Chief Life Experience Officer

In order to read this book, I deliberately rewatched the movie There was obviously no one watching the execution of Xie Zirong in the movie It was no problem to watch the execution and was targeted by the agents, and then killed the two agents. But there was also a beggar embarrassment paragraph to foreshadow what "steel" is I vomited. . .

After reading a few chapters, I can't tell that the author is at the level of someone who has written several books before. The continuous sentences are poor and the plot seems to be struggling to cope with the low word count.

After watching the first two worlds, especially Duck King. It feels like the author is just writing in passing without any sense of involvement. I recommend that the author write more deeply about each world.

Come on, are you out of shape? I hope things will get better next time. I've given you all the monthly recommendation votes. Come on, come on, come on.

It was so funny that I got 404 twice in a row.

From the last book, I knew I would be a eunuch

When reading gangster novels, young people nowadays don't know whether they have seen how bad guys are trained.

Has Mengjun been transported through time and replaced? Created during the Anti-Japanese War? You really can think of it! We didn't even have bullets out at that time. Do we have ten bullets per person? It was gone in a flash.

How to put it? The author may want to write about the generosity, grief, passion, and despair of that era But I just have the same feeling when I read it, it is too empty You are too full of emotions, and the big emotions give too much You can look at some better works For example, Invisible Guardian, Red Road They all lay out some gentle things first. Emotions, and then use these gentle emotions to turn into firewood to naturally burn high emotions That is to say, you must have daily descriptions, describe the protagonist, describe the old beggar, and describe the dead person The executed revolutionary can let the protagonist meet him once, see how he gets along with the neighbors, see his greed for eating steamed buns, see his sad solitude, Then I saw him standing outside the private school and smiling at the children inside These descriptions first make the character three-dimensional, and then describe his death In this way, readers will resonate when he dies, and will feel the same when he shouts I recommend Xuanyuan with my blood Because a person's origin is not descended from heaven Why does he want to revolution, why does he shout I think Blood Recommends Xuanyuan You have to describe these reasons before This can form a climax The explosion of the same protagonist is too sudden You concentrated many climaxes in one chapter It's as if the readers are not eating the buns themselves but you are stuffing the buns into the readers' mouths Then the readers cannot be involved.

Plot discussion in the new world The strength of the protagonist group: assets of more than one billion U. S. Dollars, one thousand for the hard-hitters, several hundred for the hot-buttons, ally LG (to be confirmed) Opponent Samsung: one of the top 50 in the world, can directly influence the election, black and white, world-class players, others... As a result of the battle, Samsung has no power to counterattack, the heir dies, the helmsman is humiliated, and the stock price plummets. Process: Samsung failed to assassinate a gang boss for a project with great potential in the future. The gang boss took revenge and sent 10 people to capture Samsung's heir. The Samsung helm failed to negotiate and was humiliated. The police raid accidentally killed the Samsung heir. Samsung's stock price plummeted, the gang's stock price soared. The top management demanded 5% of the gang's shares. The matter was over. Summary: This is probably a fake Samsung, impersonated by a third-rate small company...

When I see some people saying that they stopped reading after only reading 2 or 3 chapters, I don't need to know what their situation is. Anyway, I only read 3 chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. It even makes me a little annoyed. I think these chapters are quite poisonous. There is nothing about the background of the protagonist. Then I can only think that you are an ordinary person. Well, when you have this tormenting disease and almost died, you have traveled through the past and you haven't done anything yet. You have integrated into this world. You integrate into what you integrate into. What do you think of the revolutionary martyrs? It's just such a child's play. You want to say that the protagonist comes from a revolutionary family, and his grandfather is an old revolutionary. The protagonist has been influenced by his grandfather since he was a child, and he may understand the spirit to some extent. Your protagonist's background has nothing to say, he is just an ordinary person who traveled through the past and did nothing to understand the martyrs? What happened to the steel spirit created by the sufferings that the martyrs experienced? It was the sufferings they experienced that created their steel spirit. These sufferings made them understand that the Chinese can no longer go on like this. Even if they are allowed to die, the Chinese must stand up. You wrote it as if a casual ordinary person in modern times traveled through that era and killed people under forced circumstances to understand them. It's such a child's play. I even feel a little angry. What you wrote didn't move me and even made me feel a little sick. Because you have erased the hardships experienced by the martyrs, as if anyone in modern times can go there. Your writing makes people think that the martyrs are nothing. I don't have to experience anything. I just listen to some modern revolutionary stories and travel back in time. I can do the same. Maybe the writing is a bit confusing. I don't know if I made it clear. I won't go into details. I'll just say this much.

