Qingyu Practice Notes

The writing is good. I feel that the author is not very good at writing about farming, but he is good at writing about fighting skills and making friends with colleagues. The plot was bland, there was no sense of expectation, and everything went smoothly. The author's writing is a bit like the author who wrote about Zhang Yan of the Mingcang sect, especially when writing about fighting techniques and verbal abuse. In addition, writing about monsters is too human-like, the map is too small, and it seems useless to build a water mansion. It is tied to the protagonist here. I thought I would write about leading the monsters in the water mansion to fight, or about teaching a few cute little monsters, or about discovering spiritual creatures and starting farming. In fact, the style of practicing alone in the beginning was a bit like White Snake or Green Snake, which is the snake book anyway. Later, I went to fight to become famous, and luck turned into a dragon. I felt that it would be difficult to write in the follow-up. The plot was too ordinary, and the treasure hunt was no different from writing about human cultivation. The author can read The Deer Demon and The Legend of the Green Monkey. I think they are both interesting books about demon protagonists. Come on, it's great, the writing is good, but the plot and character design are a bit simple.

Stable for three chapters, it is better than many books. It reads very naturally without forcing the battle to overwhelm the protagonist. Basically, there are no big poisonous points. It is very good for me. I also gave it a monthly pass.

It's been a long time since I've added it to my bookshelf and I haven't read it. I just read the first chapter today and I think it's totally okay. I voted for two monthly tickets, and I hope I won't be disappointed later. Come on, author.

There are three professional attitudes of a good author: 1. Awesome updates! (As long as there are a hundred readers, I will definitely put it on the shelf for thousands! It won't be like squeezing out toothpaste every day and worth four thousand!) 2. It will never be an eunuch! (I am a pure newbie! It is my first time to write a book, and I rely on likes and passions! Everyone wants their first step to be successful! So I will never be a eunuch! Even if my grades are not good, and I am less than 100 years old, I will finish the book well!) 3. Change when you are advised! (When I first entered the industry, I heard something from a senior that an author should not listen too much to the readers, nor should he not listen to the readers at all! So I want to be a good author who listens and understands at the same time. If the logic of this book is very poor, it has become a poisonous point! I hope fellow Taoists can point it out and suggest modifications! If I think it makes sense, I will take the initiative to change it! I will never be stubborn!) PS: The last thing I want to say is, enter a profession and love a profession. This is true for studying, working, and writing books. Everyone will meet all kinds of people. If the fellow Taoist who clicked in to read this book doesn't like it, please try not to insult it. Delete the bookshelf, and we will forget about each other forever! When I think about the many strangers in my life, hundreds, thousands, or thousands of miles away, who can meet my brainwaves at some moment, I feel so happy! So, I hope it is fate for everyone to meet! I don't think my writing is very impressive (I am a newcomer after all), so some people think that my writing is good or bad. They all like that everyone can be harmonious and make money, and there is less violence! This is really the last sentence: "Fellow Taoists! I will maintain my greatest passion for writing books. I really love writing books!!!!"

