I Rose to Power After Being Struck by Lightning

Chronic poison! It's good that the male protagonist can share his spiritual energy, and it's also good if he wants to become the boss behind the scenes. There was nothing toxic in the early stage, but it collapsed in the mid-term. The biggest problem lies in his girlfriend. I think it is normal for a man to pamper his woman. It is also normal for a man to run over to her immediately when he knows that she is in danger. This is not licking, this is the responsibility that a man should have. But could you please stop writing about this woman in such a cumbersome way? Knowing that a man is going to do something: Ah no, I want to be with you. Knowing that what men do is a bit dangerous: if we die, we will die together. And what about the male protagonist? Doesn't he know what's going on? He knows! But he felt that he was safer around him, so he took his girlfriend and hid aside. I can understand, really, I can understand. Then don't separate from the main force in the first place. You don't plan to contribute anyway, right? As a result, there was a problem with the large army. You went to the police station and failed to help. You didn't plan to go to the center of the battlefield. I came to see how you turned the tide and how you acted domineeringly. As a result, you don't protect everyone here, and you don't go into battle to kill the enemy over there. By the end, I was on the edge of being OB, and I still felt a full sense of accomplishment. Oh, you are the boss behind the scenes, so you won't come forward. Then can you give me some instructions? All the actions of the monsters are spontaneous and have nothing to do with you! To play auto chess, the players have to place their positions first, okay? What are you doing? You are a waste.

This Yang Jun seemed to have a high IQ when he appeared in the early stage, but when he started to calculate this and that, he felt like he was straight up. He is the kind of person who doesn't have that IQ and insists on making plans. His intelligence sources are secretive. If he has an advantage, he just wants to use pig brains to waste his money? Is it still a secret? He dares to plot against the protagonist when he regards him as a saint. He is so powerful at plotting against a saint. I feel like this Yang Jun is either a reborn person or a secondary character who regards himself as the protagonist, or a character promoted to advance the plot? Besides. The author hurry up and put it on the shelves! ! ! Short, small and a little watery. . . .

I don't understand why the protagonist is not allowed to cooperate with the country, let alone what will lead to research. The definition of country in the novel completely depends on the author.

In the novel, the country's side is completely retarded. In other behind-the-scenes novels, nine points of irrefutable evidence are created, leaving the country to figure out the last point. As a result, here, the protagonist gave half of the unclear evidence, leaving the country to figure out the rest. Intelligence analysis is most afraid of subjective assumptions, and it feels like the country is completely treated as a fool.

A book that was banned a few years ago has been republished again. I really don't want to give up! !

Let me tell you what I think about this book: First of all, let me talk about the advantages. I think the biggest advantage of this book is the creative setting. Runes can create aura in the soulless world. The protagonist also creates monsters through aura. There are many kinds of runes, but only two types have been found now, which play such a big role. The second is that the character's IQ is considered online. Why do I say "approximately"? Because the official IQ is not qualified, because no matter what the author's guesses, the ideas are all come up with by Colonel Yang. At first I thought it was good, but later I found a big problem, the author He told all the official guesses about the protagonist, the demon clan and You, and let it be known as the guesses. He also told all the thoughts that had a little bit of brainpower as Colonel Yang's thoughts. Many of the ideas can be guessed by those of us who like to read novels. Why is it that only Colonel Yang can guess the official ones? Are others trash? Also, it's best to omit the official thought process and just mention it later. It's embarrassing for us if you write it down directly. Don't you think it's unfair and unnecessary for the author to write down every official meeting for us? I think the following four points are very important for novels to become popular: writing style, setting (realm setting, cheat setting, background setting, etc.), Whether the character's IQ is online, and the most important thing is the cool point. And I think this book has not been put on the shelves until now because it is very fun. Chaos, I read a lot of novels, and I found that as long as they are interesting, the writing is a little readable, and the main line is clear, it is easy to put it on the shelves. Your writing is not bad and the main line is clear. The novels that have been put on the shelves now should be interesting and confusing, and there are very few. The editor is optimistic about you because your setting is good. You can take a look at your book to see if there are many places in your book that you have cut off when you are about to get better, or you have handled some cool spots poorly and it seems that you are not happy at all. Originally, you should have been "high energy from the front" as soon as it was put on the shelf. In just a few chapters, you wrote that humans can't defend You's attack. The monsters and You fight are inseparable. Then You uses the backhand and the monsters can't resist it. The protagonist's highlight shot must be consistent. In line with human speculation about the protagonist as a "saint", the protagonist must be quick and powerful, and he must pretend to be powerful. Write these ten or twenty chapters. Even if you can't write it today, you must write the protagonist's appearance at the end of the chapter (you should also know that this is called a chapter break). Don't think this is very cliché, but readers like it. You can see which of the novels that are good at pretending to be awesome has poor results, even if their plots are cliche.

Well, there are only eleven updates on the shelves, which is too little. Diligent authors usually become popular quickly. If you want to be popular, you'd better have fifty updates on the shelves, and then five updates every day. This is my experience after reading more than ten books recently. Of course, your content must be good and it must be enjoyable to read.

I was confused by the recent chapters of Liar. I just became a saint and raised my style. It took so many chapters to write a liar. I lost all my strength in the moment of water. Others first suppressed and then raised. You are rising to the sky. Then you stepped on the mud and wrote. You knew that the liar would make trouble at the wedding, but you didn't resolve it all one day in advance. It's not like this to create conflicts. As long as the liar appears at the wedding, no matter how perfect you handle it in the end, your wedding will be a failure.

The novel started out quite interesting, but then it became more and more fantasy-like. Maybe it's because I've read too many hard science fiction novels. I prefer the protagonist to lead the evolution of the overall technology and ideology of humans and monsters, the improvement of social systems, the integration of races, the exploration of planets, and the exploration of alien planes. At present, the protagonist is slowly tricking and tricking the master into something that is extremely boring. This kind of routine has been written in a novel a long time ago, and it is more interesting than this novel.

The plot is okay, but the character of the protagonist is a bit baffling. I mentioned earlier that the protagonist's father and grandfather sacrificed themselves for this land, and then how the protagonist loves this land. The protagonist in the back acts but always hides it and does not communicate formally with the country. Does the protagonist think that his own wisdom can compare with the wisdom of the country? Don't the protagonist know that joining the country is the way to maximize his abilities? Don't the protagonist know that this is a war between Blue Star and the Dark World, and that every time he delays here, there will be more sacrifices? Especially the way the protagonist creates and expands the demon clan to protect humans is simply baffling. In any case, these are two different races. Doing this will cause a lot of troubles. Didn't the protagonist think of it?