Yunlingxian Road

I came here to see the family cultivating immortality, but when I saw the comments, you still established the sect, but gave it up instantly. If you want to write about the family, write it well, and don't deviate from the topic. If you want to write about the sect, then write about the sect. What are you thinking?

The author is a bit childish when it comes to writing about fighting.

I suddenly lost interest when I saw 4 girls. They still have the same physique. My brother also has it. The whole family is more of a protagonist than the protagonist.

Why is it updated once a day instead of twice a day?

Should the author change the protagonist to have three spiritual roots? A monk with dual spiritual roots is only 6th level at the age of 26? Isn't this mentally retarded? Will keeping the secret slow down the protagonist's cultivation speed? What kind of bullshit family is this?

It's nothing to watch. The cultivation of double spiritual roots is extremely slow, even slower than that of three spiritual roots. Moreover, the past life was in vain. Like a child, he talks about everything and keeps talking about the character of the heart. Then when the Hui family is there, he writes that he is violent inside. He also behaves like a fool at ordinary times. He doesn't know how to save his life. He is a complete robot. He only knows how to follow other people's orders and cannot think for himself. He is not a person who has lived in modern society at all. If you don't write about time travel, it really can't be understood.

The writing is good 👍 But the setting is still too cliche. The protagonist Huo Linggen looks like he is refining alchemy. Too many protagonists are practicing alchemy. In fact, the protagonist's formation is also pretty good.

I gave up when I saw four women being stuffed for no apparent reason. . .

You have too many harems, it's boring, and now you're having incest with Sister No. 41, It's a bit sick and disgusting, that's about it.

This book is really about writing whatever comes to mind. The spiritual beasts were originally not allowed to be ridden by anyone except the protagonist. However, in the end, both humans and dogs can be ridden. There are also 4 women who suddenly appeared who fell in love at first sight. They were so vicious that they opened the door to them. After reading the catalog, they even established a sect. I was really convinced.

This book is well written. When the protagonist has enough pills for his second spiritual root, he is at the same pace as his fourth spiritual root and fifth spiritual root. He is still the type who is immersed in hard work. If you ask me, he should go to the factory to twist the screws.

To be honest, it's too ugly to watch, so it's a waste of money.

This is the first time I met such a good author. The author regards writing books as a hobby and communicating with readers is a pleasure. Personal opinions. If you don't like it, please don't comment. Thank you.

After reading dozens of chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The upgrade is too slow. I still have the fire and wood spiritual roots. I am 26 years old and have only practiced the sixth level of Qi. I have been practicing the fourth level for 7 years.

What are you setting up? A genius born every eight hundred years should be treated the same as everyone else? Nothing special? What about the patriarch who discovered him? After watching the exercise selection method, I really can't stand it anymore. Otherwise, if you are just an ordinary person with three spiritual roots and your entire two-spiritual family does not pay attention to it or increase its efforts in cultivating it, how does this family exist?

The original setting is okay, but there are no bright spots in the protagonist, and the cultivation speed of the double spiritual roots is not as good as the three spiritual roots. If the protagonist can practice a particularly bad skill, it will be like this. Secondly, the author said that he will explain it later, but for a new author, readers will definitely not have that much patience to wait, so why not write something more reasonable earlier?

When you are about to die, break through the Foundation Establishment at the age of 120 and lay a solid foundation. You can write 3,000 chapters before the Foundation Establishment, another 3,000 chapters during the Foundation Establishment period, and 30,000 chapters for more than a dozen realms such as Statement, Yuan Ying, and Tribulation Transcendence. A book can be written with 100 million words. The author can finish it in the afternoon, and it should be recorded in history.

Just skip to the table of contents of this book, don't read the content. Trust me otherwise you will regret it.

It seems that the family can no longer be compiled, and the sect is being compiled again. It is slowly being compiled. Farewell.

The two spiritual roots written about the three spiritual roots are almost the same, and I don't see any preferential treatment.

This book started with the secret construction of a sect, and I took it off the shelves. A good family flow, and suddenly a sect popped up! Extremely speechless😒

Many readers are asking about the protagonist's slow cultivation speed. Xiao Qi doesn't want to say anything more. Many details in the book have already been revealed. I hope you will read it carefully. In addition, Xiao Qi sets the cultivation speed as three-lingen Qi refining at level 1 for two years, from level 2 to level 3 for three years, and so on. Therefore, it is difficult to practice, and pills that directly increase several levels are very rare. Cultivation is mainly done step by step, and there is no shortcut. Also, the first volume of Xiaoqi's Outline is like this. Only at the end does the rhythm start to tighten up. Xiao Qi will consider the good suggestions from the big guys, but she will still follow the outline when writing a book. The comments of some big guys made Xiao Qi, who was writing a novel for the first time, feel bad. Fortunately, she adjusted it in time, so Xiao Qi responded less to the big guys' comments later. Finally, I would like to thank the big guys who have always supported Xiao Qi. The humble Xiao Qi bows down! ! !

The protagonist is useless. His two spiritual roots are not as good as three spiritual roots. The protagonist comes from time travel but has no city. His character is too bad and he doesn't look like a protagonist at all. Moreover, he is not outstanding in all aspects and does not look like a genius. There is at least a little green bottle in the legends of mortals cultivating immortals. The protagonist has nothing. It is a waste stream rather than a family stream, and it is a waste stream that will not rise. I feel that the whole family of the protagonist is just a waste, and the best immortal is slower in spiritual cultivation. All I can say is that the author deserves it😅

After reading Chapter 20, I wonder why this writing is so bad. I'm a bit short on books. I can't bear the toxicity, so I should give up and look for another one. Shen Nong tastes a hundred herbs, this is a poisonous weed

The writing is too immature, I look like a novice at a glance

Just one sentence: All resources are in the hands of the sect family. This similar sentence appeared 20 times after reading 12 chapters? The food is tasteless. Also, not everyone likes drinking tea. Drinking tea will appear once or twice in almost every chapter.

In fact, the writing is quite good. The explanations about the setting and the plot advancement are quite reasonable. Of course, if you mind about the harem, please don't enter. There are slight flaws in the details. I think the only shortcoming may be that the foreshadowing is too big and the author may not be able to grasp it.

I read less than a hundred chapters. How can I put it? I just endured it, thinking it would gradually get better, but it was too poisonous and I couldn't stand it. The content was bland, not to mention that I was still a mama's boy, and the content was cliched and the writing was hard to describe.

Handsome guy, please open another book. The overall structure and world view are very good. However, the protagonist's combat power in the later stages of foundation building is a bit off, and he stays in one realm for too long. I think it would be better to add a realm in the middle of the foundation-building elixir written later, so that the combat power will be normal. Generally, the foundation needs to be established within or around a hundred chapters, which is indeed a bit slow.

How should I put it? It's a very frustrating book.