It's okay, but the environment of the alien beast stream is not good. The author is the best among the food and grass. It is difficult to write about alien beasts. I feel that "lone wolf+bloody+animal nature" will get a better audience.                                                                                                                                                                     explain. But people's thinking principles are cultivated and selected through generations of civilization, and they will find that everyone is played by people wearing animal skins, and fairy tales have long been poorly written, and if they are just traditional fairy tales wearing animal skins, they will not be able to retain people. There must be some people who are stubborn and say that the immortal beasts are no different from humans after they gain wisdom, so they describe them like this. But what is the difference between the alien beast style performed by a group of beasts with purely human thinking and the traditional fairy tale. Therefore, "lone wolf" is introduced. If the protagonist is alone, he can have more writing power to describe the confrontation between human nature and beast nature of the protagonist as an alien beast, and even the beast can suppress human nature, just like the idea of ​​​​a book called Snake Ancestor. Being a lone wolf means that you can greatly reduce the interaction with other animals and humans in the early stage. It is very friendly to new authors and can have more energy to describe the story and adapt to the writing rhythm. 2. It is said to be a strange beast style, but the framework is always in the context of Xianxia. There will be so-called common sense. For example, practicing qi requires foundation-building pills, and weapon pills need to be made by professions such as weapon refiners and alchemists. Rather than casually saying that the Talisman Maker profession is mainly about elixir refining and weapon refining, people will accept it.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   all the low-level monsters you want to write about all the low-level monsters have human intelligence, which will conflict with the popular "common sense" theory of Xianxia. This leads to the next "bloody + bestiality". Since writing about alien beasts must attract a small audience of readers through alternative novels, writing about alien beasts has the same idea as writing about humans. It is neither foreign nor foreign, but few people read it. The theme of this book is the "beast" among strange beasts. What is the representative word of beast - wildness, cruelty, ferocity and extreme bestiality. Therefore, when describing low-level monsters, we should not give too much humanity. They are just the weak and the strong, and they are each other's food. The protagonist can show a predator's perspective when facing them. Instead of excessive so-called horizontal and vertical alliances to form forces in the low-level monster stage, it is better to directly write a fairy tale from a human perspective.       ，

The writing is okay. I hope you will pay more attention later and don't write such poisonous things. Pay attention to your own race. You are a monster and a monster, not a human being.

Come on, to be fair, the book written by the author is not very exciting. But for a new author, it is also very good. Why am I pursuing it now? Because I am a loyal fan of classical fairy tales. I especially hate the current system of fairy tale novels that are rampant, out of tune, and full of weirdness (it's just a matter of personal taste, so don't criticize it). It is really difficult to find such a readable novel. In fact, it can be seen that there are many immature aspects in this novel, but I can feel that the author put his heart into it. This is why I pursue reading. I often check out the new book rankings in the Xianxia section, looking for potential novels to read. To be fair, it is very good to be able to tell a story well now without any poisonous points, even if the plot is a little bland or wordy. The author himself clearly did. The whole novel is flawless and logical. At Qidian, my favorite book is Shushan Zhenshi Dixian. If that book is 10 points, I am willing to give this book a passing score of 6 points. Life is not easy, we all have to face life. This book. I think it doesn't mean much to us readers, it's just a passerby in life. But for the author, it is the fulfillment of a wish. I hope you can write better and better, and your life can get better and better.

Fellow Taoists, there are some tricks you want to add. It is necessary to design its background, species, set of perfect spells, realm, etc. When I see something suitable, I will add it to the subsequent plot. In addition, it is the protagonist's magic. If you have any good ideas, you can leave a message on this post. The author's brain alone is definitely not as good as everyone's combined brains to brainstorm!

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A sect disciple's earthly family was massacred, the disciple killed demons, and died of exhaustion. Could this cause the three sects to unite to try to launch a war against a demon king whose strength is not weaker than any of their sects? Although the tiger slapped the disciple they sent, it was only slightly injured and was not killed on the spot. The disciple killed three generals in a row, which was considered as a way to regain his place for the previous incident. So why try to start a war? Then again, does this matter have anything to do with the other two cases?

Anyway, I think this novel is quite well written The protagonist is decisive in killing, and the sentiments and grievances are clear. I don't see any poisonous points at the moment. Farming training occasionally fights, and robbing treasure detective adventures. Anyway, I think it is quite interesting. I like this type of novel. If you like reading this type, the progress will speed up a bit. It is quite good at the moment. Please support the author a lot. You can give a monthly vote if you have enough money to give a reward. If you think the amount is not enough, you can Subscribe first, and you can read later. Please support the author. Today's society is too impatient to do anything. I hope the author can persevere. I hope the author can share it everywhere and promote his own works. Don't be afraid. Don't be embarrassed. New authors should promote each other. I will also help the author promote it. Just treat it as tap water. I think it is quite interesting This post can be added with a quality post

Nanny Practice Notes I feel that the benefits brought by power are not as good as the protagonist's efforts

