I Have a Demonic Skill

Let me say this here. Those who want to invest, please don't invest anymore. Those who don't like it, please don't read it. I think I mentioned around chapters 20 or 30 that this book was only featured twice on Twitter, and it flopped from beginning to end. It was just used for practice writing. It's unlikely to be published on a formal sales platform. Maintaining one update a day and giving it an ending is its last hope. 😥

The biggest problem with this book is that it detaches itself from its followers to go on adventures on its own. A book about developing followers and building a home has been ruined by your own writing. If it had continued for the first few chapters, it would have been a decent book, if not a masterpiece. But then you had to add unnecessary drama, and incorporating several genres into one book is not something an average person can handle.

The author writes too sparingly, resulting in frequent and disjointed reading. For example, in chapter 51, the previous chapter was filled with fighting, and the next chapter is completely different. If you're not paying close attention, you're left confused, constantly wondering if the chapter was censored.

Why not continue writing in the same style as before? Has the author changed? The writing after age 30 is really bad.

It's a really good book, but the title isn't very appealing. I probably would have missed it if I hadn't been looking for something to read.

The subject matter is quite good, but I think it's a real shame that the author used it to write a lighthearted novel.

The book looks alright, but these grades are unacceptable.

Let's give this book a break; everyone should vote if they have any, the current performance is too poor.

The title and the main character's abilities are mismatched, creating a sense of incongruity that makes it awkward to watch.

The author should revise this; use your imagination and avoid overly clichéd plots, like when you can't beat someone and then suddenly become demonic and subdue them. Or it's like someone begging you and the system suddenly detects and you can be resurrected—that's awkward and slightly toxic. Let me first explain the criteria for system corruption.