Chasing the Way in the Heavens

Overall, it's okay... But the author's writing style still won't suit all readers. The story is too straightforward and there are very few battle descriptions. There's nothing wrong with writing a historical hegemony like this, but this is a book about Zhutian who is both a martial arts and a cultivator, so it's quite embarrassing. The Wild World is the best one written in my opinion. I would like to call the author's way of writing a high-level running account, which is a bit like a travelogue. Everyone can take a look at it.

The author's Holy Fallen Roman Empire, this book simply flew away. Let's put it this way, I basically read it as a Western historical research material, and I read it with great interest. I have only read half of this book, but it has completely changed some of my perspectives. For example, life is separated. Political struggle. The nature of colonialism. There are also the advantages and harms of nationalism. The battle between land and sea. And the terror and lower limits of international capital. It can be said that what attracts me to this book has never been its coolness, but its full of historical information, which is also very interesting to read. I think if the history teacher could teach me this way, I would have become an expert in historical research. I don't know what happened these days. I often take naps and dream during the day. I always dream about how in this novel, the British Empire deceived other European countries, and then how Austria counterattacked.

There are too few updates these days 😤

This novel is not as mindless as most Zhutenliu. Instead, it has logic and a plot that makes people want to continue reading. From this aspect, the author has indeed written a good story.                 ，，，，，，""""""……，？ I think the author still needs to strengthen this aspect. But from the plot of the story, it is undoubtedly successful. The author tells the story of the rivers and lakes, which are not only the flash of swords and the flash of galloping horses, nor the pleasure and revenge of big bowls of wine and big bowls of meat, but also painstaking management and careful calculation of profit plans. I have seen many people saying that the author is writing about politics under the guise of a martial arts warrior, but I feel that the martial arts world is neither here nor there, but in people's hearts!

The writing is quite good, and I would like to mention a few shortcomings that I personally think: 1. The pace is a bit slow and should be accelerated; 2. Since it is Zhutian Liu, the layout can be enlarged, Xiaoao is almost written to death; 3. Zhu Tianliu will definitely have a heroine, or a vase type, or a co-progress type, which is about it; 4. The most important point is the issue of realm. Realm is the place where Zhutian Liu is most likely to collapse. I hope the author can make a clear distinction in advance.

I used to like martial arts in junior high school, but later I couldn't stand martial arts novels anymore, because every time I read them, I kept thinking about a question: These people are obviously only enemies of ten or a hundred, and their force is not strong enough to break the rules. They don't do anything every day, they go around killing people and creating criminal cases. Where are the officials? And where do these people get their money from? Is this the agricultural era? Haiyue, who writes history and rewrites martial arts, writes about the sect from Xiaoao's background and from the perspective of writing about the country's military, political and economics. It is surprisingly to my liking, and martial arts suddenly becomes more interesting.

It's a very novel way of writing and worth a look. There are too many traditional ways of writing now, and the online literature world needs this kind of innovative spirit.

The author should switch to writing historical novels. I feel that fantasy is not suitable for you. You are either messing around or scheming all day long. You have such a golden finger, is it difficult to become invincible in the world? The essence of fantasy novels is very simple. Cruelty, no need for a heroine, killing Buddhas and Husbands, and unparalleled magical powers. These G-points are captured in a book that is not well written. There are so many things going on every day that it is not interesting at all. It is more fun to read while skipping. If your protagonist is decisive in killing everything, there is absolutely no need to skip reading, because every chapter is a classic!

What did you write? Is this heaven or history? Or is Li Bumu of the Huashan faction going to rebel? What embodies the protagonist's sense of existence is the conspiracy throughout the story. Although you stated in advance that you wanted to write about this, I really didn't expect you to write it in such detail... As a result, I still haven't discovered the meaning of the protagonist's existence! What I saw was the love, hate, and resentment of Shaolin, Wudang, Huashan, and the imperial court. The characters in it were like a fleeting glance, not profound, even the protagonist was dispensable, and the idle colleague was worried about trivial matters every day... Five words to describe it: wearing a loneliness.

Volume 2 is so boring. 1. Only qualified opponents can show normal stories. What is the pride of college students playing in kindergarten? The second time traveler was too mentally retarded and the whole story suddenly became uninteresting. Dramatic conflict is an important prerequisite for a wonderful story. Weakening opponents and teammates is weakening conflicts. The protagonist's cheating requires weakening the opponent, so how failed is this protagonist? 2. The pattern cannot keep up. Although the general environment has been given, human nature is changing, but the result is still wait and see, and the pattern suddenly becomes petty. In reality, since there is no protagonist halo and there is only one chance, there is no problem in reality. But as for the protagonist of the story, do you like Oda Nobunaga, the demon king of the Sixth Heaven who died in the Honnoji Incident, or Tokugawa Ieyasu, the green-haired old turtle who took over the world?

Why not historical? I quite like your writing of history

The Xiaoao chapter at the beginning is still very good, but then it slowly declines, especially the prehistoric chapter is completely watered down and has no intention.