This book... Can't be read, it's so sensational, no one thinks of a normal person, I feel like a hyperthyroid patient, hitting and scolding people at every turn, like a psychopath when not excited, like a psychopath when excited

In the beginning, I saved a beggar, and the beggar shouted slogans, and the protagonist shouted after him. There was no emotional foreshadowing, and no realistic logic. It was so poisonous that I dug a three-bedroom apartment on the ground and buried myself. The author quickly blocked the

In the first twenty chapters, the tone was set so high, and the protagonist was so great and upright. Suddenly, the plot in chapters 28 and 29 was really weird.

For works that sell feelings, the writing style is rather blunt, the turning point is abrupt, and the history logic is different. If the author really wants to write something, he should research the information, practice his writing, or take other novel ways. If it's written for fun, then that's a different matter

During the execution, I completed the counter-kill. Is this considered self-defense? 🙂

I am the golden chapter, you are the poisonous chapter

Zhang Lan

Author, the first ten chapters of your article are just the general anger of the Chinese people at the unfavorable world at that time. Most of the things you write are just some mindless cool points that cannot stand thinking and are inconsistent. Moreover, you have not written about the "light" that the protagonist believes in.

There are indeed remarkable things about this book. What moved me the most was the love between Wu Song and Diao Chan. In order to save Wang Mang, Zhang Fei did not hesitate to turn against his sworn brother, the Golden Retriever Lion King Xie Xun. Especially when I read that Guo Jing gave up his position as the leader of the Sun Moon God Cult and wandered around the world with the gentleman Yue Buqun, it made me cry.

Qidian doesn't have many books with good content now.

A rich second-generation South Korean chaebol mortgaged his property to the bank for 10 million won, which is Korean won! Not RMB. So I don't know if the author has any misunderstanding about the won or the rich second generation. 10 Million won is almost equal to 60,000 RMB. The family lives in a villa, and the bodyguards and servants get a good 60,000 RMB. You can get 60,000 RMB without paying a month's salary to those servants. As for mortgage of the villa, I am speechless. I really don't check any information. I just write whatever comes to my mind! This book does not look like the same author as the previous two Hong Kong TV series, and I suspect that the original author sold his account.

It's quite disappointing. It feels like the author changed his mind after writing Hong Kong Variety Show and Chao Lao. He writes about the same thing.

The name of the heroine successfully stopped my desire to read even one chapter. I always think of that so-and-so mother...

It's very retarded. I got a blank card in the lottery that can be used to get any skill. I filled it in as a barista. It's really hypocritical. Just because the protagonist wants to open some rubbish cafe in real life and needs this kind of rubbish skill. Doesn't the author think it's funny? The semi-infinite stream has two hundred chapters and he's still a mortal. Apart from fighting and shooting, he has no other skills. He doesn't seize the opportunity to strengthen himself. I don't ask you to fill in the high-end operation of photographic memory. One skill can be exchanged for hundreds. It would be good for you to develop some advanced skills to stretch your upper limit. Ah, it would be funny to use this rubbish barista skill. I am a literary patient. I have a net worth of tens of millions of RMB, but I can still often buy gold bars from other worlds. Does it matter whether this shabby cafe makes money or not? I have bought all the shops. One month. You only have to pay for water, electricity, labor and materials, and you don't have to pay rent. There is no financial pressure. Just hire two people to do the work and show your face when you have time. Do you still expect a broken cafe to make a lot of money? If you really want to make money, you won't open a cafe.

The first novel with such a dense concentration of poisonous points

I haven't even finished reading the three golden chapters. The stone I hit the enemy with turned into bricks in a second. You said that you, an ordinary person, stoned two secret agents armed with firearms. I have nothing to say. I just regard you as lucky. However, I really can't stand it when the stone in your hand suddenly turns into a brick...

Damn it, this is a bad ending. Author, you failed me. I didn't even know this was the end of the book.

In Chapter 63, the author forgot about the protagonist's talent for predicting danger, and wrote it blindly.

After reading the first three chapters, I can only say that the author's writing is good, but his layout skills are poor, but he insists on showing off. . . .