Become an Immortal Alone

Why do you give away random things when your level is high, such as foundation-building pills and magic weapons? There is nothing to say about the relationship, but the relationship is above that of a passerby and below that of a friend. When you are at a high level, they are worthless in your eyes, but when you are at a low level, did that senior give you these things? You worked hard for these things at first, but later you gave them away as worthless things. Just owe, cheap.

This book is mainly copied and the writing level is relatively poor.

I have read less than 400 chapters, and my overall evaluation of this book is 4 stars out of 5. First of all, let's talk about the shortcomings of this book. The first is that the proportion of references in the early stage or the first hundred chapters or so is a bit large. The second is that even when I read it at the starting point, I found a lot of typos (I think this is because the author is still working and is too busy to check). Finally, I think the biggest shortcoming is that some plots are quite poisonous, which has led to the loss of a lot of readers. Let's talk about the advantages. Let me start by saying here that I have finished reading Mortals' Immortality, and I have also read the latest version of Mortals' Immortal Realm, but I have not read Zifu Immortal Yuan. In fact, in my opinion, there is no problem at all in the writing style of authors borrowing from each other. The main reason is that the plots at the beginning are too similar, which makes readers who have seen similar plots no longer feel fresh, so the probability of abandoning the article is relatively high. However, the author is aware of this problem and basically writes his own characteristics for the subsequent plots. The author's power system in this novel about cultivating immortals is quite good, especially since the protagonist has a golden finger, but he doesn't go crazy across realms to fight back. The protagonist fully demonstrates the hard truth that keeping a low profile is king. Of course, there are several times when he forcibly lets go of the enemy's poisonous points, causing himself to be in danger or on the verge of death (for example, the time when Silver Corpse Emperor Kun was plotted against by a villain). But later I realized that this was the author's plot arrangement. Although I felt that the protagonist's IQ was weak, in fact, from another perspective, considering that the protagonist has only been cultivating immortality for decades, it is understandable that he is a little immature in his thinking. And when we readers read the book from the perspective of God, of course we will think that the protagonist is too stupid. The biggest advantage of this book lies in the control of the plot. The adventures, adventures, and trainings are generally very smooth. At the same time, it has also created a group of villains who are both good and evil, as well as many friends, and of course many confidantes. Finally, I am here to sincerely recommend this book to everyone. If you read it patiently, you will still find it good.

Every chapter is a battle of wits, and you will be poisoned to death if you vomit.

The biggest flaw of this book is the emotional line of the male protagonist. The male protagonist is a scumbag!

The author's writing style is really poor, and the descriptions in many places are very blunt.

The idea is good, but the author's writing style is too poor, and he cannot describe some details of the content very well. In many places, the words are used incorrectly and the meaning has completely changed, and it is not fluent at all. I don't know if the author has re-read it and revised it after finishing it. There are too many places where the writing is not rigorous and there are many typos. I hope the author can improve it in future updates.

I couldn't stand it after reading the first chapter. Combined with the book reviews, it's really poisonous.

Why is it that your book is all about the late stage of foundation building and the late stage of golden elixir, but not the early and middle stages? Anyone who comes out is the late stage, the late stage, the late stage! Can we find a balance? It should be a ratio of 7 early stages, 2 mid-term stages, and 1 late stage! 😅😅😅😅

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Today when I was looking at the author's information, I suddenly saw the creative process that I posted before. I thank the author for persevering. Although the writing is average, I have been following it for several years, and it is considered food and grass. I can't get rid of my fans. I hope the author can write better and better

Inconsistency

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It's so well written, why isn't it popular?

This book is good, but it doesn't have to be pretentious. The male protagonist is calm and cool.

I advertise this book everywhere, hoping that more book lovers will pay attention to this good book.

Although I don't have money to watch the original version, I still want to vote for recommendation.

This book has been advertised a lot in circles.

The protagonist's divine consciousness detection at the stage of becoming a god is only 12 miles, and Xiang Kuang's 7 miles, which is too little. After re-watching the protagonist's detection when he first advanced to the early stage of Nascent Soul, the detection was 10 miles.

There should be 4 beads: 1 for the ghost cultivator, 1 for the magic canthus, and 2 for the coffin.

Persuading people to quit, stallion story, at first it was said that the protagonist is a love novice, forget it, but later he married two wives and had a threesome, can he still be a novice? All the women like the male protagonist, the amnesiac female disciples all fall in love with the male protagonist, and the main point is that the male protagonist will not refuse. What kind of trick is this? Is the male protagonist a heartthrob?

