Positive Energy in the Rift

To be honest, there is nothing to write in the review of this novel, because there is no problem with the work itself, and the behavior of the protagonist is not controversial. The writing is very good, it is still a familiar setting, and it is an e-sports novel that follows the light comedy route. It is difficult to find any faults in the work, but again, there is nothing particularly outstanding. As a light comedy novel, it has a lot of funny elements, but in most cases it just stays at jokes. There is no innovation, and it is only funny for the sake of being funny. The effect is only to make people laugh, but it cannot leave anything behind. Secondly, as an online game e-sports novel, the author's writing style is very good. At least I, who don't play League of Legends, can read it with gusto. Some passionate scenes are also vividly depicted, including the game between the opponents, the passionate commentary, and the flying barrage. The interspersion is very reasonable, and the layout is impeccable. But the novel is still a little tepid, which is a pity. Therefore, for a novel, it is not enough just to handle the plot properly and have a reasonable layout. The soul of the novel is the characters. Now we can easily see that the main line of this novel is comedy, interspersed with exciting e-sports operations and interactions with teammates, opponents, family and friends. Pure comedy cannot reach the true height. Mr. Lu Xun once said: "Comedy is tearing apart worthless things for people to watch." It is difficult for us to define whether something has value or not, but what you write should be different from just making people laugh. If it just makes people laugh, it is a worthless thing. If you can't leave anything in people's hearts, then this novel can't be left in readers' hearts either. Similarly, the protagonist of the novel should also need to grow up. He should not just go along with the flow. It is not that smooth sailing is impossible, but there is a lack of change, a lack of contrast, and a lack of gaps. You have to know that everything in this world is created by gaps. With the difference between high and low, water can flow thousands of miles. The same is true for works. Over time, it can only become a pool of stagnant water. If the protagonist becomes a pool of stagnant water, the work will become less and less attractive to people. I don't know where the author wants to go. If he just wants to write some simple comedy, you can pretend that I didn't say anything. But if a novel wants to be better, it must create good characters. In most cases, the characters in novels can be summarized by a few labels. Real people are not like this, and real life is not only like this. Although art is higher than life, it should also come from life. Characters that are too one-sided will only make people lack a sense of substitution, even if it is just one or a few emotions. When the sense of substitution disappears, people will lose the desire to continue chasing. I am not badmouthing this novel, I just think the author can write it better, break through the existing model, make the characters more vivid and appealing, and allow them to grow better. The above is just my personal opinion, welcome to discuss, don't like to criticize. (This is my third book review. It would be outrageous if it was too heavy. I feel that it is really difficult to write a book review for this novel. If you are interested, you can read my other two book reviews.)

