My Rebirth Is Different

I'm really not happy about it. The novel is crappy. In order to open a harem, one of the heroines' whole family was killed. With a net worth of several million in the early stage and only a piece of land, we built the largest supermarket in the city and it only took two months. I want to say that if you build a vegetable market, you only need 1 million, but if you build a large supermarket, a few million is enough? And if you want to build a big supermarket in two months, what do you think? Did the gods help you build it? In the mid-term, as a company CEO, I was very loyal. He only has 400 million in cash. Year-end bonuses for employees can reach over a billion. I can only say nb. The above are only a small part of what is unreasonable.

The old book sucked, and the new book's results will also be bad, it deserves it!

You are brainless and have no logic. You should pretend to be 13, and give up decisively in the middle of the chase. The more you look at it, the more awkward it becomes. . . .

I want to talk about the perspective of the little characters. In fact, before the protagonist goes to college, I personally think that the writing section of the book, including song writing, etc., Is very brilliant. A lot of pen and ink are used to describe the actions of the protagonist, and the readers have a sense of involvement and feel very relaxed. I think it's easy for rebirth novels to be eye-catching in terms of emotions, but whether it's Wu Xiu (especially the part where her parents died, she didn't handle it very well), this kind of plot is not flattering to write. The most important thing is that there is no conflict between the protagonist and her parents. It seems a bit abrupt below), or Zhou Mengqi, I think it is not satisfactory. To be honest, I think the portrayal of the classmate named Deng (can't remember the name) who suffers from hepatitis B is quite good. I personally think it is better than the heroine 😥 But since I started in college, I felt that the plot progress was a bit too slow. I think it was mainly due to the introduction of several minor characters' perspectives. It's not that the perspective of a minor character is bad, nor is it unsatisfactory. Personally, I think Banana is handled particularly well in The Son-in-Law, but I feel like it wasn't well written in this book. There seem to be four in my mind, too many. One is Lao Liu. What an ordinary investor sees is the surface of the stock market after all. Anyway, I don't see any side that can express how strategizing the protagonist is, and I have no sense of involvement at all. He is not even a minor supporting character (he earns What can you do if you don't make money?) The second one is the rich second generation. I think it's good to introduce his father in that paragraph, but there is really no need to compare it with the main character by going to school. Just describe the main character directly. Why do you give so much ink to a supporting character who is just an ordinary school student? The third one is Xiaoli's family. Her mother made me feel like a country bumpkin from the countryside, which only made me feel disgusted when reading it. But I think this time the story is well cut, and there is nothing wrong with it overall. The fourth one is a comparison between two singers. The writing is too detailed, and there are too many psychological games in various languages. It is unnecessary and seems lengthy. Generally speaking, in the protagonist's initial business stage, the perspectives of small characters were cut in too frequently, covering up the protagonist's light. The last thing I don't want to complain about is advertising cans. I think a well-known person advertising an ordinary can is like an A-list celebrity advertising washing powder - losing weight.

All orders are made before the limited exemption. Author, you know what I mean.

You can understand it even if it's just right, and even if it's not finished, you can still confidently say that readers don't have to spend any money to do it. Internet writing is not a new thing. After so many years, why is there no environment? Don't you know who condones piracy?

Isn't that ridiculous? You clearly said you should write well, but then you ended up messing up just to make ends meet? ? ? Who dares to pursue your book if you do this? Are you worthy of those readers who have fully subscribed? My senior brother is also playing dual-open mode, and he is not as playful as you.

The author overlooked one point, why is the protagonist so rich and doesn't even have a security system around him? Is the protagonist so heartless? The common man was angry, but blood spattered ten steps!

Old books are appendix, new books are poisonous. The author just ran out of money, so it's all gone

The author insists on making money, and readers have no way to stop him. They can only block him. I regret not reading the pirated version. It is really not worth supporting.