This book is not satisfactory. I recommend a good book called Xianxia, ​​Asking the Immortal Way. If you don't read it, come hit me.

The realm of cultivating immortality in the human world includes the realm of Qi training (called Qi practitioner), the realm of foundation building (this realm is the beginning of cultivation, so it is called monk), the realm of golden elixir (respectfully called Master), the realm of Yuanying (respectfully called Zhenren), and the realm of transformation into gods (respectfully called Zhenjun). The spiritual realm includes the realm of refining the void (respectfully called Mingjun), the realm of integration (respectfully called Mingzun), the Mahayana realm (respectfully called Earth Immortal), and the realm of transcending tribulations (respectfully called Lingxian). In the realm of immortality, it is better to arrange realms such as True Immortal (honourably called Shangxian), Heavenly Immortal (honourably called Luo Tianshangxian), Jinxian (respectfully called Immortal Lord), Taiyi Jinxian (respectfully called Immortal Lord), Daluo Jinxian (respectfully called Immortal Emperor), and Shengxian (respectfully called Daozu).

The Huiyuan Pill mentioned earlier in the book is a holy medicine that mainly restores mana during the Qi training period, but is useless during the Foundation Establishment period. The Huitian Pill is a holy medicine that restores mana during the Foundation Establishment period.

I don't understand that this book is very well written, but the subscription is not satisfactory. I read some books written by great masters, but the contents are really unsightly, and they are much different from those of becoming an immortal alone. I sincerely hope that readers who are not reading the genuine version can subscribe to the genuine version. I'm really worried that if we don't support good authors and serious authors, we will lose the opportunity to read good books in the future. Please work hard to promote this book so that the author can survive, otherwise it will be everyone's loss. I would like to reward you with a reward of 10,000 to express my gratitude. Grateful

Others form nine-level foundation-building elixirs, you form twelve-level foundation-building elixirs, others form one golden elixir, but you form five golden elixirs, and you have reached the golden elixir realm in body enhancement. It would be too exaggerated not to say that you can cross a big realm together, but you can always cross any small realm. You can't even cross a small realm. Why use this setting? Compared with the mortal Han Laomo, Xian Ni's Wang Mazi is indeed far behind.

Let me tell you, as a reader who has read many novels 😥 Du Bu Cheng Xian is the only novel that I have persisted in following, with more than 4,000 chapters, and I have read it for more than four years. Although everyone says it is very poor, at least compared to other novels, the writing style and details are better than other novels. (Complaining: the author has a lot of typos.) In terms of the structure and logic of the novel, although there are some parts that are unreasonable and imbecile, at least it is much better than other novels where the villain is mentally retarded and the protagonist is pan-intelligible. In shaping the character of the protagonist, the author wants to create a person who values ​​love, justice, integrity, carefulness, meticulousness, and scheming. Some middle school teenagers who are passionate, impulsive, and always ready to fight for beautiful women may not like this. In fact, Lu Xiaotian's character is more in line with the Chinese character. Many novels are easy to end after entering the fairy world. Fortunately, the author has created a grand fairyland structure. If the author can use foreshadowing and shape other branches well, it is still worth looking forward to. The novel "One Step into Immortality" is very good but has not become popular. One of the reasons why it is not popular may be because of the reference from the previous one (which the author also admitted), but later the author still wrote some of his own things and his own style. The second reason is that the chapters are too long, which will deter impatient readers. The author can actually reduce the number of chapters by lengthening the chapters (complaint: each chapter is not long, maybe the author is doing it for Shui Quanqin's bonus). Thirdly, the author's novel concept, novel logic and writing style need to be improved. If the above three major problems can be solved, I think the author can still be popular. If the author can persist in his dream of being a novelist, he will create more good novels. (Complaint: Other mentally retarded novels are all popular, but there is no reason why One Step into Immortality cannot be popular. In my novel rankings, apart from Devouring the Starry Sky, Swordsmanship is the only one, and One Step into Immortality ranks third)

I really can't imagine that the nine-color golden elixir that I spent so much effort to form is not as good as other people's ordinary elixirs. What a damn pill! Then there's the Holy Mother Bitch. Let the enemy go. It's disgusting to see the enemy escape.

The exemption is limited, can I read it within six days?

I have read more than 500 chapters, and I feel so frustrated after watching the golden elixir. Not to mention the protagonist's cheating, the ammunition is just like beans, and the nine-color golden eggs are useless after a lot of effort. It takes a lot of effort to beat the golden eggs in the early stage and the middle stage, but still relies on the external force of the formation to kill the opponent. The time-consuming and laborious upgrade is not as good as others who haven't cheated on it. I'm tired of watching it.