest from the author of "Lian Dao Sheng Xian", please take a rest and avoid lightning.

What is the latest chapter about choosing a blessed place? Is the protagonist who is the first of the five major surnames still doing this? Qin Mobai hasn't come to power yet, and the aristocratic family hasn't declined yet. It's so difficult to choose a blessed place, isn't it because there are aristocratic families who have left behind? You can't even write a show-off plot?

More updates, this won't be enough to fill the gap between your teeth tomorrow.

Even if you say it looks good, you can still look at it. If you say it looks bad, you can still look at it. It would be a pity to throw it away if it is tasteless. Also, there are too many stories about shocking the whole world, and within three chapters, either the clan is shocked, the sect is shocked, or the whole world is shocked. So shocked.

Your direct descendants from the top five surnames get the same treatment as Zhang Yan😅, and you have some shitty privileges. It's watery and has no content.

Dear fellow Taoists, in one sentence, which is the most profound quotation from Dao Zhengfeng? The young man carries his sword and searches for the Immortal Tower on the mysterious cliff. Once he hears the Tao, he can travel around the world freely. I have been happy all my life, writing about the Spring and Autumn Period with wild pen. Immortality is not my wish, it only relieves my worries. ~ Banquet Changsheng

There is a high possibility that Zhang Yan will not appear in this book and a eunuch will be needed.

The protagonist, Goldfinger, is too strong, and it feels like all the good things have been taken away, which is not interesting.

Water City is only one aspect, the main reason is that the protagonist has so many adventures stacked up, and in the end every fight with the same level lasts for a long time. It is too outrageous, so I gave up.

I understand everything, I can only say hurry up 🤐

It took more than a month to write a sword fight. Besides, the protagonist doesn't even use a sword, so what kind of sword fight is there?

The writing is quite good, and the rhythm is in line with the rhythm of the original work. I hope to continue writing and see Zhang Yan and the protagonist in the same frame.

Look at the chicken feathers. The updates are slow and outdated. Just look at the title and you will know what you are writing and where it is. . . If you ask me, you might as well open a new book and stop being stupid.