A LoL novice's thoughts after reading the new book "Canyon Positive Energy" Hello everyone, long time no see First of all, let me summarize the full text: Midnight's new book is quite nice. The rest of the long article has no key points. If you don't have the patience, you can stop reading and just read the book or ➕collect it. Don't miss out on good books. Please support and vote for them. Then I started talking nonsense. I have been busy with graduation and employment matters for a while recently, and I haven't read the Qidian book for more than half a year. I am single and have no date during the Mid-Autumn Festival, a legal holiday. I am so idle and it hurts. I saw the link to the new book posted by Midnight in the book club, and I couldn't help but click on it out of curiosity. It only took two or three hours to read this book. My reading speed is probably too slow for you guys who have read a lot of books. It's just that there are too few seedlings that need care in this book! ! ! After reading it, I am still a little bit unsatisfied. I couldn't bear it any longer, so I went back to the Qidian app again. (I've accumulated a lot of 98k and haven't read it yet. I felt a little guilty because I couldn't stand it, but I still have to call for positive energy. Hahaha. Actually, I am a League of Legends player. I am a noob, my knowledge is very limited, I have only heard some ridiculous comments like asking children to rob elementary school monks. The only professional lol game I watched in full happened to be the one where IG won the championship. I couldn't see any details of the players' fancy moves, I only knew about the game. Shy beats four, I'm so excited for such a beautiful little guy, but I don't even know how to praise my rainbow fart, I can only scream with stars in my eyes that he's so handsome ˃̶ ꒳ ˂̶. In the book Positive Energy, because I didn't understand the barriers of the game, I could understand some of them from the perspective of King of Glory, but in fact, I couldn't imagine the details of the operation, so when I read the article, I still said: I know that Brother Feng showed off, but I don't know how he showed off. I feel that the operation pictures restored through the description of Midnight will be very good. The show is very exciting. Book lovers who know games in this aspect should feel more passion and tension. Hey, I seem to be at a loss┐(─__─)┌ But these small obstacles are insignificant to my overall reading experience. I still enjoy reading it if I don't understand games. So as long as you are interested in this kind of subject matter, it's okay for game newbies to read this book Let's talk about the characters. The new book Zhujiao Feng and Liu Zilang, the protagonist of 98k, are similar in many settings. They are both the most handsome players in the world who have retired from their careers. From the plot point of view, they should be veterans fighting again (ahem, they don't seem to be very old 🙊) and taking the route of two prosperous live broadcasts. Actually, I also want to discuss the similarities and differences between the two, but I always feel like it is a spoiler. Let's experience it for ourselves. The first chapter of the seedling stage, 🈶the blessing of the positive energy system, the passionate battle with many professions and anchors at the top of the canyon, the ranking is full of enthusiasm, and the live broadcast is full of humor. Cheer up for the midnight update, and save more manuscripts, looking forward to ascending to the top of the Peak Emperor Canyon~ My humble opinion is for reference only, it will make you laugh ——Old Auntie Ke Xue

Personally, I think this book has a lot of loopholes, but the plot design looks pretty good. I recently started looking for game books. It seems that the author's writing skills are still good, but the protagonist's halo is a bit brainless. It gives me the feeling that some skill gaps are not detailed enough and not written out. As a result, it feels like the protagonist is playing with infinite energy, which is too brainless. One-on-five is unrealistic. You can't break through the game's limitations. You can move by yourself and let your teammates help you with skills or damage, and then take advantage of other people's skill gaps to step forward and deal damage. Only by being more realistic can you feel more involved In a team game, you are cheating alone, but the others are ordinary people. I feel that it is more vivid to write down some of the personal mistakes of your teammates, and the mistakes in team battles. You can win in a row, but it cannot be without ups and downs. Don't be too brainless and invincible. Write something about the growth of five people together. It is very touching to have blood and tears. The process of reaching the summit by yourself as a team is not as exciting as the process of five people working towards the same goal, which affects people's hearts. For example, during the game, someone stole a house and was dragged in the dragon circle, but two teammates risked their lives to let the other three people return to the city. Everyone is shining. These things are the core.

Can you please write about the system and life aspect? It is a mindless game. It will cause visual fatigue and will be very discouraging. I know it. Please also write down the abilities of the protagonist in detail. In the early stage, I added a danger perception. On the road, I did all kinds of operations to make the world crazy. I didn't give the aura of other aspects and the whole game was speechless. What is the protagonist like before there is no system? Author, you have to have some AC in your mind. Beat the competition or something like that. Don't tell us the settings of this system and ignore it. It seems like the main character should have the same settings. It's very uninvolving.