Dear book friends, after being human for so many years, you should have a certain understanding of people. Looking at various examples, the same human beings with different skin colors will be served to the table in a physical sense. People with the same skin color and different cultures may be served to the table in a physical sense. So, if you are reborn as an alien, if you really want to sit on the side of humans for the sake of humanity, you should kill yourself immediately and die. Don't have too many thoughts about living... Let me give you an example. As an alien, if you want to contact humans and live on their side, you will yearn for the beauty of the human world. The best result is that, like the Chinese working and living in the United States, there is a ceiling that is visible to the naked eye and can be touched by raising your hands. The dream of personal development should not be even thought about, and then the descendants will be slowly cut off and the descendants will be slowly extinct. They may be polite to you when they need to use you, but you must always perform your role as a laborer. The second best result is to live as a pet, like a zoo animal, to satisfy other people's curiosity, and maybe give you a small territory, where you can stay well and tell everyone that there is such a species in the world. A real-life example is the ethnic minority reservations in certain places where they have been almost exterminated. The third result is to wait until you have no use for it. Just kill the donkey and serve it on the table in a physical sense. The flesh, blood and bones of the monster are good things. They can be eaten and used... Finally, the first and second results may become the third result at any time. If you want to sit on the side of humans, unless you are strong enough to challenge all humans so that they cannot destroy you and force coexistence, you will definitely not be able to escape one of the three outcomes above. So far, the author still writes well. Unlike other novels, some of the protagonists are really stupid and have crooked buttocks, almost putting themselves into the pot. But this kind of protagonist wants to live and do good for mankind, but he is not selfless enough to accept any of the above three outcomes... This is the so-called head and rat, and it is looked down upon.

I don't understand why I have to shout out every move. Is it because I'm afraid the opponent won't know the name of my spell? 😅

This kind of article should be about daily life rather than events. After reading a dozen or so pictures, I always feel occupied. After reading too much, I feel busy and out of breath. Moreover, arranging a big boss in the early stage will make people feel like a stone is weighing on their hearts. It is very boring.

When I saw it on the shelves, let me tell you about my doubts about this book. If monsters can't learn on their own, how can they make utensils to refine elixirs? And the cultivation is too rough and a bit stereotyped. It seems that monsters have to practice this way to be like monsters. They have to do this to look like monsters. There is no premise of wisdom. I can understand it, but the wisdom is no longer comparable to that of humans. Some are even smarter. Human cultivation must at least create a formation, find a Feng Shui treasure land, and conserve energy. This is the most basic. I think your description of monster cultivation is that it is more towards understanding the world.

Although the pace is relatively fast, the plot of 50 chapters feels like 100 chapters in other books 🤭

The protagonist is the son of luck, and the people with his identity have always prevented disasters for him.

If you like reading this book, please support the author and vote for it, monthly votes Anyway, I think this novel is quite interesting, but the progress is faster If the current market situation is not faster, no one will follow it.

Overall, the writing is pretty good, but it lacks some excitement. It's more fun to have a fast pace, and it's more fun to do everyday things. I just like to watch the daily life, and want to see how to sort out the earth veins and water palaces, establish a reward and punishment system, integrate shrimp soldiers and crab generals, lay out fortifications, and engage in breeding and mining. This book seems to touch on both aspects, but neither of them fully touches my heart. And it gives me the feeling that all the monsters the protagonist encounters are unconditionally devoted to the protagonist, and they help the protagonist far more than they receive from the protagonist.

It feels like a demon version of a mortal cultivating immortality.

I know it's not easy to write a book, but we also spent money to keep up the subscriptions chapter by chapter. You have to be kind to those of us who keep upgrading the subscriptions. You just cut off the updates without saying anything. I'm really speechless.

Is the blue scale an object in the pond? It transforms into a dragon when encountering wind and rain. I like this passage very much.

Finally back 🤝

Come on, author

Why didn't the author update a chapter while he was 51?

Common Man·Geng Ying The world is full of dirty things, common man kills rats and dogs in anger. The path to immortality is long and ruthless, and I dare to destroy all the gods and immortals. All things travel against the will of a traveler, and the mind of a spectator remains unchanged for generations. The road is like the sky and I am like a fly. I dare to ask the sun and moon to change the sky.

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