Godfather’s Here, the Ultimate Sworn Father

The protagonist is already an old man, and you still give him a plot involving a woman who's been poisoned—it's practically toxic! Just kill me already!

After reading over thirty chapters, I've offended three groups of people. Well, I didn't kill a single one. My adopted son said he'd recruited quite a few, including some from the imperial court, but I haven't used any of them. Whenever there's trouble, I have to handle it myself. Even if I could handle it myself, I still can't resolve things; I'm incompetent but have a huge addiction.

Attention readers! The whole story about godchildren is just a gimmick. It's a bait and switch. The actual content is a fantasy martial arts story with an old man as the protagonist, a typical overpowered hero. The fact that he is an elderly scholar, a divine doctor, and has adopted sons and daughters is just a setting, a background character, and has no use for the plot.

I'm here to see you accept sons and daughters, not to see you fight and kill.

There are too many flaws. If he's supposed to be living in seclusion, why does he still take in adopted sons, open a clinic, and participate in worldly affairs? It's contradictory. He opened a celestial court with innate divine powers, took in so many powerful adopted sons, why not just teach them some decent martial arts? Instead, he practices Iron Shirt himself. He's insane. There are many other contradictions and illogical points, which I won't go into detail about.

The writing is confusing. Does the rest of the text have anything to do with the title? Readers who clicked on the title are totally lost.

If you choose an unpopular route with an old man as the protagonist, you should at least write a good character about him. Instead, you write him as a reckless idiot who shamelessly engages in ambiguous relationships. Do you think readers like an old man version of a domineering protagonist? You're pleasing neither side.

The disconnect between the characters was absolutely jarring. The protagonist didn't act like an elderly person; instead, he resembled a trendy young man. The difference in their social standing was too great. I could clearly feel uncomfortable just from the martial arts techniques described. If it were a respected elder, they wouldn't directly say they were interested.

After reading dozens of chapters, I've seen the author offend a ton of characters, almost killing them every time, yet never actually killing anyone—either they're rescued or some unexpected event occurs. The author's thought process is truly unique! Amazing!

With so many adopted sons and daughters, many of whom are said to be officials, why not use them? Let them target the Song family. We can't always be the ones leading the charge. What's the point of having so many sons and daughters?