The book looks pretty good. But here is some advice. There is definitely a strength gap among professional players, but the gap in strength cannot be particularly large. For example, the shy is very powerful, but if it is not placed in Ig, he may not be able to play a big role. Another example is that Uzi is not in rng, maybe his dominance in AD is not so obvious. Each team has its own style. The match between the team's style and the player's style, coupled with strength, should be more important in determining victory or defeat. Brother Fengzi's strength can be set to be very strong, and from the beginning, the author basically described this player's style. Coupled with doinb, this team should be a team with a very own style. But in fact it is not described. Here I would like to mention a book called Full-Time Master. Frankly speaking, this book is not a very favorite genre for me, but it is undeniable that his portrayal of the characters is successful. This book is not just a description, a live broadcast plot, so I think it would be better to strengthen the characterization of other characters, such as those from other teams or some characters from my own team. It may make us feel more involved. Just like everyone has a different personality, each team has a different style, and different people will support different teams. If the portrayal is successful in this regard, I believe that at least everyone will find a team they like. It doesn't mean that the protagonist must win, as long as he has a brilliant performance at the critical moment, I believe it is enough to prove his strength. Then the appropriate ups and downs of the plot should be able to better express the charm of e-sports. Because judging from the subject matter of this book, the reading audience of this book should be relatively fixed. As for making jokes, I don't particularly mind. But moderation can be considered. I liked the author's last book very much because the style of the whole book made people feel quite relaxed. So if the author is willing to research some happy jokes that make readers feel relaxed, I think there is still a lot to be done. Because the last few chapters really don't feel right when I read them. . It's reasonable. Although it may be a personal feeling, I still have two complaints. You hope the author can see it.

What did RNG hit in the end? The last choice is Lulu. If paired with ez, wouldn't it be better to choose Morgana? Ez is not a strong AD. When the first wave of wine barrels comes to capture, if he assists Morgana, he will not die. Also, the mid laner is so profitable (I don't even want to say his name), but Lang Xing, who was trained by the military every time he was in the group stage, has always been the best. Alas, I have mixed feelings...

This book is more interesting before starting a career. There is no need to keep winning streak after playing a career. Although it is a novel, it can't be too buggy. If you want to read it for free, please give it some thought after reading it.

Just one update during the day. You are playing with me. Did you see what I have in my hand? My monthly ticket is gone. Tear it up.

Does this book have a female protagonist? I've seen more than 300 chapters and there's still no heroine. I just keep competing. It's a bit monotonous.

1. God's perspective takes up too much space Since I wrote about Brother Feng joining the team and starting the game, many consecutive chapters have been described from God's perspective, which makes it difficult for people to have a sense of substitution. Therefore, even though there are many words, it gives people a feeling of being piled up, and they just want to finish it quickly. It can be seen that the author is trying to highlight the strength of Brother Feng from the bench to the real top laner by describing the entire game in detail. However, due to the lack of sense of substitution, the word count feels like a waste. I personally like the first few chapters the most, especially the description of "Brother Feng is so excited", which gives people the feeling of a counterattack and a slap in the face. Although these chapters have shown that Brother Feng is very popular, this is something we have known for a long time. By "slapping him in the face" with a little face-to-face like this, we really can't arouse any interest. 2. The system is "invisible" In these chapters, I have hardly seen the shadow of the system. Where are the points earned? Can't you change some more skills? No new tasks released? Personally, I prefer the setting of System ➕ Time Travel. The absence of these chapters makes me feel less satisfied. 3. The team characters are one-sided and thin If the author wants to focus on the team, league, etc., The portrayal of the basic team members is too thin, making people unable to feel the camaraderie of teammates, and there is no suspense about the other top laner used to slap the face. I think it is not enough to support the rise of the team in the future and defeat the Korean team, etc. Personal suggestion: Return to Brother Feng's perspective more often, show more of Brother Feng's technical aspects and psychological activities, and increase system content. I hope the author writes better and better, I sincerely ❤

To be honest, what I thought from the very beginning: This person is so cool, he can still operate like this, this person is so awesome. By now I just want to see when the main character gets killed once or twice. It doesn't matter if one person is not killed in the lane, but if several people are together and they are not killed, sometimes it feels outrageous. Moreover, when the protagonist dies, the author sometimes mentions it in one stroke, hoping to describe this scene in more detail. Maybe it's aesthetic fatigue, but the author can still use memes. I came here from 1998, mainly because the author's sister is so awesome, but it's a pity that this book doesn't have much plot. Big cheers for the author↖(^ω^)↗

970,000 Words require nearly 400 chapters 😥

Xu eats dog meat v himself Xu Fangfang

Several friends recommended this book to me, saying it was a magical book. However, the first chapter was awkward. I had to endure it and read on, but the result was surprisingly good. It's just that the daily content is awkward and boring~

FGNB? Bucket, the team will return soon?

