Mystery Revival: The Black Forbidden Zone

I suddenly feel like saying something. Actually, from the day I started writing the book on June 14th, I had absolutely no intention of writing at all. It just happened on a whim, and I started writing a book. No outline, no plot, not even a main character! Can you believe it? They even published it without ever reading the first chapter after it was finished.

I've noticed that many people perceive the headquarters as an official organization, and someone who embodies justice. Stop joking, okay? Wang Xiaoming's younger brother at headquarters is a local tyrant who commits murder and arson, and no one is in charge. Yang Jian's spoils of war, including his funeral shroud, were secretly exchanged by headquarters with his friends.

What was written after the story was published? He was heartbroken over the massacre of his city, and then he recruited two lackeys, an ox and a horse. They were weak and a burden, always running away at the first sign of trouble, always wanting a share of the profits, and utterly unrestrained in their speech. To put it nicely, they were brainless; to put it bluntly, they were despicable.

This fanfiction deserves a top-three ranking. There are a few issues: First, the world-building is poorly done. If the supernatural is reviving, why focus on killing off a few cities? Are there no cities left? Second, at least mention some supernatural events in the world, even just briefly.

All praise? I couldn't continue after chapter 42. The beginning was quite good, but then it started feeding me poison? I won't even mention the woman's obvious abnormality and forced idiocy around chapter 30, but chapter 42 is pure poison! I've never read a story where leveling up makes you weaker—what's the point of leveling up then? Goodbye, I can't take it anymore.

I just read chapter 112 and thought it was very good. I have a small question: the ghost tamers in the Republic of China era were really powerful, with all sorts of ghost-taming items to suppress ghosts. But in modern times, there are only a few low-level items like ghost candles. I think the tradition must have been broken.

That's great! I wish I could write several million words like that. 🙂

I've already voted for it. It's well-written and ranks first among all fanfiction.

If Hozuki is only burning fat, he can force the Deceptive Ghost to come, and the Deceptive Ghost can restore his perfect body coordination. Also, wasn't Ghost supposed to be frozen? It's not like it's going to run away on its own.

Can you please be a little more consistent with the updates? This is the only revival fanfic I've subscribed to and been eagerly following, and guess what? I just caught up to the latest chapter and you're taking a break for several days. Since you came back, the updates have been even slower than before. It feels like you're targeting me!