Chief Life Experience Officer

From the last book, I knew I would be a eunuch

When reading gangster novels, young people nowadays don't know whether they have seen how bad guys are trained.

Has Mengjun been transported through time and replaced? Created during the Anti-Japanese War? You really can think of it! We didn't even have bullets out at that time. Do we have ten bullets per person? It was gone in a flash.

How to put it? The author may want to write about the generosity, grief, passion, and despair of that era But I just have the same feeling when I read it, it is too empty You are too full of emotions, and the big emotions give too much You can look at some better works For example, Invisible Guardian, Red Road They all lay out some gentle things first. Emotions, and then use these gentle emotions to turn into firewood to naturally burn high emotions That is to say, you must have daily descriptions, describe the protagonist, describe the old beggar, and describe the dead person The executed revolutionary can let the protagonist meet him once, see how he gets along with the neighbors, see his greed for eating steamed buns, see his sad solitude, Then I saw him standing outside the private school and smiling at the children inside These descriptions first make the character three-dimensional, and then describe his death In this way, readers will resonate when he dies, and will feel the same when he shouts I recommend Xuanyuan with my blood Because a person's origin is not descended from heaven Why does he want to revolution, why does he shout I think Blood Recommends Xuanyuan You have to describe these reasons before This can form a climax The explosion of the same protagonist is too sudden You concentrated many climaxes in one chapter It's as if the readers are not eating the buns themselves but you are stuffing the buns into the readers' mouths Then the readers cannot be involved.

Plot discussion in the new world The strength of the protagonist group: assets of more than one billion U. S. Dollars, one thousand for the hard-hitters, several hundred for the hot-buttons, ally LG (to be confirmed) Opponent Samsung: one of the top 50 in the world, can directly influence the election, black and white, world-class players, others... As a result of the battle, Samsung has no power to counterattack, the heir dies, the helmsman is humiliated, and the stock price plummets. Process: Samsung failed to assassinate a gang boss for a project with great potential in the future. The gang boss took revenge and sent 10 people to capture Samsung's heir. The Samsung helm failed to negotiate and was humiliated. The police raid accidentally killed the Samsung heir. Samsung's stock price plummeted, the gang's stock price soared. The top management demanded 5% of the gang's shares. The matter was over. Summary: This is probably a fake Samsung, impersonated by a third-rate small company...

This book... Can't be read, it's so sensational, no one thinks of a normal person, I feel like a hyperthyroid patient, hitting and scolding people at every turn, like a psychopath when not excited, like a psychopath when excited

When I see some people saying that they stopped reading after only reading 2 or 3 chapters, I don't need to know what their situation is. Anyway, I only read 3 chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. It even makes me a little annoyed. I think these chapters are quite poisonous. There is nothing about the background of the protagonist. Then I can only think that you are an ordinary person. Well, when you have this tormenting disease and almost died, you have traveled through the past and you haven't done anything yet. You have integrated into this world. You integrate into what you integrate into. What do you think of the revolutionary martyrs? It's just such a child's play. You want to say that the protagonist comes from a revolutionary family, and his grandfather is an old revolutionary. The protagonist has been influenced by his grandfather since he was a child, and he may understand the spirit to some extent. Your protagonist's background has nothing to say, he is just an ordinary person who traveled through the past and did nothing to understand the martyrs? What happened to the steel spirit created by the sufferings that the martyrs experienced? It was the sufferings they experienced that created their steel spirit. These sufferings made them understand that the Chinese can no longer go on like this. Even if they are allowed to die, the Chinese must stand up. You wrote it as if a casual ordinary person in modern times traveled through that era and killed people under forced circumstances to understand them. It's such a child's play. I even feel a little angry. What you wrote didn't move me and even made me feel a little sick. Because you have erased the hardships experienced by the martyrs, as if anyone in modern times can go there. Your writing makes people think that the martyrs are nothing. I don't have to experience anything. I just listen to some modern revolutionary stories and travel back in time. I can do the same. Maybe the writing is a bit confusing. I don't know if I made it clear. I won't go into details. I'll just say this much.

In the beginning, I saved a beggar, and the beggar shouted slogans, and the protagonist shouted after him. There was no emotional foreshadowing, and no realistic logic. It was so poisonous that I dug a three-bedroom apartment on the ground and buried myself. The author quickly blocked the

In the first twenty chapters, the tone was set so high, and the protagonist was so great and upright. Suddenly, the plot in chapters 28 and 29 was really weird.

For works that sell feelings, the writing style is rather blunt, the turning point is abrupt, and the history logic is different. If the author really wants to write something, he should research the information, practice his writing, or take other novel ways. If it's written for fun, then that's a different matter