My Days Working for the Embroidered Uniform Guard

They all want to castrate me, or we should all go to the Eastern Depot together. 😡

I can't figure out what the author was thinking. The beginning was quite good; the plot had a clear structure, a framework, and a setup… but the later parts of the story completely slapped him in the face. He fought Lei Ao, at the same cultivation level, and was instantly defeated (the protagonist), then chased down; their relationship was practically nonexistent.

The book falls apart when it gets to the part about the old man who paints. First: Zhang Sanfeng, who was ranked first on the Heavenly Ranking, has already been relegated to second-rate status before he even appears. Of course, if the old man painting is Zhang Sanfeng, then I have nothing to say. Second: You wrote a martial arts novel, not a fantasy novel.

I'm giving up. I got so far on the palace scene, chapter 129, that it was completely baffling. It was like a game I was playing perfectly well, getting all the action, and then suddenly the connection dropped – I was totally confused. My thought was, "Holy crap, why did it have to go like this?" This is what they call a strong start followed by a weak finish, right? I don't want to read any further. I'm dropping it. Goodbye forever.

The protagonist spends 100 points on business just to leave a comment. He keeps saying he's afraid of trouble and doesn't want to cause it, but he always gets into trouble first. It's the same in every chapter about Ji Yaohua. If he loves causing trouble so much, don't try to portray him as someone who doesn't want to cause trouble or is afraid of it.

The protagonist thought the old man who was painting had come, but now it seems like a strange father has arrived, the kind who treats the protagonist as a backup. The protagonist has become so stupid that he has completely overturned his initial mindset. The more wonderful it was at the beginning, the worse it became at the end. Oh well, see you again someday.

As I wrote, it started off in a silly, idiotic direction! It started off so well, but the more I read, the less it felt right!

Actually, I feel the author's martial arts fanfiction is quite good, as long as they don't add those weird settings. Like with the author's last book, I couldn't even finish the first chapter... But personally, I quite liked the "Captain" book. I even added it to my reading list, although I didn't read much of the later parts and heard it had a bad ending.

This book is so awkward to read, it's a complete mess. If you're going to give an outline, you should either have someone who's a goofy roaming the world, or a powerful warlord sweeping everything aside, or just lazing around waiting for the plot to unfold.

Ugh, how could this be so messed up? I could tolerate the old painter, I could tolerate the palace rebellion, but what's with this nameless plot? The protagonist just left?? He abandoned his own woman? He just left without saying a word? Did he sell the account? Or did the previous writing service contract expire?