Building the Pirate World

It's well written. It's the first time I've seen such a pirate article. Come on, the author. Please give me 500 to support it. If it's published, I'll order it all.

How to say it? Because few people read it, I thought about it and decided to revise it all directly. Therefore, I have to start over, and the first chapter has been revised! Thank you for your support🙂!

Can you add some semen 😁 I want to experience what it feels like 🪖

I have lost interest since the chapter of rescuing Ace. All the characters have changed their personalities, and Ace must die. If not, a new wave of pirates will come out to do evil.

Looking forward to the author's next book establishing a republic in Dragon Ball. PS: What if we set the time point 300 years ago, when the Big Devil Piccolo was in rebellion, and then developed black technologies, such as the positron city-breaking cannon, GN particles, etc. In Gundam, or the development of super powers in Academy City, Devil Fruit, magic, soul, quantum technology, intelligent life, human gene development and cell evolution, space manufacturing and time jump, etc., Just like Dr. Chen in a certain novel developed it, what would happen 🤫. Of course there are still things I haven't thought of, I'll add them when I think of them 😁

The gap is too big. And according to the setting of One Piece, the navy cannot interfere with the affairs of the nobles of the participating countries. Not to mention a king.

The writing is very similar to Naruto, but I think the author did not distinguish the difference between Naruto and pirates. No matter how bad the person in Naruto is, he is for peace, so Obito is not easy to clean up. However, in the last book, Obito had no chance to become a black man, so the protagonist accepted it. One Piece is a scumbag. Death like Aaron 100 times is not too much. You still have to accept it, so forget it. You have written n chapters. Even if it is red, not everyone can be reformed. Where can the death penalty come from? Forget it, I won't read it anymore, I look forward to the author's next book.

I'm about to give up on the book. I originally watched the main character push through everything, but now I can't see what's so exciting about the book. It's boring and uninteresting.

As a new reader of this book, I think it is necessary to say a few words. First of all, I have only seen the first few dozen chapters. Some of the contents are not fully summarized. Please don't criticize me First of all, let's talk about the fishmen. In fact, I am quite I like the content of reforming evil, but because the author wants to focus on describing fish-men, he neglected Nami, the protagonist of this incident. I can't say neglected, but he was the protagonist of other books, and one thing he would not do is not help Nami get justice. Why? Because the protagonist needs the ability of a fishman, this book has some political elements in it. I am not saying that it alludes to the country, but it has political practices in it. I can only say that those who only want to watch blood or farming are advised to enter with caution Let's talk about Colonel Mouse, in fact I really hate this kind of person who is in an official position but preys on the common people. When other authors wrote about him, they would write him off or put him in jail, but the author did not, because this person has value and seems to want to be promoted. It can only be said that interests with political factors come first. As for the method, I don't know if the author has written him to death, I haven't seen it yet In fact, I think Nami should call the fishman and admit her mistake in front of her, or give Nami a gun and let her make her own choice, but this seems a bit old-fashioned, and This is just a personal opinion. Let's see how the author writes it To sum up, this book is the kind of book where interests come first, which is the protagonist's approach. There may be more or less political ideas in it. This book is not suitable for people who only want to read passionate books.

Have you ever considered the issue of heavenly gold¿ When you take over the Kingdom of Goa, you must offer gold from heaven. If you offer it, it will be a huge burden. If you don't offer it, you will be kicked out of the country. Has the author ever thought about this issue?