Purple Mansion Immortal Yuan

I felt relieved when someone called him a bad guy. It's not in vain that I specifically downloaded the app to scold him.

It's a bit far-fetched to get the golden finger at the beginning, but the flaws are not concealed. Jiedan used to be a high-quality product, especially the setting of the natal magic weapon. It is still difficult to surpass it. It's a pity that it's unfinished I don't know what the author thought. It's time-consuming and labor-intensive. Just when he was close to success, he suddenly unfinished. He didn't change his career or stop writing, but started a new one. The result is getting worse. Just a sigh! If the author has time, there is no need to start a new article Just finish this and the future will still be bright!

I wrote a lot of nonsense about Foundation Establishment Pill but became mute as soon as I got to Nascent Soul? Starting from the promotion to Nascent Soul, it goes up by one level every three chapters. I don't even bother to read the next twenty or so chapters, they are unfinished.

The ending was so unprepared that the author jumped into the hole dug in the first half of the book and buried himself. Common Internet articles, changing one map for another, wasting my money Not worth reading, don't waste time and money!

666 He finally became a god, so why write a reincarnation ending? Now that you have finally reached the peak of divine transformation, wouldn't it be better to just break through and upgrade to an immortal? It has to be a mess, right?

After finally spending a lot of effort to cultivate to the top level, he then committed suicide with his wife! One sentence sums up this book!

I remember when I was in junior high school, I thought it was very good, but the ending was terrible. When I finished watching it, I wanted to punch someone.

I read it when I was in junior high school. It was also the third mortal-style novel from "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality", "The Big Devil" to "The Immortal Fate of the Purple Mansion". Every book brought me a lot of new things. The author hastily ended the follow-up and wanted to create a Senjo-style novel, which deserves recognition. But you haven't even finished writing "The Immortal Fate of Purple Mansion", so there won't be anything else to follow. After the completion of "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality", everyone has been waiting for the Immortal World chapter. When the Immortal World chapter came out, I didn't comment much and just read it silently. But when we saw Zi Mansion, we were really moved and regretful. Baili, if you write about Zifu well, you may not be a so-called fairy city style, but you will definitely be a master of the mortal farming style. I have only read Purple Mansion and Immortal City, and I don't want to comment on the other books. Look at these books, they are not bad. Are you trying to fly before you can even run? In fact, if you open a book like Zifu Xianyuan and even move it over to improve the settings, it will be better than others. Many of the books I read now have the shadow of Zifu. I hope you can write a good book. Don't be unworthy of the readers. Just be worthy of yourself.

Watched it again. I'm still not finished, let's read the author's next article 😊

After reading Chapter 360, I really couldn't stand it. The author has a very serious tendency to belittle the protagonist, and it affected me. The protagonist is always inexplicably unknown. Whether he has made great achievements since the beginning of the mine, built foundation pills, been hunted down, defeated Amumeng, or grown rapidly in cultivation, etc., In fact, he should have become famous a long time ago, but after so many things have been superimposed, he still has to be forced to be "unknown" by the author. There is also an evaluation system, even though he is already a golden elixir, he was still looked down upon in chapter 360, saying that he has no background and no future. Let me ask you, before the age of 50, he was able to form elixirs all by himself, and he also became a Taoist couple with the daughter of the first elixir-former in the sect. Everyone should realize that this person is not a simple person. And this father-in-law is also a very big problem. The protagonist saved his daughter's life and unexpectedly became a Taoist couple, which is so interesting. Moreover, the protagonist can improve quickly without relying on any help from the heroine's family, which also shows that his luck, His character, wisdom, and combat prowess are all top-notch, but not only did he not do any favors to the protagonist, nor did he give any rewards, but he also made various arrangements, and did not have any communication with his future son-in-law during the whole process, let alone direct observation or contact. My father-in-law saw me picking my feet and trying to scrape the steel plate with a sharp object, which made me feel like Tang San and Huo Yuhao. I guess the author had a serious inferiority complex of "a poor child" when he wrote this book. As a person who has been through it, it was not easy to get out of it, but to see the author behave like this makes me want to punch someone.

Author, since you can't write about the relationship between men and women, why do you do so many foreshadowings of heroes saving beauties? When the male and female protagonists met by chance for the first time, you actually said that the male protagonist, a 20-year-old young man, was afraid of wolves in front of him, but he was afraid of tigers in the back and did not dare to reveal the veil of the heroine. You even wrote that the heroine passed out. Is the male protagonist you created such a loser? If you write this, 90% of adults will stop reading it. I guess you are a child under the age of 15 with no life experience, and you are also imitating adults in writing about heroes saving beauties.

Comment from a 7-year-old bookworm: This is the most novel that has the flavor of a mortal cultivating immortality. Unfortunately, it is not finished 😭. I even think Mortals is worse than this one.

After all these years, I get angry when I read this book. It's so well written, but it's so bad. The author's later books just don't have the feeling of Zifu Immortal Yuan. The masterpiece was ruined just like that. Uncomfortable.