Readers are welcome to leave valuable suggestions. The bigger the idea, the better. Haiyue will adopt it as needed😘

I read it, and many people have some opinions on the author's setting of similar cultivation levels. In fact, in my opinion, this is the difference between classical martial arts and online martial arts. Classical martial arts is about the love between children; about grievances and resentments; about the hatred of country and family; about who you meet in the vast rivers and lakes; about who passes you by in the vast world of martial arts. They don't pay much attention to combat power, which leads to many bugs, such as two people whose descriptions of strength and skills are similar. One of them was instantly killed by the protagonist on the front foot, and he fought with another one not long after. Not to mention that the fight was inseparable, and it was also very anxious for a while. I think this is because the main purpose of martial arts at that time was to express the feelings I explained above, and also because the system was in its infancy at that time and no attention was paid to its improvement. Modern online martial arts is different. It pays more attention to many details (many of them are fan fiction). The protagonist just killed a person in an instant. He was a senior with some fame. Why did the protagonist kill him in an instant? Better than him? I don't know? What should I do if I don't see it or understand it? So a lot of foreshadowing needs to be done. How many people are willing to look at the background foreshadowing of previous classical martial arts? (How to describe modern background foreshadowing, I can't remember it at the moment, so I can't give an example. Maybe I won't be able to remember it for a long time, otherwise I would write a book 😭). Anyway, I can't stand most of the "front-end" foreshadowing in the past, and the same goes for some supporting characters. Now I just go to the next level. As long as the setting is slightly more reasonable, I can completely save a lot of foreshadowing. For the author, it may be a thought that the hairline has receded, but it is impossible not to write, and what the readers see is that they think it is a low-level number. Also, modern martial arts, to put it bluntly, depends more on the protagonist's outfit, and the combat power system cannot be ignored as before. These are all my personal opinions😜

In fact, if the writing and plot are good, no matter what the subject matter, there will always be people who like to read it. I will never pick it. It is true that it is enjoyable to read... After ten years of reading, I feel more and more that my body is hollowed out! It's absolutely true that the color is a razor! Start today, start rebooting, and take the sticker as proof! If you don't update it on any day, you will be breaking the precept! Don't delete the author, I will order them all!

Want to know if this book is a hit? I hope that the author will go back and write history

The book is very good. I hope the author will stick with it and not be influenced by other readers. I think any type of novel should be good based on the author's skills. It does not have to be history. Trying other styles is also a breakthrough. In the end, this book is really good so far. I personally think it is better than most books of the same type.

The old bookworm said that reading books now is all about new ideas. The author's old books Shenluo and Mediterranean Empire are both good. I originally thought that the author's transformation would collapse, but the author still retained his own characteristics-key politics, and everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. For readers who are tired of reading the upgrading of the world and want to change their taste, this book is not to be missed.

Brother, please open a book about foreign history. I especially like the foreign history you wrote.

It is reasonable that the sword fight between Xiaoao Jianghu will lead to a struggle for power and eventually a war! Author, are you going to have a resource conflict between the two Sword and Qi sects break out? In the beginning, there was no distinction between sword qi in Huashan. Everyone practiced qi and swordsmanship together. It was just that some people who liked to study swordsmanship practiced more. Few swordsmen and warriors in martial arts sects get married, and martial arts training relies more on diligent study and practice. It is enough to maintain physical nutrition, and it is not about taking elixirs to upgrade. What resources are there to compete for? There was little competition for authority. The leader was a direct descendant, and the other masters and uncles mostly supported him. This was because the world of Jia at that time had universal values. Without the different concepts brought back by Yue Su Cai Zifeng, there would still be no sword energy dispute in Huashan. As a sect that has been passed down for hundreds of years, it would have been a long time coming! It's just that Yue and Cai were looking at the top martial arts skills at the time, as if they had found support, because Huashan's own martial arts did not say who was better in swordsmanship. Similar to Toutiao's Douyin, Tencent is investing heavily in Kuaishou! With this external theoretical basis, the sword practicing enthusiasts within Huashan were closely united, and Huashan was divided into Sword Sect and Qizong! What is this if not a battle of ideas? Most of these martial arts practitioners have no families or descendants. Naturally, they hope that their ideas will be passed down from sects to disciples. This is why the sword energy disputes arise. The essence is just the competition brought about by ideas! As a disciple of the Sword Sect who fled to Huashan, Feng Buping has as many resources as Yue Buqun? As a result, the disciples trained in the past 20 years can compete with the Huashan sect. Although Yue Buqun went in the wrong direction and only focused on fame, how many resources did Feng Buping have?

Coach, I still want to increase the quantity!

It's over, it's over like this... It can be said to be an anticlimax, the introduction is very good, and the story world of Swordsman at the beginning is also well written. When it comes to the wilderness world, it starts to stretch the hips, and when it comes to Fengshen Westward Journey, it is barely eye-catching... Overall, it is a smooth invincible story! It's a pity that it's still unfinished!

I finally remembered why I gave up before. You, the heavens, went too far by starting from scratch. If you reincarnate, you gave up on things from the previous world. At first I thought the relationship between Dongfang Bubai and Dongfang Bubai was quite interesting, but after ascending to the sky he became a child directly. Bad reviews.

The first dungeon is very speechless. Some readers always think that the protagonist should help the emperor The protagonist is already invincible in the world, but he is always doing murder and smuggling goods, and from time to time he personally contributes for money There is no magnanimity at all

The new book "The King" is online, please take care of the seedlings! !

Rebirth of Tsar Nicholas II of the Russian Empire!

Seek refinement. Also, get to the ending quickly, it's so uncomfortable to hang on

Huashan, how could I forget you King, you must be collected

I am the deacon, Haiyue, in your reflection, why is this happening?

I have a new idea that no one has written about. In order to annex Ryukyu, Japan said that the Shang family was Zhenxi Hachirogen and became the emperor's son, Sainty. Then the protagonist can travel to Japan's Warring States Period and march into Japan for the Shang family's grandson.