Beginning with the Art of Spirit Communication

There's been a lot of criticism lately, so let me explain. I'm a new author, my writing skills are lacking, my control over the plot is lacking, basically I'm lacking in everything. The writing isn't very good; please feel free to offer suggestions. The author will take all reasonable feedback into consideration.

The path of cultivation is extremely dangerous. It is unwise to bring a fox spirit back to the Taoist temple based on just a few words. With the protagonist's current mental impairment, how can he cope with the path of cultivation ahead?

I didn't quite understand the part about the protagonist becoming an apprentice. He clearly possessed an unparalleled inheritance, yet he chose to become an apprentice for something that was practically useless.

I don't think it's necessary to portray the protagonist as overly compassionate. The psychological descriptions in the scene with the dragon traversing water felt a bit excessive. Humanity expands rapidly wherever it goes, and monsters seeking survival inevitably clash with humans.

I feel really uncomfortable reading this. In the earlier chapters, the author mentioned being criticized, and I thought people were just being nitpicky. Now, after reading the latest chapter, I can't help but curse too. You're just a lowly cultivator who hasn't even become an immortal!

Please recommend books to this thread. Fellow writers, writing is hard work, but to keep my book review section clean, all book recommendations from outside sources will be deleted!

Why do you, an immortal, always pity mortals? Cultivating immortality requires abandoning the seven emotions and six desires.

I believe many people might not want to read the book list recommendation below after seeing the comments. Let me explain: the weasel asked for silence because if the protagonist hadn't given in, the whole book might have ended. Also, the part about the protagonist becoming an apprentice of a mortal isn't actually about that; you can check the details.

I've only read up to chapter nineteen, so let me briefly point out some flaws. First, the weasel asking for a verbal seal is a bit abrupt, and the protagonist's behavior is rather bland, which doesn't fit his character. Second, the apprenticeship involves the Heavenly and Earthly Fiends, yet there's no apparent need or desire for it. Why seek an apprenticeship over a simple question?

Does the author have a misunderstanding about children in ancient times? Could a girl of thirteen or fourteen be considered a child? In ancient times, she would have been an adult woman, eligible to marry.