You can openly kill the elder's son and openly use the elder's son's magical weapon in front of everyone. When you meet a woman, you have all kinds of reasons why you can't kill her. Bailixi, Bailixi is not young at all, why are you such a novice 😅

Why do I feel like it started to become toxic after it was put on the shelves? IQ is no longer online! Let's talk about joining the sect. The protagonist only found three elixirs in the mountains. After returning to the city, he found that there were many exchanges in the market. The protagonist figured it out and immediately used the Zifu space to produce a large amount of the elixirs he had. In less than a day, he exchanged all the elixirs he lacked back, and then stopped doing it. He couldn't understand why the protagonist couldn't see such a huge profit in this? The cost of the protagonist is only a few low-grade spiritual stones. Then go to refine the weapon. After practicing it, you know that someone is following you and want to find out the quality and skills of the spiritual weapon. You want to kill him as soon as you get out of the city. Then you will die. When you get there, you will try your own spiritual weapon first, expose your true identity first, and then kill people. In the end, the information leaked and attracted a foundation-building enemy.

It can be regarded as my enlightenment book for Xianxia, ​​but it's a pity that the ending is rushed and reincarnated!

The writing is okay! But what is really speechless is this! Every time there was a big change, he always wanted to go back to the sect that made him fall into death several times and completely treated him as cannon fodder! Like brain congestion💩! There is something really wrong!

I suspect that Baili himself is the only one who transforms into a god, and he is a gunman after transforming into a god and in the following books.

Someone copied your book.

Damn, I found it. This is the first online novel I've ever read! ! ! I remember that I didn't have a mobile phone when I was little, so I borrowed my parents' iPad 2 to watch it Hurry up and leave a post to commemorate it, how many years has it been... 13 Years

The story of Ye Qin Yuanying is indeed like reading an outline. It feels fast-paced and everything seems to be for the purpose of paving the way for reincarnation. 😡 I don't know how many disasters we have experienced in our previous lives, but we have made progress and become immortals in the end! Maybe the book Baili's Immortal Fate itself is just to tell such a story😄, otherwise the title of the book would not be Immortal Destiny but something else. What's more, it has left so many backup options and hope, that's all. 🤓 There is no one less than Ye Qin who has reached the top of the world. Moreover, Ye Qin is not a perfect person, otherwise he would not be desperate. 😭 After reading it this time, I accepted and agreed with the author's ideas to a certain extent. Well, Zifu Xianyuan is a complete book, not unfinished. Haha😥😜😁😵～

It was pretty good at first. As soon as a female character appears, her brain goes into shock. In 80% of novels, as soon as a female character appears, her IQ often drops. She cannot control herself and starts to indulge in obscenities. Haha.

Maybe you could still watch it at that time, but I was introduced to it by my friend Amway just a few days ago. This novel is completely inconsistent with today's plot. That's a long way to go, I didn't start the drug boy entrance exam until chapter 23. Deleting the first 20 chapters does not affect reading at all. Still a mortal flow, even if a mortal looks at it now, it is still compact. To go one step further, this kid was caught on the street and used as a drug boy, but the entrance exam turned out to be a drug test. Also very unreasonable. If you want to catch strong men, there should be no threshold. If you want to take the exam, you definitely don't need to recruit strong men.

After browsing various major novel forums, almost no one has mentioned the novel Zifu Xianyuan. . . The heat is refreshingly cool. . . Now almost no one mentions this novel online. To be honest, it is a pity. This novel was very popular at the time, but it was forced to unfinished, which cut the popularity of this novel by more than half, so there was no chance for IP development. . . Without animation and other IP development, more than ten years have passed, and this novel has become completely obsolete, and almost no one has mentioned it. . . .

After reading dozens of chapters, I was about to start a rant, but found out that it was a book written in 2009, and I was instantly relieved.

Back then, as long as Nascent Soul Empress didn't collapse, now it's time for an anime to be released.

I stumbled upon this by accident, and vaguely recalled that I had read it when I was in elementary school. At that time, I couldn't afford to read the original version. Now I can't help but be filled with emotion when I read it. It can be regarded as carrying a memory of my childhood, as an enlightenment work for me as a mortal, and as the cornerstone of my online reading career. Compared with most of today's works, this seems to be very routine and has no eye-catching highlights. The writing style is not even that good, but it can attract me to keep reading at the time. Perhaps these works in the last era of online literature are more humane than today, which is the result of constantly polishing the story frame and perfecting the character creation. Instead of relying on more novel settings, faster plot rhythm, and more explosive conflicts to attract readers' attention. I can be considered a person who has experienced different eras of online writing. I don't know when, these things seem to have become the norm, which makes people feel helpless and sad. ——The vast sea has passed, and looking back, people and things have changed.

I watched the front part, it was very attractive, and then I slowly skipped to watch it. I thought that the protagonist didn't know how to use golden fingers at all. Apart from planting dew grass and thorns, there was nothing else. Especially since there is a large area of ​​​​Zi Mansion, the spiritual planter and the alchemist are the best matches, right? Is there any need to take risks? It's still the fourth level of Qi training. What's even more ridiculous is that the elixir recipe can actually be copied by three spirit stones If you have land, buy seeds, practice elixirs, sell spirit stones, and buy resources, this way

The plot is too immature, it feels like watching a cartoon

I just read Chapter 33. The protagonist has been practicing immortality for a while. Because the secular world view was foreshadowed before, everyone practices martial arts. However, the male protagonist practices immortality and his spiritual consciousness increases. The Qinggong from the same discipline that was well described before has been moved in slow motion. The same is true for other martial arts, plus everyone. I don't even know that the male protagonist practices immortal magic, so I really have expectations. I look forward to shocking some masters in the mortal world in the future. It's really exciting. Of course, this should be a good foreshadowing by the boss. The protagonist is too poor at the beginning, and everything around him is also a secular world view, so there is such expectation🤔