🤓Trying to trade three monthly passes🤓🤓🤓

Guys, did I do the right thing? Positive energy, guys.

I just saw the MSI group stage. Why did we only play KT once in the double round-robin bo1 format? Or is the 2017 mid-season tournament different?

As soon as Li Xiufeng turned on the live broadcast, the water friends smiled at him. There was a barrage directed at him saying: "The founder of ad Nicole is online." Li Xiufeng ignored him and said in the live broadcast, today we will continue to talk about the invincibility of the top laner." Then he talked about the wonderful effect of armor piercing. They deliberately yelled: "Feng Gou must have been beaten to autism, and I can't even see you playing with unlimited firepower." Li Xiufeng opened his eyes and said, "How can you accuse someone of innocence out of thin air..." "What innocence? I saw you playing Nico with unlimited firepower, 3-14, hanging and beating" Li Xiufeng's face turned red, and the veins on his forehead popped out. He argued: "Unlimited firepower does not count as strength... A hero is strong... His skills are cooled down. Can he survive the fight?" Then there were some difficult words, such as "Nicole should use AD", "Stun invincible and invisible", "Be able to fight and escape", which caused everyone to burst into laughter, and the live broadcast room was filled with happy air.

Love it, love it. The author said he would update us in the afternoon, which is from 2 o'clock to 5 o'clock, and it is now 11 o'clock. Therefore, it is deduced that the author is in a country between the West District 1 and the East District 2. He is so far away that he has not forgotten us book friends. He is really a good author in China. I gave him this monthly pass. (Next time you say it's in the afternoon, I'll watch it in the evening. If you say it's still in the evening, I'll watch it after I wake up the next day.) 🤝🤝🤝

2019 Global Finals MV "Nirvana" ("Phoenix") Where do you want to go? Going forward is Nirvana or backward is mediocrity. The immortal firebird spreads its wings and creates a new dynasty! Bury your inner demons, break free from the shackles of restraint, the immortal firebird, announce his rebirth to the world. Cut off your doubts and face the future! Zi Ye is awesome. He predicted the theme song of the S9 Global Finals in advance. Don't you think about adding more chapters?

Yanzu, you still can't change the habit of reading the comment section.

I started following the first book. The chicken-eating book was not my favorite subject. When I returned to lol, the writing style was still so cool.

I'll just say two sentences. Very good. Really short. I have finished speaking, who is in favor and who is against?

If Taobo goes on the road and there's Brother Fengzi, wouldn't it be a success? From last year when Brother Feng called the Knicks, I knew that this author was a prophet.

I first read this book because I read 98K, but it suddenly stopped reading. I followed the author to this book. I still like the style. Although I don't play LoL, I have played Dota, Dota2 and King of Glory. In addition, I have read some LoL novels, such as Who to Fight, so I can generally understand it. And I just finished watching this year's S game a while ago, and I am a little familiar with some common heroes in the game. Plus I have GDX among my teammates, so it doesn't seem to be difficult. Looking forward to adding more after the wedding! I look forward to Xiaoyao appearing and want to watch yygq!

I'm convinced of this fragment. It's a fairy fragment. Coach, I want to learn this. I've already given you the money. If you don't teach me, your ticket will be gone. ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )

I wrote two chapters with 13,000 words. I'll write it like this when it's published later. Don't stop writing it at the end and give me 2,000 words for one chapter.

Event name: Double Happiness Event time: 10.18-10.24 Activity plan: I believe that all book friends are hardcore alliance players. Now we invite all book friends to share their favorite heroes in the canyon, and attach the reasons why you like this hero. Share it with everyone and enjoy double happiness! Event requirements: 1. Participants must have apprentices (500 fan points) and above 2. Participants must reply to this post to facilitate statistics Event rewards: All participants share 36,000 points Note: 1. Incomplete description No reward will be given 2. You can write multiple entries, but only one will win in the end 3. After the event, the points will be distributed within three working days 4. The final interpretation right of this event belongs to the "Canyon Positive Energy" Book Friends Circle Management Association ​

UZI retired