Immortal Palace

It collapsed. In the later period, the author was self-indulgent. He had the mentality of an elder and a young child for thousands of years, and suppressed and killed him in various ways.

The book is good and the three views are correct. The story is also very exciting, I don't know why the results are not good.

More than 200 years old. I think you, the author, are not too old either. And there is no social experience. The whole article feels like it was written by a teenager

200 Years old, living on a pig's brain.

The beginning is hilarious and completely illogical. 1. Don't you have any plans to spend a lot of money to bring your nephew to the previous world? He was actually sent to a lower plane without asking for advice, without considering age, without leaving resources, and even without time for communication. Is this still a human being? 2. It's so funny that a 200-year-old man behaves like a child. 3. The person Yun Zhou met actually kept knocking on the door, endlessly. It didn't seem to matter if they didn't like it. It's so funny. Are they both six years old?

Come on, author! Although the poison has cost me half of my life, I just want to say these tens of millions of words to you, and I respect you as a fellow Taoist! It's much better than those bad eunuchs. You're not trying to make money anyway. Just make progress in the next book.

Did you notice that the protagonist and the supporting character are having sex with each other? I suspect that the author is a woman. She seems to have forgotten that the gender of the protagonist in the novel is male. The protagonist doesn't like girls and has sex with the supporting role man every day. After seeing this, I gave up the book. Don't write about gay men in novels

More than 9 million words, 30,000 fans and dozens of monthly votes, what support you to keep writing, brother.

After reading everyone's book reviews, I was so scared that I didn't dare to read it.

It's all modern modal particles, what the hell, there's a lot of it, I can't stand it.

If you write more rigorously and have a normal IQ, you will definitely become a great master!

The writing is okay, but the comment section is full of trolls!

Every time I was attracted by the title of the book, every time I was dissuaded by the introduction of the "really ordinary" protagonist. It is acceptable to have a poor and weak start, but you cannot remain weak 😭

To be honest, the author's character creation of the protagonist is really bad. If you are a teenager, you will definitely be able to watch it, but this... I suggest the author chat with older and more successful people to see what it feels like. I won't say much more. Anyone who has read more than a dozen chapters will know the protagonist...

I read some and found out how many times the 200-year-old protagonist had to cry without tears. It was so funny that you might as well just write about a teenager.

The plot is extremely bloody. Is this really a person who has lived for two hundred years? Mentally retarded

Funny novel, right? Even with the protagonist's intelligence and behavior, he has lived for 200 years. The author is afraid that the readers will be fools if he doesn't think so.

After reading 4 chapters, the writing is pretty good. That's why "Wang Changsheng" must be included in every sentence

At the beginning, it was said that Uncle Jiedan worked hard to get back all his family wealth for you, so why did he send you to the Heaven Realm again? Can't Shen Tianjing protect you? Can you easily break through the meridians by giving your second uncle a beating? Do I still have to send you the Heavenly Mirror to break through the meridians and then come back? Does everyone think this is a problem? When it came to the chapter where I took the Corpse Training Sect gang to find the Master of the Sanren Pavilion, I really couldn't stand it. Let's not have such a watery plot. It was so funny. Your second uncle knows that your longevity skills can't break through Huayuan. The possibility of coming back from the Chengtian Mirror alive and returning to the Southern Territory is infinitely close to zero, right? As a result, your second uncle, a talented person, specially let Sanrengege star in the drama and then waited for you to come back and then asked the master of Sanrengege to tell you to go find the ancestor of the Li family? If an ant in the Tongmai Realm hadn't been chosen as the walking disciple representative of the Corpse Refining Sect by the luck of the protagonist, how would he have returned to the Southern Territory to pry open the mouth of the Master of the Sanren Pavilion? Why go to the Li family to find their ancestors? There are also all kinds of unreasonable things. A true god, for example, just three high-grade spiritual stones can break through the third level of channel connection. Why didn't you die? Why didn't your second uncle give you a few spiritual stones to let you break through the Tongmai realm before joining the Sanren Pavilion? I really don't understand, are you brainless? Can you write such a illogical and pretentious piece of writing?

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Traditional cultivation of immortality, healthy and green, multiple female protagonists in the harem, and clear emotional lines. It is a bit rushed and slow to warm up in the early stage, but it will also add some old-fashioned fun. The book will be better if you read it carefully. Emotional stories with multiple heroines are also different. There are sadistic, sweet, and strong heroines. Various styles will be played in turn.

These semi-saints are really idiots. How did they become semi-saints?

Report, the story is wonderful, but the updates are too slow.

A novel with tens of millions of words has earned tens of millions of yuan, right? Write tens of millions more words and strive to earn hundreds of millions!

There are very few paragraphs, and one chapter is only half as long as others, so I might as well not write it at all!

Recommend the book, Immortal Life Begins from Immortal Mansion, Mortal Life, If you are interested, you can come and take a look.

One stop, annihilate thirty Semi-Saints

There are so many rich people nowadays, and there is a monthly pass for this book

At the beginning, he was a gray-haired old man in his twilight years. Later, as his cultivation improved, did he change his destiny and become a young man? Can any guy start marrying a wife and having children and then be romantic? Sipao is weird! When I first started watching it, I didn't think it was as good as Tiantu! 😁